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6/14/2018 c11 23Deborahpflover
Yes yes yes, this was so good. The ramp up in emotions REALLY worked! It was so sincere and natural and it made the steaminess at the end ten times better and I can't believe you ended this on that cliffhanger! Looking at the aurora on a roof, having deep emotional conversations that end in I-love-you's and a hot making-out session? Can it get more romantic? It was just SO GOOD.
6/14/2018 c11 sarahelle04
Gah! You stopped haha! Oh well, I can’t wait for the next chapter. Steamy!
6/14/2018 c11 Lucy H Lover
I loved this chapter so much! It started out cute witha touch of fluff and ended smoking hot! Wonder if they might relocate or just go ahead where they are to finish their “activity”. The next chapter can’t get here soon enough!
6/14/2018 c11 Valythe
That chapter was amazing! I loved the emotional rollercoaster, it felt genuine. The end however, just mean! lol Love the story, can't wait for the next one!
6/14/2018 c11 stranger1999
welcome back!
This chapter was as always brilliant
The emotional intimacy between them is so on point and you wrote it so perfectly that i could feel it for myself!
The apology was great
Its actaully just how i can imagine it if it ever happened in canon!
Fantastic job and cant wait for more!
6/14/2018 c11 6DreamWeaver2121
AHHHHHH! YOU TEASE! I love it so much! you've captured them perfectly, explaining every detail do vividly while keeping true to the atmosphere you had created. It's perfect, just perfect!
6/14/2018 c11 21mautrino
Hi! Man, this chapter was so good! Definitely worth the wait, I had even just finished rereading the story recently to prepare for this one lol! Still remains one of my top favorites! You just make your writing feel so seamless :D Natsu is so sweet to think of her & take her up there to see the stars! Great scene. I also thought the apology & Aquarius scenes were really good too! Felt like it was just the right amount of emotion & understanding on both of their parts. My heart ached (in a good way!) at the "I think that means we belong together" line, so good. & of course I didn't mind that bit of citrus at the end, just makes me look forward to the next chapter even more! lol ;D

P.S. Hope everything went well with your finals & everything! Definitely know what a bitch those can be!
6/13/2018 c11 AzmariaMinohi
YEEEEEESSSSSS! Update! I love it! It has been too long! *fangirls incessantly*
6/13/2018 c11 13UnderratedOver
this is probably my favourite chapter to date? its so good actually? in all seriousness tho I absolutely loved this chapter. one of the reasons this fic is one of my favorites is the actual relationship of natsu and lucy- their emotions and character- and you just wright them so unbelievably well. im a sucker for fluff, with that little hint of something more, and you hit that nail right on the head. good job! ill be eagerly awaiting the last few chapters other future works. <3
6/13/2018 c11 2Krimzen
Can't wait for the next one :) great job
6/13/2018 c11 13waiting-for-you443
Oh my goodness, the very beginning scene where they were cuddling and looking at the stars actually melted my heart. Like, literally. You just write intimacy so well, and I’m not talking about sex itself. You write the emotional intimacy between them so perfectly. Can’t wait to see what happens next!
6/13/2018 c11 23Pepin-Bones
Oh my! *blushes shamelessly* To answer your question, yes I thought you captured the expected emotions and ramp up well! It was very well written, descriptive, enticing, and hot! Keep up the good work!
6/13/2018 c11 12TheJSmooth
You can't leave me like this! Lol You dawg!
Other than that, this was a perfect way for them to have closure before moving onto... well that ;)
Natsu and Lucy are perfect for each other and this story proves it. You have done amazingly well and I look forward to re-reading all the chapters once the story has its final chapter.
6/4/2018 c10 6DreamWeaver2121
I've read and re-read this story seven times now in an effort to placate myself while you're busy being a good student. The wait has become agonizing, I beg of thee: update soon!
6/2/2018 c1 AS86
Love this story! Can’t wait for an update :-).
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