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37SeerKing
OK, this looks good. Your OC isnt superpowered, but solid instead, which is good. Looking forward to the next chapter.
37SeerKingOK, this looks good. Your OC isnt superpowered, but solid instead, which is good. Looking forward to the next chapter.
11/13/2017 c1 BClassDemon
I can't help but think of that line from Iryo-nin Kasa - Chapter 51:
"I could heal someone to death... if that makes any sense"
The MC basically supercharged the Mystical Palm Technique to cause rapid cancerous growths on... pretty much anything Organic...
I can't help but think of that line from Iryo-nin Kasa - Chapter 51:
"I could heal someone to death... if that makes any sense"
The MC basically supercharged the Mystical Palm Technique to cause rapid cancerous growths on... pretty much anything Organic...
11/12/2017 c1 Guest
Interesting story can't wait for the next chapter
Interesting story can't wait for the next chapter
11/12/2017 c1 Guest
So far everything looks good! :D
Liked how you're taking the Gamer-fic approach having the reincarnation and Perks in the beginning. "Never mess with the guy that's suppose to heal you." Is a Gamer motto if I ever heard one.
So far everything looks good! :D
Liked how you're taking the Gamer-fic approach having the reincarnation and Perks in the beginning. "Never mess with the guy that's suppose to heal you." Is a Gamer motto if I ever heard one.
11/12/2017 c1 60SoulOfAFangirl684
This is a fascinating idea. I mean, you'd think it would be kind of an obvious choice, but I've never seen it done before. There are so many ideas that could branch off of this... I mean, you could have a different OC story for every possible option this one was given for their origin.
60SoulOfAFangirl684This is a fascinating idea. I mean, you'd think it would be kind of an obvious choice, but I've never seen it done before. There are so many ideas that could branch off of this... I mean, you could have a different OC story for every possible option this one was given for their origin.
11/12/2017 c1 XavierChaos
While it is well written enough to not make me cringe. And fairly well balanced to start, I don't find this to be enjoyable. Between the whole set up of how your OC comes to be a Gamer! Naruto character and the choices made, along with the fact that you had them essentially go the Uchiha route rather then something truly interesting was a bit of a let down. But then again between the record of other stories this one probably won't go beyond chapter five before it's put in same bin as all the other stories you have written.
While it is well written enough to not make me cringe. And fairly well balanced to start, I don't find this to be enjoyable. Between the whole set up of how your OC comes to be a Gamer! Naruto character and the choices made, along with the fact that you had them essentially go the Uchiha route rather then something truly interesting was a bit of a let down. But then again between the record of other stories this one probably won't go beyond chapter five before it's put in same bin as all the other stories you have written.