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7/3/2018 c8 3xxdelightfullxx
That was so perfect! And then Levy!
7/3/2018 c7 xxdelightfullxx
I'm lowkey dreading this job for them! Gray and natsu when natsu is all pent up is going to be crazy!
7/3/2018 c6 xxdelightfullxx
Just teasing Lucy is such a mood and I love and support this woman

So hot qow
7/3/2018 c5 xxdelightfullxx
My god I cant deal with this if I were in her shoes I would like die.. this is such a hot chapter
7/3/2018 c4 xxdelightfullxx
Holy shit this is so good I can literally visualize all of this chapter in the best way!
7/3/2018 c3 xxdelightfullxx
I love gray and erza you write everyone so well! And my God these two snuggling bring me life!
7/3/2018 c2 xxdelightfullxx
That tension you created is so high I feel like I should be a puddle! I just really love the attention they pay the other one
7/3/2018 c1 xxdelightfullxx
One chapter and I already love this so much! Characters are on point!
6/30/2018 c11 ThaDesperado64
This story is beautiful! The way their relationship progresses throughout it is so well written and really feels like it's what needed to be said. Got closure in this chapter about Aquarius *tears up every time* and him leaving and I just love the natural flow of how they opened up to each other. I have to know who is at that door though :)
6/24/2018 c11 PrismRootStarlight
This is sooooo good! A great chapter as always! :) That cliffhanger though omg XD Can’t wait for the next update! :D
6/22/2018 c11 2foreveranimez
how dare you to end it like that! it was perfect. the perfect mixture of fluff and smut. i really love this story and I'm sad it's going to an end
6/21/2018 c11 Guest
6/20/2018 c11 2The 0bservanc3

Hail and well met my friend! Apologies for not reading and reviewing the newest chapter of Boiling Point until now. My WiFi signal’s been everywhere but where I need it.

Anyway, on to the review!

The trust that you show Lucy and and Natsu share is always a great thing to see. I definitely think you’ve once again succeeded in portraying their relationship realistically. So good job there.

I did enjoy the starry night reveal on the roof, but wonder how Lucy hadn’t noticed this might be possible. Wouldn’t she be the first to consider if places she’s been in are stargaze-worthy? Of course, she could have been too preoccupied with the Natsu situation.

The aurora were a nice touch. Of course Natsu would find a cool celestial thing and do his best to show Lucy. Lovable idiot.

The general back and forth between the too was also in character. Natsu would never let Lucy live something down if he could get some humor out of teasing her about it. Especially something like the shivering thing.

Swelter was a good name for this chapter I do believe! After that slipped out “I love you,” the escalation is real. Slip, talk/heart to heart, kiss, devour each other. It’s just so Natsu and Lucy.

You also masterfully wrapped up two of the most contentious points between the two in those moments before the citrus ignited. Natsu leaving her and losing Aquarius are two of the deepest emotional wounds Lucy’s ever suffered. Natsu’s explanation, though in no way excusing his actions, at least gave her a kind of closure to the event. And talking about Aquarius was not only cathartic for Lucy but allowed us to see Natsu’s promise to find the Celestial Spirit, which could spawn a whole new adventure.

Mention of Gray and Juvia doing Freezing Point things? Check!

And then citrus. All the citrus. Very well done and passionate. Mature too, with no phrases or happenings that would make it seem weird, fetish-y, or inexperienced. But the tease at the end was blue enough to match Juvia’s hair.

Who’s slamming doors at the inn? At this time of night? Gah!

Can’t wait for more! Can’t believe this story’s almost over. Only 2 chapters to go!
6/18/2018 c11 going anonymous
"Oh, a cliffhanger… Wonderful."
*flips table wearing a freakishly serene, tranquil smile*
6/16/2018 c11 5artistofthemind
NOOO! WHO DARES COCKBLOCK MY OTP?! Are they gonna get caught?! The suspense is killing me!
On another note, I'm so glad that the two finally had that conversation. They really, really need to and I'm so upset Mashima just skipped over all that because it really should have been a big moment and step forward for the two of them. But oh well. I think you did it beautifully. And Natsu finally learns about Aquarius. That's another part of the manga that's always bothered me, Mashima just sort of dropped the whole Aquarius's key got broken thing and I felt like no one every really knew what she sacrificed for the guild. Honestly, I could go on forever, but I won't.
I loved this chapter and this story and I can't wait to see where you take it! (Sorry about the whole mini-rant)
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