for Ninja Gamer Complete8/29/2024 c19 Guest
her stats finally changed jeez
her stats finally changed jeez
8/30/2024 c43 CeloW
Wow... That are the only words that come to my mind after finishing this story. It was a very good ride for me, not to mention that it is one of the few fics i ever read that are finished.
It is a solid 4.5/5 stars in my opinion, but i have high hopes of it reaching 5 stars. there are a lot of minor things that bugged me but the most important thing that i noticed was the pacing.
It felt rushed after the kyuubi attack and even more so the ending. A big up would be to do more of slice of life to compliment the charcters and especially Madoka-chan and Yurikos family life.
As a minor detail that i noticed is the inconsistancy of Madokas development because i dont think that a 4 year old is still playing in a playpen. The second thing is that the age of Roshi that u explained in a note doesnt match up and Yurikus own age. That is all and keep up your good work!
Yours Truly, CeloW (formerly ClasherYYT)
Wow... That are the only words that come to my mind after finishing this story. It was a very good ride for me, not to mention that it is one of the few fics i ever read that are finished.
It is a solid 4.5/5 stars in my opinion, but i have high hopes of it reaching 5 stars. there are a lot of minor things that bugged me but the most important thing that i noticed was the pacing.
It felt rushed after the kyuubi attack and even more so the ending. A big up would be to do more of slice of life to compliment the charcters and especially Madoka-chan and Yurikos family life.
As a minor detail that i noticed is the inconsistancy of Madokas development because i dont think that a 4 year old is still playing in a playpen. The second thing is that the age of Roshi that u explained in a note doesnt match up and Yurikus own age. That is all and keep up your good work!
Yours Truly, CeloW (formerly ClasherYYT)
8/24/2024 c38 PrimordialNyx
I just noticed this. Its INCREDIBLY Ironic that 'Fatechanger' is her 'Fated' title XD
I just noticed this. Its INCREDIBLY Ironic that 'Fatechanger' is her 'Fated' title XD
8/12/2024 c34 RandomPasserby
As someone who was a fan of a niche series, and dedicated years to absorbing every story available, I'd like to let you know that 4k likes and follows is *plenty*.
Even sorting by favorites, I generally consider 2k the point where a story has passed the need for "quality control", with the only exceptions being the truely large fandoms... Such as Naruto.
But then again, your now 11k favs and follows kinda speaks for itself, this story is quality, and the masses have finally noticed it.
Thanks for the fic.
As someone who was a fan of a niche series, and dedicated years to absorbing every story available, I'd like to let you know that 4k likes and follows is *plenty*.
Even sorting by favorites, I generally consider 2k the point where a story has passed the need for "quality control", with the only exceptions being the truely large fandoms... Such as Naruto.
But then again, your now 11k favs and follows kinda speaks for itself, this story is quality, and the masses have finally noticed it.
Thanks for the fic.
8/1/2024 c18 Dretnuh
Wait so the implications of this is that if you get swapped from being a guy to a girl body you eventually just change your sexuality…? Ngl if I was reincarnated in a girls body I might be curious about guys in the way most girls are curious about girls, but I think no matter what I would still be much more physically attracted to gals lol.
Wait so the implications of this is that if you get swapped from being a guy to a girl body you eventually just change your sexuality…? Ngl if I was reincarnated in a girls body I might be curious about guys in the way most girls are curious about girls, but I think no matter what I would still be much more physically attracted to gals lol.
8/1/2024 c18 Dretnuh
I don’t think the shows did undersell Sakura’s chakra control. I think that was more the fandom that did that. In the wave arc when they are doing tree climbing, Sakura gets it on like literally her first try and it takes Sasuke and Naruto like multiple days of constant grinding just to match that.
I don’t think the shows did undersell Sakura’s chakra control. I think that was more the fandom that did that. In the wave arc when they are doing tree climbing, Sakura gets it on like literally her first try and it takes Sasuke and Naruto like multiple days of constant grinding just to match that.
8/1/2024 c13 Dretnuh
How tf would your sharingan not be able to tell if it’s an afterimage. Like maybe if he was already atleast a chunin but a fresh genin and your sharingan still get tricked by the afterimage…? Doesn’t make much sense to me.
How tf would your sharingan not be able to tell if it’s an afterimage. Like maybe if he was already atleast a chunin but a fresh genin and your sharingan still get tricked by the afterimage…? Doesn’t make much sense to me.
8/1/2024 c8 Dretnuh
Wait what there’s no way he already had hirashin in the second ninja war… he became famous for using it in rhe 3rd ninja war… are you sure this isn’t the 3rd ninja war?
Wait what there’s no way he already had hirashin in the second ninja war… he became famous for using it in rhe 3rd ninja war… are you sure this isn’t the 3rd ninja war?
7/31/2024 c3 Dretnuh
I think the non-Uchiha sharingan drain should be much worse. Kekashi actually has a lot of chakra, it’s the sharingan that is draining him constantly and a lot that makes him have such bad stamina.
I think the non-Uchiha sharingan drain should be much worse. Kekashi actually has a lot of chakra, it’s the sharingan that is draining him constantly and a lot that makes him have such bad stamina.