for Fate Overlord (Discontinued)5/12/2018 c17 Laxard
Why not just resurrect them? I don't believe something that punch Alaya in the face as much as Servant's summoning can be included in the game, not even by Zelretch, at least Zelretch alone. He also can't just select candidates to Throne of Heroes. So at best this going to be turning recent dead into empowered spirits, but he is not some advanced necromant class, he just can't do it even if it's just fanfic. On other hand, the different methods of resurrecting has been widespread in Yggdrasil, by items, by rituals, by priest magic.
Also, it's not Death March fanfic so he shall be without character sheet and skill window from the moment Yggdrasil shut down, just like Momonga.
Soo, please, change ending of this chapter, it's just not making a sense in Overlord verse, not it really making a sense in Nasuverse. Shiro really shall resurects them or just save them geroically at the last moment.
Why not just resurrect them? I don't believe something that punch Alaya in the face as much as Servant's summoning can be included in the game, not even by Zelretch, at least Zelretch alone. He also can't just select candidates to Throne of Heroes. So at best this going to be turning recent dead into empowered spirits, but he is not some advanced necromant class, he just can't do it even if it's just fanfic. On other hand, the different methods of resurrecting has been widespread in Yggdrasil, by items, by rituals, by priest magic.
Also, it's not Death March fanfic so he shall be without character sheet and skill window from the moment Yggdrasil shut down, just like Momonga.
Soo, please, change ending of this chapter, it's just not making a sense in Overlord verse, not it really making a sense in Nasuverse. Shiro really shall resurects them or just save them geroically at the last moment.
5/12/2018 c17 
1awardedall
character and skill window ? what the fuck is this ? that shit should be deleted , the story is good , dont make it became some stupid shit op character rpg like those shit isekai novel you hear me author - san ?
1awardedallcharacter and skill window ? what the fuck is this ? that shit should be deleted , the story is good , dont make it became some stupid shit op character rpg like those shit isekai novel you hear me author - san ?
5/11/2018 c12 2VGBlackwing
so true in scenarios like these hard works always beat talent, like a hard working swordsman fighting the talented swordsman the difference is that hard worker is always in tip top shape of becoming stronger while the talented always has a single mindset of thinking that they will always wins and never improve the ability and that is talented ultimate downfall
2VGBlackwingso true in scenarios like these hard works always beat talent, like a hard working swordsman fighting the talented swordsman the difference is that hard worker is always in tip top shape of becoming stronger while the talented always has a single mindset of thinking that they will always wins and never improve the ability and that is talented ultimate downfall
5/11/2018 c17 6Lightningblade49
different so did you have Blue rose go down to Entoma instead or did Ainz or someone else show up early personally I think it would be pretty interesting if Ainz exposed himself in a rage it looked he was going to do that in anime at least and he doesn't really have the same foot hold he had during cannon.
Surprised to get up and see a second chapter, much appreciated :)
6Lightningblade49different so did you have Blue rose go down to Entoma instead or did Ainz or someone else show up early personally I think it would be pretty interesting if Ainz exposed himself in a rage it looked he was going to do that in anime at least and he doesn't really have the same foot hold he had during cannon.
Surprised to get up and see a second chapter, much appreciated :)
5/11/2018 c12 allentey
There must be another solution on showing them no talent can also be strong rather than showing alot of expensive sword and dissapear immediately right ? Because Sword is his origin, and i bet shirou cant teach climb tht magic since his origin probably not a sword. My point is shirou is talented with sword because he is blessed with sword origin.
There must be another solution on showing them no talent can also be strong rather than showing alot of expensive sword and dissapear immediately right ? Because Sword is his origin, and i bet shirou cant teach climb tht magic since his origin probably not a sword. My point is shirou is talented with sword because he is blessed with sword origin.
5/11/2018 c16 Zenchi to zen'n no kami
Parece que shirou se llevara una sorpresa, aunque su personalidad no es la misma ni parecida espero disfrutar capítulos futuros
Parece que shirou se llevara una sorpresa, aunque su personalidad no es la misma ni parecida espero disfrutar capítulos futuros
5/11/2018 c16 Aurain Orimura
I'm looking forward to Nazarick vs Shirou because I don't see many routes other than Shirou killing Entoma violently. Mare could possibly live since he's pretty powerful but he's still a Neutral Evil aligned character. A fight is almost guaranteed so i'm pretty excited.
I'm looking forward to Nazarick vs Shirou because I don't see many routes other than Shirou killing Entoma violently. Mare could possibly live since he's pretty powerful but he's still a Neutral Evil aligned character. A fight is almost guaranteed so i'm pretty excited.
5/11/2018 c16 8Quathis
Well, I wonder if Shirou will meet with other from Nazarick, since he's already killed Shalltear once. Demiurge or Mare may be next. Until next time.
8QuathisWell, I wonder if Shirou will meet with other from Nazarick, since he's already killed Shalltear once. Demiurge or Mare may be next. Until next time.
5/11/2018 c16 2merendinoemiliano
Very good chapter, i can't wait to see this battle and the of luck with writer block, my method when i have it is trying to write forcefully at least a line every day before checking the site for updates. Best of luck with everything.
2merendinoemilianoVery good chapter, i can't wait to see this battle and the of luck with writer block, my method when i have it is trying to write forcefully at least a line every day before checking the site for updates. Best of luck with everything.