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3/5 c15 164Linneagb
Hmmm... s Elena inspired by ELena in one day at a time? Anyway. That's sweet. I'm caught up now. So I can't wait for another chapter.
3/5 c14 Linneagb
Aw. I did not see that one coming but it's a nice add. I do get what Carol would be feeling and then what the others would be feeling and everything. Maybe the one who really is having trouble letting go and realize her little girls are growing up is Carol. although I never thought about that they might know a bit about what Carol felt and did years ago.
3/5 c13 Linneagb
Aw haha. Poor Doug now the girls are teenagers. Never heard of that song before but dancing queen I know- yay. Referring to something Swedish.
3/5 c12 Linneagb
I kept wondering where Tess was. Awwwww. This chapter was just as great as the ones I've already read. I don't have many chapters left to read now but I'm sure they'll be just as perfect.
3/5 c11 Linneagb
Aw. And that's an eleventh perfect chapter. I love how the twins are so different, awww. I love everything about this story- although I might have said that a few times already.
3/5 c10 Linneagb
awwww. When you mentioned this being a whole lot calmer than the last chapter it just seemed so perfect, which it was. And I just love reading about the twins and their birthdays like this. I might have said that already. And yay, the Harry Potter reference at the end- awesome.
3/5 c9 Linneagb
I'm sorry it took me so long to read. I kept on starting this chapter and never finished it. Now when I did, I loved this chapter. Reading about how much fun they had made me want to be there with them.
11/25/2020 c15 27Boris Yeltsin
Loving it. Care for original characters, and such, and cameos from the next generation of kids? Haven't seen ER in years.
8/10/2020 c8 164Linneagb
Awwwww. Loved the beginning and the end especially. Doug is just the best dad to all three daughters. And your sister/ sibling can be both your best friend and your enemy and all at once and I just love it when it comes into a story like this.
8/10/2020 c7 Linneagb
I agree- best lie ever. Parents really do come up with sneaky lies like that. And it was just perfect for something that Doug and Carol would do.
8/10/2020 c6 Linneagb
Hahaha. Of course someone would forget something. I just love your writing and adding that perfect little detail to every single chapter. And there! I didn't know the word lanyard before.
8/10/2020 c5 Linneagb
Awwww. Poor Tess, sick on her birthday- that sucks. But it was just so cute how Kate could just tranaslate what Addison said. And they call Helen Buba? Awwwww.
8/9/2020 c4 Linneagb
Awwww. Another add to the family. How perfect of you. That's just too cute.
8/9/2020 c3 Linneagb
Awwww. For a parent their lives just go by so fast. That's too cute. I wonder what Doug will choose for his job. You just seem to get them perfectly in character.
8/9/2020 c2 Linneagb
Awwwww. I just love this relationship between Mark and Elizabeth and Doug and Carole. And then Tess and Katie with Ella and Rachel. And the twins are just way too cute and so different and it makes them even cuter. I could really see how both of them were daddy's girl- so... so... so... so Doug!
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