for Kramer's Folly5/5/2018 c2 Mar Jan53
I agree with Leonore09 I dislike whimpyNeal he never would have survived as a criminal if he couldn't stand on his own feet.
I agree with Leonore09 I dislike whimpyNeal he never would have survived as a criminal if he couldn't stand on his own feet.
4/18/2018 c1 Mar Jan53
I like your rewrite better than the original less peril for Neal
I like your rewrite better than the original less peril for Neal
2/26/2018 c2 
3PastOneonta
I agree Neal would escape from anything he didn't want to be a part of, and if he had to run on Kramer he would. This was nice in that it didn't incriminate Peter and Collins was stopped from killing more suspects and Neal and Moz ran together. Thanks for posting.
3PastOneontaI agree Neal would escape from anything he didn't want to be a part of, and if he had to run on Kramer he would. This was nice in that it didn't incriminate Peter and Collins was stopped from killing more suspects and Neal and Moz ran together. Thanks for posting.
11/28/2017 c1 Leonore09
How nice to see a Neal story that does not have him as a wimpy sex toy that needs Peter to save him .I agree that Neal could have left any time
How nice to see a Neal story that does not have him as a wimpy sex toy that needs Peter to save him .I agree that Neal could have left any time