for The Ninja Overlord Part 1: Rise of an Overlord!5/25/2020 c17 Redlinner
Yo!
I suggest you to re-read the Pain arc. How the bodies have infiltrate the village without alarm? because the kuchiyose no jutsu( summon technic).
Otherwise? Akane (Or Naruko) can help for the girls of futur (and train their for the Uzumaki clan).
What do you think?
Yo!
I suggest you to re-read the Pain arc. How the bodies have infiltrate the village without alarm? because the kuchiyose no jutsu( summon technic).
Otherwise? Akane (Or Naruko) can help for the girls of futur (and train their for the Uzumaki clan).
What do you think?
5/1/2020 c10 Rairi Valelira
Enough with the flashbacks damn... it would have been less annoying if they were put in earlier so that you didn't go back several years in the story. Switching between point of view is not taboo you know.
Enough with the flashbacks damn... it would have been less annoying if they were put in earlier so that you didn't go back several years in the story. Switching between point of view is not taboo you know.
4/26/2020 c6 Rishi2001
wow Bro ..
You went such high length to create this depth in this story's background its Great and everything makes sense
wow Bro ..
You went such high length to create this depth in this story's background its Great and everything makes sense
4/18/2020 c17 
31529
A couple of comments...
First the barrierMadara' got past the barrier to help massacre the Uchiha so it can't be completely without flaw. Similarly, Itachi and Kisame were in the village with no problems... Honestly, with the number of issues that Konoha had throughout the story, it seems that the barrier is more of a rumor than an actually effective technique.
Second, the kitsune: I don't recall how it was originally worded, but a loophole could be found perhaps because Naruto adopted them prior to being a ninja. Laws with ridiculously stupid loopholes are written all the time,it would not be out of the ordinary for something like that to occur.
Thanks for writing.
31529A couple of comments...
First the barrierMadara' got past the barrier to help massacre the Uchiha so it can't be completely without flaw. Similarly, Itachi and Kisame were in the village with no problems... Honestly, with the number of issues that Konoha had throughout the story, it seems that the barrier is more of a rumor than an actually effective technique.
Second, the kitsune: I don't recall how it was originally worded, but a loophole could be found perhaps because Naruto adopted them prior to being a ninja. Laws with ridiculously stupid loopholes are written all the time,it would not be out of the ordinary for something like that to occur.
Thanks for writing.
4/17/2020 c17 Mutant Ascension
I don't see what the problem is with using the minion gate because if I remember correctly it is a teleportation system and if that's the case of long as the gate is inside of the barrier it would not be able to detect detect when someone uses it to teleport in or out after all teleportation techniques are extremely rare in the Shinobi World so even if the barrier could detect teleportation techniques which I highly highly doubt it can because Obito can get into the village undetected using his, so even if it could I'm pretty sure it would only be able to detect whatever form of teleportation technique the creator knows the mechanics of and I highly doubt minion Gates would be on that list. And I'm willing to bet that the barrier around the village can only detect chakra and so none chakra users like minions would be completely invisible to it they'd be able to pass through without being detected.
In any case in short I don't see any problems with using the minion gate because as long as it's inside the barrier and the exit point is outside the barrier, then those using the gate should be completely unnoticed as far as the barrier is concerned.
I don't see what the problem is with using the minion gate because if I remember correctly it is a teleportation system and if that's the case of long as the gate is inside of the barrier it would not be able to detect detect when someone uses it to teleport in or out after all teleportation techniques are extremely rare in the Shinobi World so even if the barrier could detect teleportation techniques which I highly highly doubt it can because Obito can get into the village undetected using his, so even if it could I'm pretty sure it would only be able to detect whatever form of teleportation technique the creator knows the mechanics of and I highly doubt minion Gates would be on that list. And I'm willing to bet that the barrier around the village can only detect chakra and so none chakra users like minions would be completely invisible to it they'd be able to pass through without being detected.
In any case in short I don't see any problems with using the minion gate because as long as it's inside the barrier and the exit point is outside the barrier, then those using the gate should be completely unnoticed as far as the barrier is concerned.
4/15/2020 c17 Guest
well maybe if you finished a story instead of making 1 or 2 chapters then making a new story.
well maybe if you finished a story instead of making 1 or 2 chapters then making a new story.
4/17/2020 c17 Robert77833
Is there any chance of you continuing your HP stories while this is on hold? That would be amazing.
Is there any chance of you continuing your HP stories while this is on hold? That would be amazing.
4/15/2020 c17 highrise75
I dont know about the rest but im pretty sure the barrier only detects things going through so as long as the minion gate was inside the barrier it should be fine because it would bypass instead of going through the barrier
I dont know about the rest but im pretty sure the barrier only detects things going through so as long as the minion gate was inside the barrier it should be fine because it would bypass instead of going through the barrier
4/15/2020 c17 3doubledamn
The village is surrounded by a wall, right? The Barrier, does it detect people trying to get via Chakra use? You might be able to bypass it using non-chakra techniques to scale the Wall. Even if it wasn't originally a hole in the defences, I could see Danzo arguing that maintaining the non-chakra aspects of the Barrier was a waste of time and money, either to fund other projects, or because maintaining the Barrier would give people a wider knowledge of Fuinjutsu.
3doubledamnThe village is surrounded by a wall, right? The Barrier, does it detect people trying to get via Chakra use? You might be able to bypass it using non-chakra techniques to scale the Wall. Even if it wasn't originally a hole in the defences, I could see Danzo arguing that maintaining the non-chakra aspects of the Barrier was a waste of time and money, either to fund other projects, or because maintaining the Barrier would give people a wider knowledge of Fuinjutsu.
4/15/2020 c17 tsubaki77
thank it nice story to solve plot hole , for barrier is made by uzmaki so backdoor exist. his lineage or prisoners state combined give him pass ex anbu couldn't catch him after prank . for all other problem seal :seal his pet and girl memory like kurma and shadow clone or use clone to backup their mind blood clone
thank it nice story to solve plot hole , for barrier is made by uzmaki so backdoor exist. his lineage or prisoners state combined give him pass ex anbu couldn't catch him after prank . for all other problem seal :seal his pet and girl memory like kurma and shadow clone or use clone to backup their mind blood clone