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2/18 c6 10xellos540
Hello,

Firstly, I've read this fic quite a while ago and, as far as I can see, didn't review it and I'm sorry for that. I also didn't know there'd be updates... I get

Secondly, it's certainly one of the more interesting M-rated Toaru ones I have ever found, though I think Lessar was coming a bit too strong still (also, it's surprisingly good *fortune* that Index wasn't there).

Thirdly, only now have I realized who was the author of this... Man, recently I keep finding fics that are authored by people who made some long-ass series I'm following and I'm all like "wait a minute, how come I realize that only now". The fact that you guys managed to write those long series and still have time for separate stories is amazing.

Anyway, that part where Lessar imagines what exciting things they do when they come home is hilarious, the good M-rated explicit kind of stuff... which makes me kinda surprised cause in A Certain Infinite Possibility you basically censor everything including stuff like "bastard". I know it's probably the rating but still found it weird. Oh well...

So Lessar's a virgin? If I were to write her, I'd say that too or rather, I'd want that and I would find (quite a few) explanations for what it was this way and I certainly don't mind, though I remember in A Certain Infinite Possibility it is implied Lessar is not a virgin (and at such an age too...) at least when she answers the comments. So you have two different approaches to this... interesting...

Surprised the runic AC hasn't exploded... yet... Also, love it that Lessar messes up the rune the first time. xD

Oh... and now another major obstacle comes... Misaki knows (at least partially). I do get this might be "if Touma's happy then I'm happy", but I'm not sure it'll go like that...

Also, there are those magicians that were currently shoved under the rug, so to speak. Could be someone from New Light? Some GREMLIN magician? Or perhaps... Leivinia (yeah, I don't think she's uses nordic magic, but scorned women can be... hard to predict).

"You're mean, you know that" FINALLY someone besides Touma says something like that. xD

P.S. There's like 1% chance that the condom will break. Special Touma-only rule: add two zeroes to that ;) Lessar's roughness probably won't help either. :P
12/23/2021 c6 Kurt930
"Don't worry," The second girl assured her. "Our Queen knows Kamijou-sama personally. I believe she could be of help to you."

When i read that i went oh no OH NO OH NNOOOOOI!
12/17/2021 c6 G119
The grocery store… Where else would he… Who else but Touma…
12/9/2021 c6 1onilink500
Me gusta esta historia lessar merece amor. Y que quiera meter a misaka me parece bien ahora. Donde caben 2 caben 3.

Y me gusta lo picante que es lessar
12/9/2021 c6 SuddenBetrayal
Hello and thank you so much for continuing this one. Lessar really is a really underutilized character and I think the relationship dynamic you have developed here is really cute. I do think its a little weird how it feels like they just sort of went back to normal without even really investigating that whole pool magical terrorist attack thing and now it almost feels like its transitioned into another arc without really fully resolving it, but oh well. Either way I am just glad to see you come back to this one and hope you give it some sort of conclusion at some point, although I don't really know what that would be. I guess I just want to see more of this ship and don't really mind the details.
12/9/2021 c6 JCarrasco
Keep it up I love this story please.
12/9/2021 c6 Mr. X
Can't wait for the next chapter, and the possible return of A Certain Infinite Possibility.
12/8/2021 c6 Majin Othinus
Thanks you for releasing a new chapter. This has meade my week a LOT more bearable. Things are incredibly rough for me right now, on all fronts. But fics like yours inject some levity and help ease the panis and stresses away.

Vtubers have also been a godsend for my sanity. Ironmouse and Monke ball-buster weekly collabs are now my lifeblood.

Sorry for going off on a tangent.

Stay healthy, and cheers from Philippines!
12/8/2021 c6 5nothost
Oh wow, an update. Thanks for the shout out BTW. It's nice to know I played a part in inspiring you.

This was a really fun chapter that had a bit of everything. From the incident at the water park to just more down to earth things. I'm more interested than ever to see where things go. What magician(s) blew up the slide (and why they're agree Touma). Also Misaki getting involved and interacting with Lazar... man, I can't wait for that one, considering her connection with Touma. Here's to hoping your inspiration stays intact.
10/8/2021 c5 nothost
I know this story hasn't been updated in awhile, but damn is it good. For PwP it has a lot of good plot, more than most. And the characters are pretty spot on (especially considering a PwP). It's an interesting story with progressions and I could totally see all this playing out if things had gone different ways. Even though it isn't likely at this point, I look forward to the next update. Fingers crossed!
6/29/2021 c1 Majin Othinus
Update please... It's been 2 years
2/9/2021 c5 SuddenBetrayal
I really liked this and you are right, Lessar really feels underappreciated and we need more of this kind of thing. Hope you haven't abandoned this one just as it was starting to get really good.
10/5/2020 c5 Guest
Touma x lessar x mikoto x kuroko
7/28/2020 c5 2madtad1
Wow, this is really well written! Any chance you will continue? I’m enjoying it very much!
6/30/2020 c1 Majin Othinus
Update please! A year has gone by already. This could really help out with relieving my anxiety during this whole pandemic fiasco...
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