for Imperium Ascendant4/27 c1 Guest
Dios te bendiga Jesús te amo ️
Dios te bendiga Jesús te amo ️
4/25 c45 Guest
Dios te bendiga Jesús te amo ️ te amo
Dios te bendiga Jesús te amo ️ te amo
4/8 c14 
2dragoon109
Srry but this chapter is flawed. Firstly the lessons do not work here. Mangus was right and he won the moment he has to activate those wards. Something he wouldn't be able to do in a real fight.
On top of that the dual wasn't told at the start what limits they were fighting.
On top of that mangus was increasing his physical ability alone with his warp craft. It isn't really different than the others. It crossed the line when he turned the sword rubber . The spar should have ended there.
2dragoon109Srry but this chapter is flawed. Firstly the lessons do not work here. Mangus was right and he won the moment he has to activate those wards. Something he wouldn't be able to do in a real fight.
On top of that the dual wasn't told at the start what limits they were fighting.
On top of that mangus was increasing his physical ability alone with his warp craft. It isn't really different than the others. It crossed the line when he turned the sword rubber . The spar should have ended there.
12/31/2024 c10 Guest
I have enjoyed what i have read of this fanfic so far and I hope that you are able to continue it.
I have enjoyed what i have read of this fanfic so far and I hope that you are able to continue it.
11/13/2024 c22 Frank94
Thanks so much for this guide it gives so much mental context specially for battles to come
Thanks so much for this guide it gives so much mental context specially for battles to come
11/3/2024 c13 LillaVargR
I know you will probably not see this but about your fifth point. We know there is at least one more chaos god that could be born and that is the dark king which most probably is a dark twisted version of the emperor. Before his duel with Horus he felt the magnitude of the power Horus had consumed and tapped into and absorbed a great deal of warp energy and felt himself changing and the people felt it and some of his custodes got burned and then reanimated from the power but he didnt notice the damage and thought he could control it but he could not since the dark king is the chaos god of Ruin and destruction and would have destroyed the galaxy. That was until Ollanus Pius spoke some sense into him and he realized the damage he had been doing and stopped so there is at least one more chaos god that can be born.
I know you will probably not see this but about your fifth point. We know there is at least one more chaos god that could be born and that is the dark king which most probably is a dark twisted version of the emperor. Before his duel with Horus he felt the magnitude of the power Horus had consumed and tapped into and absorbed a great deal of warp energy and felt himself changing and the people felt it and some of his custodes got burned and then reanimated from the power but he didnt notice the damage and thought he could control it but he could not since the dark king is the chaos god of Ruin and destruction and would have destroyed the galaxy. That was until Ollanus Pius spoke some sense into him and he realized the damage he had been doing and stopped so there is at least one more chaos god that can be born.
11/1/2024 c9 Frank94
Awsome action and great story filled with just enough darkness and hope to build upon the previous chapters trully awsome work
Awsome action and great story filled with just enough darkness and hope to build upon the previous chapters trully awsome work
11/1/2024 c1 Frank94
I love how it keeps the essence of the original setting with that energy and hope and positivity that moves this story. Truly and waseome story
I love how it keeps the essence of the original setting with that energy and hope and positivity that moves this story. Truly and waseome story
10/12/2024 c13 Apollodorus13
Was really enjoying the story but this name change killed it for me honestly. Not only is it completely unnecessary but you also went against the whole “unified family” thing by giving them different last names.
If anything, it would have just made more sense to keep their orignal first names and then having Anathema as the last name they all shared.
Anyways, story was enjoyable up to this point but it really was a total mood killer
Was really enjoying the story but this name change killed it for me honestly. Not only is it completely unnecessary but you also went against the whole “unified family” thing by giving them different last names.
If anything, it would have just made more sense to keep their orignal first names and then having Anathema as the last name they all shared.
Anyways, story was enjoyable up to this point but it really was a total mood killer
3/25/2024 c40 1tirasangue
"I do not see fellow strugglers against the primordial annihilator when you stand before me. I see the vermin that drowned the galaxy in death by gnawing through a dyke. Vermin that have the gall to approach those rebuilding and asking for a place in our world."
Coldest motherfucking line by Magnus, holy shit.
1tirasangue"I do not see fellow strugglers against the primordial annihilator when you stand before me. I see the vermin that drowned the galaxy in death by gnawing through a dyke. Vermin that have the gall to approach those rebuilding and asking for a place in our world."
Coldest motherfucking line by Magnus, holy shit.
2/29/2024 c31 1valkrus
the first half of this chapter is missing spaces between the paragraphs. It genuinely looking like blocks of texts
1valkrusthe first half of this chapter is missing spaces between the paragraphs. It genuinely looking like blocks of texts
2/19/2024 c33 Cooldude101011
So the whole “stick a nearly dead Astartes into a dreadnought” thing doesn’t exist in this AU?
So the whole “stick a nearly dead Astartes into a dreadnought” thing doesn’t exist in this AU?