for The Ninja Overlord Part 1: Rise of an Overlord!11/15/2018 c4 004
i dont like this but i admit that its pretty good, just not to my tastes, vulcan is way better
i dont like this but i admit that its pretty good, just not to my tastes, vulcan is way better
11/15/2018 c2 Razorbeast
Awesome chapter.
Hoping the minion master, advisor and personal right-claw of many Overlords Gnarl will be in this story :)
Because "Evil Always Finds a Way." — Gnarl's catchphrase in Overlord.
Awesome chapter.
Hoping the minion master, advisor and personal right-claw of many Overlords Gnarl will be in this story :)
Because "Evil Always Finds a Way." — Gnarl's catchphrase in Overlord.
11/15/2018 c1 Razorbeast
Magnificent chapter can't wait for more please update soon.
for the harem:
Mei
konan
Samui
Yugito
Tayuya
Temari
fem haku
Kurenai
Anko
Mikoto
Pakura
Yugao U.
Koyuki
Magnificent chapter can't wait for more please update soon.
for the harem:
Mei
konan
Samui
Yugito
Tayuya
Temari
fem haku
Kurenai
Anko
Mikoto
Pakura
Yugao U.
Koyuki
11/15/2018 c1 GuestReader95
"Your hair is so beautiful, I always loved the colour and how it flowed with your movements."
Wtf? This made me cringe really badly.
Minato didn't say that in the anime or the manga, why did you have to put your own cringey version in there?
"Your hair is so beautiful, I always loved the colour and how it flowed with your movements."
Wtf? This made me cringe really badly.
Minato didn't say that in the anime or the manga, why did you have to put your own cringey version in there?
11/8/2018 c10 Guest
non of the ninja village's in Naruto are good they are all evil since they use child soldiers
non of the ninja village's in Naruto are good they are all evil since they use child soldiers
11/8/2018 c10 Guest
only problem being the civi council has been there since before the 3rd took office the first time.
only problem being the civi council has been there since before the 3rd took office the first time.
10/20/2018 c10 Tony-Yayo
10 whole chapters and 1 wasted year. Trying to build tension for your 'plot' is all well and good when you have something to supplement the reader with. When you fail at that task you waste not only the readers time, but your own time. You should really stop writing.
10 whole chapters and 1 wasted year. Trying to build tension for your 'plot' is all well and good when you have something to supplement the reader with. When you fail at that task you waste not only the readers time, but your own time. You should really stop writing.
10/19/2018 c10 
2willam and jack and jake
Interesting I never thought I would read a fanfic where some of the Civilian Council was on Naruto's side. Well done.
2willam and jack and jakeInteresting I never thought I would read a fanfic where some of the Civilian Council was on Naruto's side. Well done.
10/19/2018 c10 KamiKageRyuuketsu
Pick up the fucking pace you stupid little bitch u have wasted 10 chapters on useless bullshit no one fucking cares about you sad pathetic little bitch
Pick up the fucking pace you stupid little bitch u have wasted 10 chapters on useless bullshit no one fucking cares about you sad pathetic little bitch
10/17/2018 c10 LordofTerror
this definitely should have been posted earlier in the chapters does throw off the flow of the story
this definitely should have been posted earlier in the chapters does throw off the flow of the story