for Dust in the Wind2h c4 Gesaltwandler
In the part where six ran to class with the others, you should have made him go just a tad bit faster and slam into the door, making it fly off the hinges and go like 20 fuckin feet away. I would have laughed so hard if it was the case, other than that, good book so far.
In the part where six ran to class with the others, you should have made him go just a tad bit faster and slam into the door, making it fly off the hinges and go like 20 fuckin feet away. I would have laughed so hard if it was the case, other than that, good book so far.
16h c95 
9Imperial Romance
So Six never met a certain man in T-49 Power Armor that doesn't know when to shut up? Cause he seems to know a lot about him.
And Caesar's Legion.
And the NCR.
And the Brotherhood of Steel (which he is a member of).
9Imperial RomanceSo Six never met a certain man in T-49 Power Armor that doesn't know when to shut up? Cause he seems to know a lot about him.
And Caesar's Legion.
And the NCR.
And the Brotherhood of Steel (which he is a member of).
1/14 c95 Gigglemesh
Remember six, the people in this place deserve to be here so don't worry about keeping the safety on. Autopsies are going to show many exit wounds coming from the mouth area.
White Fang's reputation is going to go from Mixed at best to Hated after this, well except for the most radical of Faunus (never underestimate the malice of a dumb teenager and all that). At this point they're making the situation worse for everyone, even for those they "claim" to support, as hysteria and suspicion over who might have sympathies is going to turn civilians against each other. Though that's probably the plan in the end, a fun time for everyone.
I'm definitely overthinking about how bad things could get but if the Fang manage to pull off the breach after all this, but I would expect some sweeping changes in doctrine when it comes for huntsmen and law enforcement. Certainly not turning them kids into the second coming of the BOPE, but they're probably going to focus a lot more on practicality, efficiency, and getting the job done. We can't have you doing unnecessary movements and flips in a fight when every second wasted might mean a life lost. Overall, expect Goodwitch's class to get a whole lot harsher from now on, "Why did you charge into melee?! If you are out of range then you shoot them! pulling a trigger is more energy efficient than running just to throw a punch."
Sorry for the ramble, reading this story really gets the mind going. Its been a great read so far, your quality has stayed consistent. I can't wait to see how you handle what comes next!
Remember six, the people in this place deserve to be here so don't worry about keeping the safety on. Autopsies are going to show many exit wounds coming from the mouth area.
White Fang's reputation is going to go from Mixed at best to Hated after this, well except for the most radical of Faunus (never underestimate the malice of a dumb teenager and all that). At this point they're making the situation worse for everyone, even for those they "claim" to support, as hysteria and suspicion over who might have sympathies is going to turn civilians against each other. Though that's probably the plan in the end, a fun time for everyone.
I'm definitely overthinking about how bad things could get but if the Fang manage to pull off the breach after all this, but I would expect some sweeping changes in doctrine when it comes for huntsmen and law enforcement. Certainly not turning them kids into the second coming of the BOPE, but they're probably going to focus a lot more on practicality, efficiency, and getting the job done. We can't have you doing unnecessary movements and flips in a fight when every second wasted might mean a life lost. Overall, expect Goodwitch's class to get a whole lot harsher from now on, "Why did you charge into melee?! If you are out of range then you shoot them! pulling a trigger is more energy efficient than running just to throw a punch."
Sorry for the ramble, reading this story really gets the mind going. Its been a great read so far, your quality has stayed consistent. I can't wait to see how you handle what comes next!
1/14 c95 Gigglemesh
Well, remember Six, the people in there absolutely derserve to be locked up or in the dirt. So theres no point in keeping your safety on at this point. Autopsies are gonna show a lot of holes through the mouth.
At this point the White Fang’s reputation is gonna go from Mixed to Hated by most except the most radical of faunus (never underestimate the malice of a dumb teenager). Hysteria afterwards is gonna be brutal as well ‘cause people are gonna be suspicious of everyone out of worry that they have sympathies. Just a bad time for all.
I’m definitely overthinking how bad the aftermath will be this time. But im certain that if they manage to pull off the breach after this, there are gonna be some doctrine changes regarding how to handle them. Maybe not BOPE levels of brutality but certainly a higher focus on practicality, efficiency, and unnecessary flair. Just get the job done so they cant hurt anyone else.
Sorry for the ramble, had a ton of stuff in my brain i had to get out. Either way i love the chapter, your quality has always been consistent and a great read. Keep it up!
Well, remember Six, the people in there absolutely derserve to be locked up or in the dirt. So theres no point in keeping your safety on at this point. Autopsies are gonna show a lot of holes through the mouth.
