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4/15/2020 c1 the yokai lover rikuo
i can't read it.
it appears well written, but the formatting... smaller paragraphs would be great.
11/10/2017 c1 NemiTheNen
This story is unreadable. I don't mean that in the "Lawl you suck at writing" sort of way, I mean that in the format sort of way.

You need to chop up that first paragraph(?) in to smaller, but logically seperated, chunks and put line breaks between them
11/10/2017 c1 17SigmaForceSpeedy
Hey, everyone. I have been working hard on this story. Hope you all like it!

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