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11/17/2018 c13 Chrithelma
Loved this sooo much. There’s so much bad NaLu fan fiction out there it’s so hard to find a great one like this. I’m so sad it’s over but it was perfect. Everything I wanted. Keep up the good work!
11/17/2018 c13 6DreamWeaver2121
I'm so happy I could cry! Bravo!
11/17/2018 c13 kim-stitches
been for this! thank you for wrapping up the story so beautifully. i especially loved the part when everyone swarmed the two lovebirds. i've always loved how supportive the guild is with regards to their relationship. looking forward to your other projects! hope you're having a great day xxx
11/13/2018 c12 4X-x-Forgotten-Dreams-x-X
I am so happy this got an update. I love this story. You can practically feel the sexual tension between them the whole time, I love it. Can't wait to read the finale. I'm gonna miss it once it's done.
11/12/2018 c12 Duchixx
Well... damn (O_O)
11/11/2018 c12 11YukiMC
Satyrykal! Oh MAH GOD! You wrote the crap out of this, it's so amazing, no one could ever! I almost couldn't get through the first part because of all the feels that were giving me mini heart attacks of love, and then I finally read everything else and I swear I died like, 10 times. You've heard this more than a few times but, YOU ARE SO GOOD AT WRITING. You set ambiance, the mood, and the back and forths between Natsu and Lucy SO perfectly, i die. I aspire to be at your level, oh awesome Queen Satyrykal!

Okay, details: The fluff was perfect as always, Natsu and Lucy finally confessing their love for each other and not holding back, is exactly how I love it. Having that bit with Lucy rushing into where Natsu and Gray were eating just to kiss Natsu in front of everyone was a good way to showcase this.

Now for the lemon, I've read many a lemon in my hayday but somehow you pulled out something that I don't think has been done. Natsu freaking listening to her heartbeat to tell how she likes it? It's obvious but I think you're the only to do it! Not only that, but the seemless ways you go from intensely hot to sinkeningly sweet, I die again. I've always been jealous of people who write their lemons like this, passionate, intense, smart, but still loving; the perfect culmination of a lemon for Nalu.

Anyways, excited for the final chappie, until then I'll vote on your profile.

Thank you for making my night!

LY
11/7/2018 c12 kim-stitches
finally finished reading and i enjoyed every minute of this story! thank you for writing such a wonderful piece! no one was ooc and the characters managed to convey their feelings so genuinely. looking forward to the epilogue and to your current/future projects! absolutely loved this! <3
11/7/2018 c1 kim-stitches
just started and idk why i took this long to do so! i love your writing! everything flows seamlessly. excited to see how everything turns out! you're amazing <3
11/5/2018 c11 fafou14
This storyyyy is soooo good ughhhh I can’t belive I didn’t find it earlier omggg you’re suchhh a good writer I love this soooo much .. I can’t wait for the next chapterrr T.T 3
11/3/2018 c4 1kuro02
this is happy level of cockblocking lol
11/2/2018 c12 23Deborahpflover
You made me read this entire story again just so I could enjoy this chapter better. It was still as great the second time around. But it was worth the wait. This chapter was delicious. And yes, consent and protection is hot. :P
11/2/2018 c12 4noseinabook145
Yay! It was so long! Consent is so sexy. The whole chapter was sexy. Even the condom was sexy. Can't wait for the last chapter!
11/2/2018 c12 2foreveranimez
Finally! It was worth the waiting, I really love this story and it was about time that they finally could be alone and do it
11/1/2018 c12 AzmariaMinohi
So worth the wait Saty! That was absolutely awesome! *applause and cheering* Can't wait to see the epilogue.
11/1/2018 c7 16CrazyZaika
Ouh, Lucy is so mean XD I like it. And I like this chapter. It's kinda sweet I think.
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