5/25/2020 c11 RadioBehemoth
Just binged the thing up to this point.
This is all genuinely cool.
Also, that bit with him in Italy and the Arrow. You can't possibly mean THAT Arrow, do you?
*wink-wink, nudge-nudge*
Just binged the thing up to this point.
This is all genuinely cool.
Also, that bit with him in Italy and the Arrow. You can't possibly mean THAT Arrow, do you?
*wink-wink, nudge-nudge*
5/19/2020 c11 Mr Killer5 0
good too see that the storys still going
will be waiting for the next chapter
good too see that the storys still going
will be waiting for the next chapter
5/17/2020 c11 5Stopdropanroll
I like the journal format, and I agree that it could be a good way to catalogue the interactions of the characters. I am happy that you have updated! This is absolutely in my top ongoing One Piece stories on this website. Now I just have to reread the previous chapters to get their contents clear in my memory.
I like the journal format, and I agree that it could be a good way to catalogue the interactions of the characters. I am happy that you have updated! This is absolutely in my top ongoing One Piece stories on this website. Now I just have to reread the previous chapters to get their contents clear in my memory.
5/17/2020 c11 Guest
This guy and Crocus will have something to bond over old men pulled into the young men's game by someone wishing to be king of the pirates. I'm curious will they get stronger overtime due to the food they eat containing the nutrients e.t.c. Of the One Piece world? similar explanation as to in This Bites.
This guy and Crocus will have something to bond over old men pulled into the young men's game by someone wishing to be king of the pirates. I'm curious will they get stronger overtime due to the food they eat containing the nutrients e.t.c. Of the One Piece world? similar explanation as to in This Bites.
2/10/2019 c10 Stopdropanroll
This was quiet a nice read! I have yet to become supremely invested, but that will surely come with time if you maintain the quality of writing you have shown thus far! I do enjoy a badass old man with a heart of gold.
It was nice to see the Prof. interacting with the crew, and I am excited to see more in the future!
This was quiet a nice read! I have yet to become supremely invested, but that will surely come with time if you maintain the quality of writing you have shown thus far! I do enjoy a badass old man with a heart of gold.
It was nice to see the Prof. interacting with the crew, and I am excited to see more in the future!
2/6/2019 c6 Rusticsoldier
After reading six chapters. I have decided I do not like the way you write at all. It much to flippant like a really bad cartoon.
After reading six chapters. I have decided I do not like the way you write at all. It much to flippant like a really bad cartoon.
2/6/2019 c1 Rusticsoldier
I would of preferred a reincarnation. Rather than an old man starting a new story... Simple because I feel you would make the story short with a sudden heart attack.
I would of preferred a reincarnation. Rather than an old man starting a new story... Simple because I feel you would make the story short with a sudden heart attack.
2/4/2019 c10 5BlackDove WhiteDove
You never fail to bring a smile to my face Bartholomew. Thank you so much for the update! ️
You never fail to bring a smile to my face Bartholomew. Thank you so much for the update! ️
8/23/2018 c1 Celeste D. Lilica
I'm already loving this. Just from ready the summary I got all excited to read it!
I'm already loving this. Just from ready the summary I got all excited to read it!
8/20/2018 c1 HeileWelt
The beginning ... is awesome
The landing... is unexpected
Your story... is ought to be great
This said... gonna read the next chapter immediately
The beginning ... is awesome
The landing... is unexpected
Your story... is ought to be great
This said... gonna read the next chapter immediately
8/20/2018 c9 Thedudemanbro
...does...does he have a Stand, or did he get the heck outra dodge before the Passione Clustertruck?
...does...does he have a Stand, or did he get the heck outra dodge before the Passione Clustertruck?