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11/17/2017 c3 Guest
I wasn't expecting his arsenal to be this powerful. Dunno what I expected, maybe like Gil who merely shoots them instead of using their abilities. Speaking of which, Rama's ability reminds a quite a bit of Gilgamesh and Alcides, fellow Servants whose Noble Phantasms consist of multiple other Noble Phantasms (Gate of Babylon and King Order). Quite powerful to have multiple NP-level weapons next to Brahmastra, but it is to be expected if you consider fellow indian monsters Karna and Arjuna. I'm a bit interested in seeing Lancer Heracles now.
11/17/2017 c3 Guest
Why can't this be the canon version? Seriously, fuck Zero and it's tragedy fetish!
11/17/2017 c3 7hyperomegasonic26
Really a good chapter and if Kiritsugu is clever, it would be wise to maybe form an alliance with Kariya and Rama to at least protect little Sakura, which would leave Tokiomi standing when he knows his daughter he delivered to Zouken at one year ago is in possession of the Magus Killer.

Here then a conflict between the magus Tohsaka and the magus Emiya would be held to talk about his views on life (Tokiomi being a magus above all else than being a father who cares for all his family and his daughters and Kiritsugu wanting to be a hero who ends all wars of humanity and cares more about his family above all else than being a magus, causing a conflict of ideals between the two) before Kiritsugu fight Kirei who should be ordered by Tokiomi to go rescue Sakura from Kiritsugu and Kariya to return it to Zouken.
11/16/2017 c3 Treyvah
Iri has the archetypal instincts of a protective, healing mother. She is not going to let Kariya's sickness go. Hopefully Einzbern healing magic, by its very experimental nature in getting bodies to accept magical organs and treatments, might help him out if she decides to go that extra mile.

But if Kiritsugu had taken that shot, nothing on Earth aside from a Command Seal or two, would have stopped Saber from cutting off his head. I am curious to see more of this. Consider this story Followed and Favourited.
11/16/2017 c3 superpeirce
Oooh things are getting exciting can't wait to see what happens next.
11/16/2017 c3 3DeidaraExplosionMaster
Please continue, as your tale is as magical as the tales that were written by the castor of red in the war between factions. Overall a great story overall, one that must be read due to how great it is.
11/16/2017 c3 1drakonpie250
Iskander you idiot.
11/16/2017 c3 Perfidus
Oh, 4 Kings meets. For balance, Zerk should be chu alter. Most Indian figure is related to divine either directly or decended from divine lineage. Rama is Vishnu avatar, making him divine spirit like Tamamo.
11/16/2017 c2 Guest
Why are the indian heroes so stupidly powerful?!
11/16/2017 c2 Guest
Every story which features Zouken dying painfully deserves attention. This is also a story with Rama and Kariya, an surprising Servant choice and an unexpected Master. Well done. It is very possible that Kayneth summoned Berserker. Darius would be an interesting choice, merely by the logic that he rivals Iskandar and gets boosted by Mad Enhancement, there making him theoretically equal to Iskandar. It would be interesting to modify the summoning system to share the burden of having Berserker by dividing the cost between Sola-Ui and Kayneth. He wouldn't be able to fight to his fullest like he did in canon, but I doubt that he would let his precious Sola take the burden of providing Darius with energy alone.
11/15/2017 c2 7hyperomegasonic26
I'm really glad that the 4th Holy Grail War will appear and Kariya ended up confessing that he was dying to Rama because of Zouken's worms inside him, but I believe Kariya will have some kind of specific wish in mind. Because he is dying and because Sakura is afraid to return to live with the Tohsaka, I believe that Kariya's desire is to incarnate Rama so he can take care of little Sakura after his death.

Let's see how they will come out to win the 4th Holy Grail War and who knows even prevent a 5th Holy Grail War from discovering the existence of Angra Mainyu within the Greater Grail (being a Matou, Kariya certainly knows where the Greater Grail Its located).
11/15/2017 c2 1drakonpie250
Did Iris get to see the ocean yet?
11/14/2017 c1 58Jaenera Targaryen
Just for saving Sakura from the pit, you get a fave.
11/14/2017 c1 7hyperomegasonic26
I must make my first comment regarding this story.

In this parallel world here, Kariya ended up summoning the right Servant to save him, Sakura, and to finish once and for all with the evil Zouken, once and for all ending with this old worm at the first opportunity quite unexpectedly.

I liked it, Sakura is free now and soon Kariya too, so Kariya's goal to save Sakura from Zouken was accomplished before even the 4th Holy Grail War started. With that, now all that remains is Kariya helping his Servant by helping him realize his own desire which is to revive him and his dead wife Sita by beating the 4th Holy Grail War, but know that they will get this done when they learn that the Grail of Fuyuki is contaminated by Angra Mainyu as the war progresses?

Since Rama was summoned as a Servant of the Lancer class by Kariya, who eventually occupied the post of Berserker then in this interaction of the 4th Holy Graik War? Who was Arturia or Diarmuid? Whoever it is, the Master of one of them will end up suffering a lot for sustaining a Servers of the Berserker class because they are known to drain a lot of Mana from their Master, almost leaving them tired to fight and giving them some internal pains.

If by chance it was Diarmuid, to make things more ironic would be wiser to have been summoned from an alterative version of the 4th Holy Grail War where he had the same end as before being forced to kill himself because of Kayneth's last Command Seal and his state of madness would be seen from his red eyes dripping blood.
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