for Star Wars: The Force Wills5/18 c127 
6Black Magic99
lol
sith: the light side makes you weak
jedi: the dark side is a chain
Reven: you are both right
...
both: nani?!
6Black Magic99lol
sith: the light side makes you weak
jedi: the dark side is a chain
Reven: you are both right
...
both: nani?!
5/17 c127 5ShadowLDrago
Trying to convince me that Andan Alde of all people had fallen into Palpatine's web and the Dark Side? Is, that an OC?
She appeared again, this time wearing the illusionary mask of Ky Narec, Asajj's old Jedi Master, already in mid-swing with her red blade seeking nightsister's neck. Huh, that raises questions. How did they figure out this power? And how long did it take them to get this good at it?
I therefore didn't rely on it. Probably for the best.
I'd like to meet the person who could keep up the Force Cloak, Mind Illusions and a strong enough TK shield to dampen their sonic signature in the environment as well. I mean, theoretically Anakin or Luke? But, they're more raw force than finesse.
Any youngling learning saber theory in the academy would tell you that a lightsaber blade had no aerodynamic wing properties to create lift, no matter how fast you spun it. Probably a Force Technique.
She had been in the classes of Master Cin Drallig, the Order's Battlemaster, and no amount of subsequent instruction by Palpatine or his other Sith lackeys such as Sly Moore could erase that legacy. However, it was also clear that her time as an inquisitor had an impact - she was too used to the quick kill from ambush thanks to her Force Cloak. So, we're fighting someone who's a skilled fighter who's been very much classically trained, but has also been doing assassinations long enough that they're rusty.
The blade of a yellow lightsaber burst out of the inquisitor's chest and she gaped, her breath hitching badly as she tried to pull air into her lungs but found it impossible. There's Ventress.
Her most notable feature was the solid black veil that was strapped over her eyes. Huh.
"Yes, much is explained," I sighed. "All miraluka are Force Sensitive and if there is one race in this galaxy that has an affinity for mindwalking…" That checks out.
"Palpatine has inherited a mantle of knowledge from the Sith, especially from his own former master, which gives him a measure of control over life and death. We can't let this inquisitor's body fall back into his hands." Wise.
"You'll see," was her only explanation. "Besides, we want to leave as little evidence as possible here." Makes sense to me.
The file noted that at some point as an initiate she had 'expressed a disturbing fascination with the Dark Side'. Ah. Possibly a budding sociopath.
It would be interesting to go over the records of the last twenty to thirty years of the Agricorps and see the number of dead or mysteriously missing Jedi from the numerous worlds that they administered. I suspect the number is higher than you'd like.
"Then I will… be grateful for your assistance in keeping Maul stable through this process. Do what you must to keep him alive, just in case." That may be tricky, given his physical and mental health are probably in shit shape.
The problem was, no amount of 'healing' could compensate for the lack of certain essential minerals and nutrients. It was like building on top of a slowly eroding foundation. Checks out.
His physicality and strength was actually quite compromised. Again, I'm not very surprised.
Maul sprained his own back as his entire body went briefly into a painful spasm. Such was the pain that he didn't even have the energy to let out more than a weak scream. Jesus.
At first it was just a huge mass of green, then separated into two distinct long cylinders. Proper legs.
Maul screamed in pain and with horror I realized that Asajj and Talzin hadn't just forged dead metal. The only words I could give it was living biometal. Oh. They're making him Cybertronian legs.
His body writhed and I had to throw up a minor TK shield around my montrals to spare them the shrill scream as I sensed the ichor work on his internal organs and blood, cleansing them of impurities and even working on repairing the DNA from accumulated radiation damage. Nightsister magick is no joke, huh?
Finally, Maul's screaming stopped, his restored body relaxing into a mere slumber on the troop deck's floor. Probably the best night's sleep he's had in years.
Now the problem was Maul himself. He's still not terribly fond of Jedi.
"This is naturally amazing work, but he will need to eat like a hutt for the next week to support the changes you've made." Checks out, given how energy it takes to sustain a human body. Still, probably a lot better than he's eaten in ages.
the cost was unfathomably large as Maul was practically exposed to every strong Force-User of note in the galaxy. Sounds about right. So, best to not antagonize him.
"Yet never, did I imagine it would lead me to a Nightsister and a Jedi, working together and my actual mother…" Life puts things in a funny order.
"Fascinating," Maul breathed. "Could it be that the galaxy has finally produced a Jedi who isn't blinded?" In a manner of speaking.
"You carry a WESTAR blaster, two lightsabers with synthetic kyber… no, three and this ship… Could it be that you are Mandalorian too?" I love how clever he is when he can think straight.
"And you think he can be defeated? Despite everything?" Yes.
"You are insane to think it's possible." Perhaps. But given what happens if he wins?
He sneered and glared at me with gritted teeth, the Dark Side rising and the Omen's hull began creaking… To break someone out of a cult mentality is no easy task.
5ShadowLDragoTrying to convince me that Andan Alde of all people had fallen into Palpatine's web and the Dark Side? Is, that an OC?
She appeared again, this time wearing the illusionary mask of Ky Narec, Asajj's old Jedi Master, already in mid-swing with her red blade seeking nightsister's neck. Huh, that raises questions. How did they figure out this power? And how long did it take them to get this good at it?
I therefore didn't rely on it. Probably for the best.
