for So You're Leaving3/21/2003 c1 oldestofthree
wonderful story. you are really good at this. dialog and characterizations are great. i could actually feel dally immense pain.
wonderful story. you are really good at this. dialog and characterizations are great. i could actually feel dally immense pain.
3/21/2003 c1 buzzbuzz16
omfg, u have to update this asap! a 2 yrs later or year later if things dont work out! this was AMAZING!
omfg, u have to update this asap! a 2 yrs later or year later if things dont work out! this was AMAZING!
3/20/2003 c1 
2jkb
This is beautiful!
So much to love about this fic!
The details, like the picture given to Dallas from Pony's Mom for staying out of trouble.
Fantastic!
and the emotion!
I filled up when Dal messed up Johnny's hair and said, "Go on, kid."
beautiful!
This is so going on my favorites!
Thanks for writing this fantastic fic!
jkb
2jkbThis is beautiful!
So much to love about this fic!
The details, like the picture given to Dallas from Pony's Mom for staying out of trouble.
Fantastic!
and the emotion!
I filled up when Dal messed up Johnny's hair and said, "Go on, kid."
beautiful!
This is so going on my favorites!
Thanks for writing this fantastic fic!
jkb
3/17/2003 c1 4priceless advice
You are very talented! You captured Dally and Johnny so well...I look forward to reading more stories by you...
4priceless adviceYou are very talented! You captured Dally and Johnny so well...I look forward to reading more stories by you...