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10/14 c25 2acetwolf94
I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!
10/3 c1 Shetan20
Thank you for an enjoyable chapter.
8/21 c11 Heyo
Best story ever!
3/4 c25 Aratherfluffyfatcat
Enjoying the story thanks
10/15/2021 c25 Skellefte
please update I love it
8/29/2021 c25 vampire moonlight
update soon please!
8/2/2021 c25 Tray85
I am really in joying this story it’s really funny when Tom gets mad for Harry whenever someone wrongs him and Harry has to hold him back
6/28/2021 c7 Guest
I like your plot very much! Just want to feedback that things seem to be a bit over the top - too much to be realistically believed, even in an AU where Harry is MOD. The degree of compulsions/ extent of betrayal/ power and talents Harry feels too exaggerated for my liking. That's in my opinion, so please don't feel offended! It's what is preventing this fic from being a great next level work. You have a lot of things going for you- a pretty engaging writing style, nice plot line, a number of interesting OCs like Death, Life, Mischief and Mayham (I liked those!). The content just needs some moderating so it doesn't feel so in-your-face. Thank you for writing this, I look forward to seeing where the story goes all the same :)
4/17/2021 c6 110Right What Is Wrong
That poor goblin. Seeing a "date of death" over a century-and-a-half in the future must have been a total mind screw.
4/17/2021 c1 Right What Is Wrong
Summary is confusing.
"Harry has lived a long and fulfilling life as a wizard, and he is ready to pass on when his time comes. Children, grandchildren, great-grandchildren, Harry was happy with the way things turned..."
...the first chapter is Harry being abjectly miserable, detailing how his entire family died in horrible ways over the generations, and killing himself?

Fic seems like a reasonable fix-it, but the summary is only accurate in that Harry has lived a long life and had great-grandchildren. Very odd.
4/8/2021 c25 llpi
You don't mention the locket horcrux at Grimmauld Place. Are we to assume that Harry passed that to Tom as well and you simply forgot to mention it in the story?!

Is Dumbledore aware of who Professor Rivers really is since he resembles Tom Riddle? And if so, why hire him? Why else does he refer to dark times ahead at the second year sorting feast? Or is it because Quirrel is murdered?
3/25/2021 c11 DaveC
Well that was nice bit like going to school but I’m all taught up now so maybe on with the story.
3/25/2021 c25 mizzrazz72
Don't forget the locket. Harry should have let him hurt Vernon at least.
10/10/2020 c9 Guest
If Harry can forgive Hermione and try to bring her on his side, then he could persuade Ron and Ginny too. All of them were children who were manipulated.
10/10/2020 c2 Guest
It seems pitiful for a 197 years old wizard to act so irrational when speaking to Death. Even if he's tired of living, he seems like a brat!
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