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3/4 c19 DevilDogOFmadness
I don't know if you are taking votes, but...

"3. Instead of becoming Star's squire, Marco becomes Hekapoo's"

I like this idea!
3/1 c19 2Mr. Haziq
I'll be honest, I've been skimming through the Jackie arc so I was little surprised when the word Atlantis popped into my vision.

Fanfic idea 34 sound good.
2/27 c19 71ADdude
I still hold to that advice. Tow storylines side by side, it's slower burn but can help you get a lot of stuff done.
Sad, looking over the list again some would have been fun to read. But you do you. Your writing is good.
11/25/2019 c1 3Falsum Deum
The summary got me interested in this story, but I like the fact that someone is actually thinking about how the time differences would work out. So I did a little math to see how long 1 second in "regular" dimensions would be compared to "Hekapoo's dimension". The answer is 1 second is around 12.175 days in Hekapoo's dimension.
11/13/2019 c5 A Random Reader
I never knew getting my heart torn to shreds, stomped on, incinerated, then heaped back together with super glue before being shoved back into my chest would be so good, but you somehow made it good.

Now excuse me while I go sob in the corner.
10/4/2019 c5 1SafeGuy1955
The last two chapters were confusing.
7/12/2019 c1 girlscanbealphas
Like red, like hoodies. Got 50 of them.
His logic is flawed
6/21/2019 c1 Guest
Oh shiiiiit
4/5/2019 c13 Jj-dog
Looks like there's been some improvement, I've got a tip, sometimes try leading a section with the characters thoughts instead of straight dialogue, that can be confusing.

And no need to be afraid of starting with the characters name. Ex. Jackie was...

Seems bad in your head but works really well.
3/9/2019 c16 2Mr. Haziq
Huh. Didn't know the Diaz family knew comic book writer Grant Morrison.
12/21/2018 c15 Mr. Haziq
Oh dear...
12/20/2018 c15 FANGLE
Yes this is very good
11/4/2018 c5 9mochafraptor
Fuck dude. This is great stuff, but man is it heavy!
10/10/2018 c14 4Hivedragon
Awesome story, though sometimes i was a bit lost because of jumping to another character perseptive. But other than that, looking forward to the next chapter.
9/20/2018 c14 FANGLE
Ex huh wow never thought I hear like that
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