for Ichigo's Secret Trainer
128/3/2021 c58 unkempt124
I enjoyed the story it was well done, now the question is what will your next story take you?
I enjoyed the story it was well done, now the question is what will your next story take you?
8/3/2021 c58 naruto
great chapter keep it up
great chapter keep it up
8/3/2021 c59 thedarkwolf95
Damn, I'm utter crap at writing lemons and was gonna try outsourcing it but you said no crossovers so there goes that, still might hire you're services for the Mass Effect and Elder Scrolls fics I have planned though.
Damn, I'm utter crap at writing lemons and was gonna try outsourcing it but you said no crossovers so there goes that, still might hire you're services for the Mass Effect and Elder Scrolls fics I have planned though.
8/3/2021 c58 Guest
Sorry if I'm doing anything rude in this but Soi Fon isn't as bad as this fanfic turn her to be. She actually has respect for Ichigo and has become more relaxed after the Soul Society Arc. Watch DBZIMRAN in Youtube and anyone can understand Soi Fon in bleach canon would not be as aggressive as this fanfic. WattheWut in his video "I'll NEVER Stop Loving BLEACH" spoke about Soi Fon's character well. These guys really went into detail pretty good with her character.
Sorry if I'm doing anything rude in this but Soi Fon isn't as bad as this fanfic turn her to be. She actually has respect for Ichigo and has become more relaxed after the Soul Society Arc. Watch DBZIMRAN in Youtube and anyone can understand Soi Fon in bleach canon would not be as aggressive as this fanfic. WattheWut in his video "I'll NEVER Stop Loving BLEACH" spoke about Soi Fon's character well. These guys really went into detail pretty good with her character.
8/3/2021 c58 Mr. Marston
Random-Fan-2017, Soifon should also apologize for threatening to brutally murder Yuzu and Karin. Innocent kids. Even Aizen never stooped to that especially with the horrifically gruesome way she wanted to do it. The whole assassin's thing has unsurprisingly warped her morals, logic and mind with her obsession only making things worse. She sure needed help even with her rank/status but it's obviously far too late, at this point only Yoruichi herself can keep Soifon from doing unspeakable atrocities even she wouldn't have done while commanding the Stealth Force.
Random-Fan-2017, Soifon should also apologize for threatening to brutally murder Yuzu and Karin. Innocent kids. Even Aizen never stooped to that especially with the horrifically gruesome way she wanted to do it. The whole assassin's thing has unsurprisingly warped her morals, logic and mind with her obsession only making things worse. She sure needed help even with her rank/status but it's obviously far too late, at this point only Yoruichi herself can keep Soifon from doing unspeakable atrocities even she wouldn't have done while commanding the Stealth Force.
8/2/2021 c58 Random-Fan-2017
Fuck yeah, Toshiro! My boi! Telling them like it is: "Bitch, you're not firing me, I quit!" That just shows how he was the captain with the most integrity, since he actively went out of his way, going above and beyond the call of duty, to, as I've said before, DO THEIR FREAKING JOB! Disobeying direct orders or not, he actually did what none of them had the balls to do, and that makes him a genuinely good Squad Captain! I'm really glad that things worked out for him in the end, because he's earned it.
As for Soi-Fon... she is still one of my favorite captains, but dammit she can be a frigid bitch at times. Kisuke was never to blame for what happened to Yoruichi. All of that was clearly Szayelapporo's fault, from beginning to end. Also, Soi-Fon could have helped prevent that by getting up off of her tight little ass and actually done something to help, but she did nothing. Honestly, she should apologise to Yoruichi, and then to Kisuke, since he did way more than she ever did.
This was a fantastic ending to a magnificent story, and I thank you very much for bringing it to light. :)
Fuck yeah, Toshiro! My boi! Telling them like it is: "Bitch, you're not firing me, I quit!" That just shows how he was the captain with the most integrity, since he actively went out of his way, going above and beyond the call of duty, to, as I've said before, DO THEIR FREAKING JOB! Disobeying direct orders or not, he actually did what none of them had the balls to do, and that makes him a genuinely good Squad Captain! I'm really glad that things worked out for him in the end, because he's earned it.
As for Soi-Fon... she is still one of my favorite captains, but dammit she can be a frigid bitch at times. Kisuke was never to blame for what happened to Yoruichi. All of that was clearly Szayelapporo's fault, from beginning to end. Also, Soi-Fon could have helped prevent that by getting up off of her tight little ass and actually done something to help, but she did nothing. Honestly, she should apologise to Yoruichi, and then to Kisuke, since he did way more than she ever did.
This was a fantastic ending to a magnificent story, and I thank you very much for bringing it to light. :)
8/2/2021 c58 fallendemon248
This story was amazing I really loved it, so thank you for sharing this and I cant wait to see what you do next
This story was amazing I really loved it, so thank you for sharing this and I cant wait to see what you do next