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10/24/2020 c6 Starlord Master
Kim needs closure.
10/24/2020 c5 Starlord Master
A blowjob sounds great.
10/24/2020 c4 Starlord Master
This bites.
10/24/2020 c3 Starlord Master
Poor Kim.
10/24/2020 c2 Starlord Master
I love your work.
10/24/2020 c1 Starlord Master
JimTim are geniuses!
9/16/2019 c6 Guest
Dude thank you for this story hope there is a second Jim Tim kim story
Pa you are obsessions with oil wrestling lol
7/21/2019 c6 Draco
Si si la venganza es lo mejor que sufran que sufran
3/12/2018 c5 TheSteveKrew
The belt around her waist must be very tight is she's all oily. I think it would slip off. lol
3/12/2018 c4 TheSteveKrew
So in your world Kim blowing her brothers is OK but having intercourse with her brothers is not? huh?
3/12/2018 c1 TheSteveKrew
Why didn't she say, "What's The Sitch" instead of What The Hell? lol
3/12/2018 c6 9ChrisPalmer
Hello everyone. Chris here.

Please go back and re-read Cheer fight. (the 1st story) I re-wrote parts of it to make this series fit better.

A lot of people have told me that this "brain washing" is kinda silly. Would it really change her brain to LOVE forced oral if just just did it one night? So I "tweeked" the story to make it seem more realistic. It's not perfect, but it does make the brain washing a lot more believable now.

Also, people have told me that in the first story, Cheer Fight, Ron seemed very unsympathetic to his girlfriend being dragged off to a glory hole and he did nothing to stop it. Well, I fixed that. Sort of.

I also added a NEW chapter to that story too. I thought I rushed through the 15 guys too quick. After all if she has to give a BJ to 15 guys, time went buy too fast! lol

I know it's NOT perfect, but I think the re-dos make the story a lot better. Please RE-READ my first story - Cheer Fight - and let me know what you think of the changes.

Thanks

See you this Summer with I continue Cheer Fight 3: Kim's revenge!
12/4/2017 c1 ChrisPalmer
Thank you everyone for the reviews. The reviews (good or bad) let me know what direction to take it and what ideas to add. (A lot of people said I'm missing a sense or realism)

And of course, thank you for loving this series. Yes...there will be a 3rd story in this series but with my jobs and other things it probably won't be posted for a few months yet. I'm thinking April or as late as May 2018.

Also, Cheer Fight 3: Kim's Revenge will probably be my last Kim Possible story too. I still want to write adult fan fiction I just want to move on to other cartoons. Like maybe a story involving Gwen from Ben 10 or Wendy in Gravity Falls (I like red heads...lol)

Thanks again for all the reviews.

Be sure to follow me on my Twitter, Facebook or Tumblr.

Chris
12/4/2017 c6 14Harem Lover 26
Well it was a good story that showed just how deeply Kim has been affected by her first sexual experience. Could you give some hints to what is going to be part three, like who are the main characters.
12/3/2017 c6 Crimson Candlelight
Kim seems to be enjoying this way too much, especially considering that she just gave blowjobs to both of her brothers. I'd expect her to feel even more disgusted and violated than she did after the gloryhole, simply because it was her brothers and not strangers or classmates. I'd also expect her to worry that the tweebs will go back on their word, that they won't help her and will demand more blowjobs or threaten to tell their parents that Kim forcibly sucked their dicks against their wills. Sure, they'd be lying their asses off, but who do you think their parents would believe, especially if the tweebs showed them the video of the gloryhole incident? Frankly, I think Kim made a HUGE mistake in trusting the tweebs and giving in to their demand for blowjobs.

And I don't know how Kim could be turned on after she sucked off her brothers. During the act, I could see her losing herself in the moment, blocking out what she was doing and to whom she was doing it, but afterward, I'd think the ick-factor, guilt, regret and disgust would overwhelm her, regardless of whether or not her body was turned on. Emotions can kill the mood ANYTIME sex is involved, and I would've expected that here. In fact, I would've expected Kim to break down in the shower, curl up into a ball and cry because of what she'd done and the fear of what she might be becoming, what with these new and strange desires to be controlled, dominated and humiliated. I still don't know where that's coming from, these desires for things completely out of character for her. As I said before, one incident, no matter how long it lasted, wouldn't alter her behavior, wouldn't make her want things she's never wanted before.

I also find it curious that she doesn't seem all that bothered by the potential consequences of what she's just done. She did something deplorable with her brothers, and in the process cheated on her boyfriend. And yet she's pretty much unaffected by it. Not exactly realistic or in character.

While the porn element of the story is good, just like the last story, I wish there was more depth to the story as a whole. I'd like to see Kim struggle more with what she's doing and see more of the emotional consequences of her actions. I don't think Kim could just shrug this stuff off, and the more she does these terrible things, the more torn up inside she'd become. Granted, that would put a damper on the porntastic nature of the stories for some people, but I enjoy a well-rounded story, even when porn is the main focus.

Anyway, I may not agree with all of your choices, but again I applaud you for writing the story that you want to write. Hopefully, the next story will clear up some of the concerns I have.
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