At this point the White Fang’s reputation is gonna go from Mixed to Hated by most except the most radical of faunus (never underestimate the malice of a dumb teenager). Hysteria afterwards is gonna be brutal as well ‘cause people are gonna be suspicious of everyone out of worry that they have sympathies. Just a bad time for all.
I’m definitely overthinking how bad the aftermath will be this time. But im certain that if they manage to pull off the breach after this, there are gonna be some doctrine changes regarding how to handle them. Maybe not BOPE levels of brutality but certainly a higher focus on practicality, efficiency, and unnecessary flair. Just get the job done so they cant hurt anyone else.
Sorry for the ramble, had a ton of stuff in my brain i had to get out. Either way i love the chapter, your quality has always been consistent and a great read. Keep it up!
1/13 c95 Guest8492
Wait, the High Security wing; is that where the the "Not Heath Ledger Joker" at? Well this will be an interesting fight and maybe an opportunity to learn more about the setup that was supposed to ensnare Six that was hinted at.
Wait, the High Security wing; is that where the the "Not Heath Ledger Joker" at? Well this will be an interesting fight and maybe an opportunity to learn more about the setup that was supposed to ensnare Six that was hinted at.
1/12 c95 1AFatDragon
Crazy Steve ‘bout to really live up to his name. Very excited for next chapter, great work as always!
1AFatDragonCrazy Steve ‘bout to really live up to his name. Very excited for next chapter, great work as always!
1/12 c95 Hydra dominautis
Amazing chapter as usual. With lee making multiple trips from the wasteland and remnant, is it possible he brought a piece of armor that we all know is famous in 3 for its broken durability. I say this because I’m thinking lee has a connection to atlas technologies being more advanced. Especially if Lee knows Pietro, and potentially even Watts.
Amazing chapter as usual. With lee making multiple trips from the wasteland and remnant, is it possible he brought a piece of armor that we all know is famous in 3 for its broken durability. I say this because I’m thinking lee has a connection to atlas technologies being more advanced. Especially if Lee knows Pietro, and potentially even Watts.
1/11 c94 hyperiumon
love the prison break arc, adds some depth to the world, how far along are we into it?. feels about halfway rn
love the prison break arc, adds some depth to the world, how far along are we into it?. feels about halfway rn
1/11 c95 hyperiumon
the "im worse" lone is goated, wonder if well see six go sicko mode on the max imates. gotta see six not holding back.
the "im worse" lone is goated, wonder if well see six go sicko mode on the max imates. gotta see six not holding back.
1/10 c95 TigerTrainerXD
When Six starts the fight with the four convicts, his first shell is ice. But when he and Penny were clearing the comms room, he specifically cycled in a flash shell.
When Six starts the fight with the four convicts, his first shell is ice. But when he and Penny were clearing the comms room, he specifically cycled in a flash shell.
1/9 c95 soup308
So funny storyI was making Six's face in the beginning and I chose very simple faces cause it was my first time using this face editor. And so, simple beard, basically default hair color, very minor face changes. And then. I got to Nipton and met Oliver Swanick...may or may not have killed him for the lottery ticket because I though I would win something. Took his glasses cause they didn't have weight so why to Zion. Put on the ranger hat. And I go third person to look at myself and it's just Gordon Fucking Freeman staring back at me. So I accidentally made Gordon Freeman without realizing in Fallout New Vegas lmao
So funny storyI was making Six's face in the beginning and I chose very simple faces cause it was my first time using this face editor. And so, simple beard, basically default hair color, very minor face changes. And then. I got to Nipton and met Oliver Swanick...may or may not have killed him for the lottery ticket because I though I would win something. Took his glasses cause they didn't have weight so why to Zion. Put on the ranger hat. And I go third person to look at myself and it's just Gordon Fucking Freeman staring back at me. So I accidentally made Gordon Freeman without realizing in Fallout New Vegas lmao
1/10 c95 HelloEver22
Can only imagine whats going on down there, at least Six will stop it! Probably by doing something worse though
Can only imagine whats going on down there, at least Six will stop it! Probably by doing something worse though
1/9 c95 dogiyz
another absolute banger of a chapter, Six giving himself ‘fuck you’ privelages in terms of the CCT is something i look forward to being used in the future. Not one to place bets but my money’s on him somehow using that in some shape or form to fuck/help with atlas.
Also very excited to see where this next chapter goes, imagining the fight with the max security inmates is gonna be as big and as bloody as ever!
happy new year ash, hoping 2025 is treating you well
another absolute banger of a chapter, Six giving himself ‘fuck you’ privelages in terms of the CCT is something i look forward to being used in the future. Not one to place bets but my money’s on him somehow using that in some shape or form to fuck/help with atlas.
Also very excited to see where this next chapter goes, imagining the fight with the max security inmates is gonna be as big and as bloody as ever!
happy new year ash, hoping 2025 is treating you well