I'd like to meet the person who could keep up the Force Cloak, Mind Illusions and a strong enough TK shield to dampen their sonic signature in the environment as well. I mean, theoretically Anakin or Luke? But, they're more raw force than finesse.
Any youngling learning saber theory in the academy would tell you that a lightsaber blade had no aerodynamic wing properties to create lift, no matter how fast you spun it. Probably a Force Technique.
She had been in the classes of Master Cin Drallig, the Order's Battlemaster, and no amount of subsequent instruction by Palpatine or his other Sith lackeys such as Sly Moore could erase that legacy. However, it was also clear that her time as an inquisitor had an impact - she was too used to the quick kill from ambush thanks to her Force Cloak. So, we're fighting someone who's a skilled fighter who's been very much classically trained, but has also been doing assassinations long enough that they're rusty.
The blade of a yellow lightsaber burst out of the inquisitor's chest and she gaped, her breath hitching badly as she tried to pull air into her lungs but found it impossible. There's Ventress.
Her most notable feature was the solid black veil that was strapped over her eyes. Huh.
"Yes, much is explained," I sighed. "All miraluka are Force Sensitive and if there is one race in this galaxy that has an affinity for mindwalking…" That checks out.
"Palpatine has inherited a mantle of knowledge from the Sith, especially from his own former master, which gives him a measure of control over life and death. We can't let this inquisitor's body fall back into his hands." Wise.
"You'll see," was her only explanation. "Besides, we want to leave as little evidence as possible here." Makes sense to me.
The file noted that at some point as an initiate she had 'expressed a disturbing fascination with the Dark Side'. Ah. Possibly a budding sociopath.
It would be interesting to go over the records of the last twenty to thirty years of the Agricorps and see the number of dead or mysteriously missing Jedi from the numerous worlds that they administered. I suspect the number is higher than you'd like.
"Then I will… be grateful for your assistance in keeping Maul stable through this process. Do what you must to keep him alive, just in case." That may be tricky, given his physical and mental health are probably in shit shape.
The problem was, no amount of 'healing' could compensate for the lack of certain essential minerals and nutrients. It was like building on top of a slowly eroding foundation. Checks out.
His physicality and strength was actually quite compromised. Again, I'm not very surprised.
Maul sprained his own back as his entire body went briefly into a painful spasm. Such was the pain that he didn't even have the energy to let out more than a weak scream. Jesus.
At first it was just a huge mass of green, then separated into two distinct long cylinders. Proper legs.
Maul screamed in pain and with horror I realized that Asajj and Talzin hadn't just forged dead metal. The only words I could give it was living biometal. Oh. They're making him Cybertronian legs.
His body writhed and I had to throw up a minor TK shield around my montrals to spare them the shrill scream as I sensed the ichor work on his internal organs and blood, cleansing them of impurities and even working on repairing the DNA from accumulated radiation damage. Nightsister magick is no joke, huh?
Finally, Maul's screaming stopped, his restored body relaxing into a mere slumber on the troop deck's floor. Probably the best night's sleep he's had in years.
Now the problem was Maul himself. He's still not terribly fond of Jedi.
"This is naturally amazing work, but he will need to eat like a hutt for the next week to support the changes you've made." Checks out, given how energy it takes to sustain a human body. Still, probably a lot better than he's eaten in ages.
the cost was unfathomably large as Maul was practically exposed to every strong Force-User of note in the galaxy. Sounds about right. So, best to not antagonize him.
"Yet never, did I imagine it would lead me to a Nightsister and a Jedi, working together and my actual mother…" Life puts things in a funny order.
"Fascinating," Maul breathed. "Could it be that the galaxy has finally produced a Jedi who isn't blinded?" In a manner of speaking.
"You carry a WESTAR blaster, two lightsabers with synthetic kyber… no, three and this ship… Could it be that you are Mandalorian too?" I love how clever he is when he can think straight.
"And you think he can be defeated? Despite everything?" Yes.
"You are insane to think it's possible." Perhaps. But given what happens if he wins?
He sneered and glared at me with gritted teeth, the Dark Side rising and the Omen's hull began creaking… To break someone out of a cult mentality is no easy task.
5/17 c127 5Monkey D. Conan
Like she said, Maul is many things…which includes being pragmatic enough to see the truth laid before him and choose to take any opportunity possible to fight back against fate itself if need be. Excellent work as always! Can’t wait for more!
5Monkey D. ConanLike she said, Maul is many things…which includes being pragmatic enough to see the truth laid before him and choose to take any opportunity possible to fight back against fate itself if need be. Excellent work as always! Can’t wait for more!
5/17 c127 Pjo crossovers
Maul is cracking a bit, his most desperate desires vs the knowledge that if he acts on them he’ll fail.
Maul is cracking a bit, his most desperate desires vs the knowledge that if he acts on them he’ll fail.
5/17 c127 ArashiNokitsune
that is just powerful right there in its own right just that ultimate message right there in the conversation choose a fate that is nothing but a foregone conclusion or choose another destiny a new path
that is just powerful right there in its own right just that ultimate message right there in the conversation choose a fate that is nothing but a foregone conclusion or choose another destiny a new path
5/13 c126 Guest
Wish you would resume updating your “Exodus of Stars” story!
Wish you would resume updating your “Exodus of Stars” story!