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2merendinoemiliano
Funny and nice introduction of Arturia,i didn't know about her alter ego and i liked Ainz's introspection,i can't wait to see how these two forces will clash. Keep up the good work and see you soon.
2merendinoemilianoFunny and nice introduction of Arturia,i didn't know about her alter ego and i liked Ainz's introspection,i can't wait to see how these two forces will clash. Keep up the good work and see you soon.
8/4/2018 c19 1YeTianshi
Great chapter :D
I do wonder if Shirou can summon more than one heroic spirit though?
As powerful as Shirou may be, it seems unlikely for him and Artoria alone to be able to take on the entirety of Nazarick. Not unless the two are REALLY broken xD (which I wouldn't mind, I love OP characters anyway)
Anyway, it was a great chapter, I'll be looking forward to the next one.
1YeTianshiGreat chapter :D
I do wonder if Shirou can summon more than one heroic spirit though?
As powerful as Shirou may be, it seems unlikely for him and Artoria alone to be able to take on the entirety of Nazarick. Not unless the two are REALLY broken xD (which I wouldn't mind, I love OP characters anyway)
Anyway, it was a great chapter, I'll be looking forward to the next one.
8/3/2018 c19 Peroroncino
as much as I like Ainz ..this time around I think I'll be cheering for Shirou Emiya ...no Hard feelings ..just because the guy is OP
as much as I like Ainz ..this time around I think I'll be cheering for Shirou Emiya ...no Hard feelings ..just because the guy is OP
8/4/2018 c19 14Anon-Echo98
Aaah, about time the Bone-daddy and Shirou started to have more interactions.
I wonder how Ainz'll react when/if Shirou points out that he's basically trying to take over the world, or when Ainz sees Shirou with a Servant.
14Anon-Echo98Aaah, about time the Bone-daddy and Shirou started to have more interactions.
I wonder how Ainz'll react when/if Shirou points out that he's basically trying to take over the world, or when Ainz sees Shirou with a Servant.
8/3/2018 c19 5Gilgamesh The King of Heroes
Gilgamesh as a raid boss? What? How does he exist in Yggdrasil? This is the first time he's even mentioned in this fic. The only mention of him being in Yggdrasil as a raid boss is in another crossover fic started by Parcasious where Shirou recreated him. This seems rather suspicious.
5Gilgamesh The King of HeroesGilgamesh as a raid boss? What? How does he exist in Yggdrasil? This is the first time he's even mentioned in this fic. The only mention of him being in Yggdrasil as a raid boss is in another crossover fic started by Parcasious where Shirou recreated him. This seems rather suspicious.
8/3/2018 c19 Server lock
Oh wow arturia is that you, (sarcasm.) this might be the end of my romp in this fic. There’s the realm of plausibility then theirs this hogwash. People seem to be jumping on ainz t crossover bandwagon recently. I thought this fic would be different in how it approached it but it ended up with artoria being there like all the others.
Not that’s it’s necessarily a bad thing, but they really had the support there for it. This one comes out of left field and sucker punches you. 19 chapters in already and artoria appears.
Oh wow arturia is that you, (sarcasm.) this might be the end of my romp in this fic. There’s the realm of plausibility then theirs this hogwash. People seem to be jumping on ainz t crossover bandwagon recently. I thought this fic would be different in how it approached it but it ended up with artoria being there like all the others.
Not that’s it’s necessarily a bad thing, but they really had the support there for it. This one comes out of left field and sucker punches you. 19 chapters in already and artoria appears.
8/3/2018 c19 6Lightningblade49
Wow things looking up for shirou having removed one of the major forces of ainz from the picture the Pleiades, kind want to see Shirou talk to one of them and see what they are thinking if they are not already dead.
Now he has arturia as backup...ontop of blue I think Shirou could potentially now take on Ainz group.
A bounty of Shirou from Ainz, not sure that is a smart decision that will most definitely get Shirou's attention
6Lightningblade49Wow things looking up for shirou having removed one of the major forces of ainz from the picture the Pleiades, kind want to see Shirou talk to one of them and see what they are thinking if they are not already dead.
Now he has arturia as backup...ontop of blue I think Shirou could potentially now take on Ainz group.
A bounty of Shirou from Ainz, not sure that is a smart decision that will most definitely get Shirou's attention
8/1/2018 c18 Kminari
Now I really want to know what they know about the High Human.
Shirou is learning the spells that he bought right?
Now I really want to know what they know about the High Human.
Shirou is learning the spells that he bought right?
8/1/2018 c16 Kminari
This should be a denial: "I would love to say they can recover from that, but that is far from the truth." can-can't
This should be a denial: "I would love to say they can recover from that, but that is far from the truth." can-can't
8/1/2018 c15 Kminari
I love history, I would like to know what is happening in Nazarik but we know that they are not our protagonists.
This paragraph has me confused: "Outside, Clementine saw a plump man. The plump man was neatly attired, and she wore well-tailored clothing. She had a weighty badge..." You change that "plump man" from male to female so many times that I do not know what you're talking about.
I love history, I would like to know what is happening in Nazarik but we know that they are not our protagonists.
This paragraph has me confused: "Outside, Clementine saw a plump man. The plump man was neatly attired, and she wore well-tailored clothing. She had a weighty badge..." You change that "plump man" from male to female so many times that I do not know what you're talking about.