for Fixing Chapters - Her hero, His savior1/27/2021 c2 
2DragonshadowRyukage
I hope to see a chapter here soon, but god luck on all your projects and such!
Thank you for writing,
A random reader
2DragonshadowRyukageI hope to see a chapter here soon, but god luck on all your projects and such!
Thank you for writing,
A random reader
10/7/2020 c2 Borello
the story is interesting and really good.
the story is interesting and really good.
2/24/2020 c1 The Critical One
Underserved views, reviews, attention, and nothing put into it while being only two chapters in. When are people gonna start making smarter content?
This isn't Naruto at all, this is an OC that you have the arrongance to name and base him off of.
I think this is all that needs to be said in a story where Naruto us nothing more than a character shoved in due to wish fulfillment. If you were actually creative, just using an OC was good enough. You put him into a world because: "FANFICTION, WISH FULFILLMENT, YAYYYYY!"
Imagine what other crossovers can be made with the same method that doesn't involve Naruto. In fact, Naruto doesn't even have to be part of the story at all.
Underserved views, reviews, attention, and nothing put into it while being only two chapters in. When are people gonna start making smarter content?
This isn't Naruto at all, this is an OC that you have the arrongance to name and base him off of.
I think this is all that needs to be said in a story where Naruto us nothing more than a character shoved in due to wish fulfillment. If you were actually creative, just using an OC was good enough. You put him into a world because: "FANFICTION, WISH FULFILLMENT, YAYYYYY!"
Imagine what other crossovers can be made with the same method that doesn't involve Naruto. In fact, Naruto doesn't even have to be part of the story at all.
5/21/2019 c1 allentey
cut the umi thing please. I thought dattebayo is bad, but now i know there is something more bad. Just let umu thing for momonga and not naruto.
cut the umi thing please. I thought dattebayo is bad, but now i know there is something more bad. Just let umu thing for momonga and not naruto.
5/15/2019 c1 1Huntsman331
Please... Refer to him as Gilgamesh and have him acted like actual gilgamesh. I don't want my favorite antagonist in anime history to act like an idiot.
1Huntsman331Please... Refer to him as Gilgamesh and have him acted like actual gilgamesh. I don't want my favorite antagonist in anime history to act like an idiot.
5/7/2019 c2 Guest
Thank you for your hard work
Thank you for your hard work
5/7/2019 c2 Darck Master
This is a disaster, you are playing with a hand grenade, I wish you good luck. :)
This is a disaster, you are playing with a hand grenade, I wish you good luck. :)
4/23/2019 c8 narutohater
I see you have future projects like Naruto x Live Date, Rosario, Infinite Stratos and Hotd.
poor Shido, Tsukune, Ichika, Takashi, they will still be trashed and their harems stolen by Naruto.
In short, it is still and always Naruto used as harem protagonist to their detriment.
don't tell me that I am wrong since it is the norm in the naruto crossovers, and rare are the crossovers to be spared by this narutomania
when it's not Issei, it's either Ichika, Tsukune or Takashi.
if only naruto fans could create other than Naruto flying all the girls of other characters but no.
I see you have future projects like Naruto x Live Date, Rosario, Infinite Stratos and Hotd.
poor Shido, Tsukune, Ichika, Takashi, they will still be trashed and their harems stolen by Naruto.
In short, it is still and always Naruto used as harem protagonist to their detriment.
don't tell me that I am wrong since it is the norm in the naruto crossovers, and rare are the crossovers to be spared by this narutomania
when it's not Issei, it's either Ichika, Tsukune or Takashi.
if only naruto fans could create other than Naruto flying all the girls of other characters but no.
4/23/2019 c8 french guest
sincerely I would have preferred Asia to be paired with Issei, the brother / sister relationship between Naruto and Asia suited better!
seriously author there are dozens of girls in Dxd, why Asia!
I love Issei x Asia, why ruin one of the most beautiful pairings by forcing Asia into Naruto's harem?
Is that just why you removed Issei? so that Naruto can have Asia in his harem? disgusting, for me Issei x Asia is one of the most beautiful pairs of Dxd.
femalle Issei?
NO female Issei please! femelle Issei is weird for me.
not only do you force Asia into Naruto's harem, but you also want to make Issei a female?
you have found nothing worse seriously? -_-
why is it always Issei who is genderbender randomly only because he's a pervert in the anime?
can't you let him as a MALE character and Issei x Asia x Irina?
please! reconsider your choices!
sincerely I would have preferred Asia to be paired with Issei, the brother / sister relationship between Naruto and Asia suited better!
seriously author there are dozens of girls in Dxd, why Asia!
I love Issei x Asia, why ruin one of the most beautiful pairings by forcing Asia into Naruto's harem?
Is that just why you removed Issei? so that Naruto can have Asia in his harem? disgusting, for me Issei x Asia is one of the most beautiful pairs of Dxd.
femalle Issei?
NO female Issei please! femelle Issei is weird for me.
not only do you force Asia into Naruto's harem, but you also want to make Issei a female?
you have found nothing worse seriously? -_-
why is it always Issei who is genderbender randomly only because he's a pervert in the anime?
can't you let him as a MALE character and Issei x Asia x Irina?
please! reconsider your choices!
4/21/2019 c1 Guest
It'll be funny if Naruto was prison raped
It'll be funny if Naruto was prison raped
4/7/2019 c3 Meelan Ghalley
First of all I fucking Disagree that the fucking risa is more beautiful then the goodness albedo she is like the perfect women that got everything from to toe and still got more to show than that spoiled,minulatipate bitch of a fucking desgrase of a fucking 9/10 anime fan would vote albedo is more beautiful and risa just got breast(like fucking humanguase and that is fu king turn off for me but albedo got them 3 B butt,breastt,brainn.
First of all I fucking Disagree that the fucking risa is more beautiful then the goodness albedo she is like the perfect women that got everything from to toe and still got more to show than that spoiled,minulatipate bitch of a fucking desgrase of a fucking 9/10 anime fan would vote albedo is more beautiful and risa just got breast(like fucking humanguase and that is fu king turn off for me but albedo got them 3 B butt,breastt,brainn.