for Ninja Gamer Complete12/20/2024 c1 murphy adam101
Greeting, Hope you are doing well
I read your story and you get my attention by your writing skills and the scene you mention in it. You are a fantastic writer and one of my fav one now, you really impressed me.
The characters details and expressions you insert in the story it's so good and impressive so As a commission artist I have some dope story cover and character ideas related to your story about art and I am wondering to draw in charismas theme for your story in affordable prices so if you are interested to discuss more about it so must connect with me by my social handle given below and You can also see my portfolio/artwork on there
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Greeting, Hope you are doing well
I read your story and you get my attention by your writing skills and the scene you mention in it. You are a fantastic writer and one of my fav one now, you really impressed me.
The characters details and expressions you insert in the story it's so good and impressive so As a commission artist I have some dope story cover and character ideas related to your story about art and I am wondering to draw in charismas theme for your story in affordable prices so if you are interested to discuss more about it so must connect with me by my social handle given below and You can also see my portfolio/artwork on there
Btw are you going to update more?
Discuss :
Discord: murphy_adam09
Instagram: murphy_adam08
Twitter: Murphyadam09
Gmail : Murphyadam809
Bluesky : murphyadam
I will wait for your good response and Happy Christmas in advance .
12/16/2024 c22 
3Foxy-Floof
Chapter 22 endnote is wrong. You leveled up, you should be level 76 after defeating Yagura.
3Foxy-FloofChapter 22 endnote is wrong. You leveled up, you should be level 76 after defeating Yagura.
12/1/2024 c12 1tomoe latsu
I have a question, why would sage use or give spear to someone who proved themselves, seeing how sage desire was peace, bot destruction, the second she used power and tried to kill him, should have been second she lost.
Yet at same time she showed her desire to survive, but that still doesn't show why sage would give her anything at all.
1tomoe latsuI have a question, why would sage use or give spear to someone who proved themselves, seeing how sage desire was peace, bot destruction, the second she used power and tried to kill him, should have been second she lost.
Yet at same time she showed her desire to survive, but that still doesn't show why sage would give her anything at all.
11/20/2024 c18 sikvelsigma
okay, I'm dropping this, it devolved into some kind of boring slice of life, the gaming system is barely mentioned and the text quality itself is barely tolerable in the first place. don't waste your time
okay, I'm dropping this, it devolved into some kind of boring slice of life, the gaming system is barely mentioned and the text quality itself is barely tolerable in the first place. don't waste your time
10/4/2024 c43 TheGoodDoctor13
Good story, was hoping the epilogue would have the stats she had after she passed away decades later. Was interested to see what they were
Good story, was hoping the epilogue would have the stats she had after she passed away decades later. Was interested to see what they were
10/3/2024 c26 TheGoodDoctor13
I like how all of team 7 is a lot stronger in this. Naruto and Sasuke were trained since they were little, and Sakura is learning a lot from Yuriko too. But I especially like that Kakashi is actually as strong as people say he is in this. Reason being he's fresh out of Anbu instead of wasting his skills away for years before canon
I like how all of team 7 is a lot stronger in this. Naruto and Sasuke were trained since they were little, and Sakura is learning a lot from Yuriko too. But I especially like that Kakashi is actually as strong as people say he is in this. Reason being he's fresh out of Anbu instead of wasting his skills away for years before canon
10/3/2024 c15 TheGoodDoctor13
I'm guessing if Iwa ends up allying with Konoha then Onoki will be at the chunin exams in like 8 years. Probably might end up saving hiruzen too
I'm guessing if Iwa ends up allying with Konoha then Onoki will be at the chunin exams in like 8 years. Probably might end up saving hiruzen too
10/3/2024 c1 TheGoodDoctor13
Should've picked the natural sage perk. Crazy to go kenjutsu medic instead of being able to basically use a lesser sage mode from the get go, as an Uchiha no less. Seriously nature chakra is op and its weird not to pick it
Should've picked the natural sage perk. Crazy to go kenjutsu medic instead of being able to basically use a lesser sage mode from the get go, as an Uchiha no less. Seriously nature chakra is op and its weird not to pick it
9/15/2024 c43 Soulfire91
I love to re-read this story from time to time and it never fails to make me smile and tear up.
10/10, will re-read again.
I love to re-read this story from time to time and it never fails to make me smile and tear up.
10/10, will re-read again.
9/5/2024 c43 KanaRadiance
I am blown away by this story. Your character Yoriko was amazingly well written. You made her progress steady and believable, without focusing solely on the mechanics. You gave her a personality that was tough but kind. Kudos, so very well done. Keep up the amazing work, I look forward towards your next work.
Regards , KanaRadiance
I am blown away by this story. Your character Yoriko was amazingly well written. You made her progress steady and believable, without focusing solely on the mechanics. You gave her a personality that was tough but kind. Kudos, so very well done. Keep up the amazing work, I look forward towards your next work.
Regards , KanaRadiance