
3/25/2018 c1
3iMegumeru
As promised! :)
How you write the moment player went 'missing' to the time he/she returns, the nightmares that haunts her, these are well-written and strong in its delivery. Good job!

As promised! :)
How you write the moment player went 'missing' to the time he/she returns, the nightmares that haunts her, these are well-written and strong in its delivery. Good job!
1/5/2018 c1 justmonika567
that was so good I'm sad its only one chapter only one chapter wont satisfy that was literally the best thing ive ever read pls write more I need it I need it I need it I need it
I NEED IT I NEED IT I NEed IT I NEEd IT I nEEEEEEEEEEEEED ittttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt
that was so good I'm sad its only one chapter only one chapter wont satisfy that was literally the best thing ive ever read pls write more I need it I need it I need it I need it
I NEED IT I NEED IT I NEed IT I NEEd IT I nEEEEEEEEEEEEED ittttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt
12/20/2017 c1 Guest
Artful.
Artful.
12/13/2017 c1
2Restless Universe
Nice fanfic! Awesome that you included Monika's suffering in a wholesome way. :)

Nice fanfic! Awesome that you included Monika's suffering in a wholesome way. :)
12/1/2017 c1
3Speedyquader
0_0 That was... Interesting, that's for sure. Hooray for new Doki Doki Literature Club fanfics! - Is this a oneshot, or are you going to continue?

0_0 That was... Interesting, that's for sure. Hooray for new Doki Doki Literature Club fanfics! - Is this a oneshot, or are you going to continue?