for ANBU boot camp4/13 c18 
1Nightwing2013
4th or 5th reread. It’s that good.
I can see the prank now. Naruto walks into a Hyuga’s home unannounced using Chief’s technique, and impersonates him with his voice, making the Hyuga panic. Hyuga turns around, and it’s just Naruto.
1Nightwing20134th or 5th reread. It’s that good.
I can see the prank now. Naruto walks into a Hyuga’s home unannounced using Chief’s technique, and impersonates him with his voice, making the Hyuga panic. Hyuga turns around, and it’s just Naruto.
4/9 c9 thegrison
Good story but way too much drama in it. The story pacing and flow is very slow. Only a few days has past, not even a week yet took over 7 chapters. Way too long for nothing to really happen. Good luck.
Good story but way too much drama in it. The story pacing and flow is very slow. Only a few days has past, not even a week yet took over 7 chapters. Way too long for nothing to really happen. Good luck.
3/29 c35 dragonlord4546
i have read this fanfic four time and it took me till the fifth to catch that james bond reference last chapter
i have read this fanfic four time and it took me till the fifth to catch that james bond reference last chapter
3/15 c50 Guest
Well I really hope you are doing better. Great story & writing do far. Only a few things I wasn't a fan of but everyone has there own likes.
Well I really hope you are doing better. Great story & writing do far. Only a few things I wasn't a fan of but everyone has there own likes.
1/25 c1 Rajemrash
Me encanta actualmente me encuentro recibiendo una formación militar y tienes razón
Me encanta actualmente me encuentro recibiendo una formación militar y tienes razón
1/11 c24 arata7kasuga
Rather rude he won't teach his family his families sealing. Not much a family man this head of family is.
Rather rude he won't teach his family his families sealing. Not much a family man this head of family is.
1/11 c23 arata7kasuga
Stupid to blindfold her, it would be useful for another person to be able to extract demons no?
Stupid to blindfold her, it would be useful for another person to be able to extract demons no?
1/11 c22 arata7kasuga
Minato would have just put a Hiraishin marker on Gamabunta no? Also rather dumb trying to manipulate Iruka like that, it should be a natural thing between them, not forced by ito and her other friends. Naruto would just burn off the Alcohol wouldn't he? His stamina s hould not have been broken. Loved the NaruHina moments though :3 I agree, long hair is the pretttiest.
Minato would have just put a Hiraishin marker on Gamabunta no? Also rather dumb trying to manipulate Iruka like that, it should be a natural thing between them, not forced by ito and her other friends. Naruto would just burn off the Alcohol wouldn't he? His stamina s hould not have been broken. Loved the NaruHina moments though :3 I agree, long hair is the pretttiest.
1/11 c21 arata7kasuga
He would not know how much chakra it would take to summon a boss toad of a contract he is not part of. Chiefs best skill is to be there and take up screen time. Tbh, he is getting old, I would much rather see NaruHina moments.
He would not know how much chakra it would take to summon a boss toad of a contract he is not part of. Chiefs best skill is to be there and take up screen time. Tbh, he is getting old, I would much rather see NaruHina moments.