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8/20 c5 Guest
Characters are OOC as all fuck, also doesn't matter if the chakra can hit internally his insides are still to strong to be hurt by them.
8/20 c2 Guest
So you are nerfing them.
6/22 c7 Dj hayes
Can you please continue this story
1/20 c1 Bluzerker
I know this is an m rating but so far there ain’t any sex yet, nor visceral gore. Maybe you could keep it that way? I know your the author and you do what you want. But I’m not a fan of porn. Not romance to that extent either, I hope you don’t take it the wrong way since I know that you don’t like criticism, up to the point of censorship to flamers. I am open minded to understand on why people like writing lemons and having polygamy. But I will stick to my beliefs.
1/4 c7 Te Amohaere Peri
Not bad not bad at all gohan now what's gonna happen to haku and zabuza
1/3 c5 Te Amohaere Peri
Yep this chapter is unrealistic as hell
1/3 c2 Te Amohaere Peri
You do know genjutsu doesn't work with a chakra network right the only exception is the infinite tsukuyomi
6/16/2020 c7 Guest
Ok, now for a real review. You managed to keep Gohan’s character true to the canon as well as his power while managing to make the scenes fun and interesting to read. A lot of authors “nerf” characters just to try to make fight scenes interesting and while I can bear that, it just ruins it a bit for me. So thank you for not doing that with this story. I do hope Gohan manages to make more friends though and that some people would warm up to him more.
6/15/2020 c1 DDusk
Actually, nvm

This story is better in some ways as well. If you want to just do this story, that’s fine too.
6/14/2020 c7 DDusk
Hello, this isn’t exactly for this story but, will you be back to update “Mirai Shinobi: Parabellum”? A lot of readers are waiting for its return. It’s a great story!
6/6/2020 c1 Sarahmounik
Nice chapter;))))))
6/3/2020 c7 1SonRanma1
Good story. Feels more authentic then many others I've read. Looking forward to the next chapter.
6/3/2020 c1 jesseshipman927
please update devil of the league
5/16/2020 c1 parzivaldetermined764
Please update Mirai Shinobi,it's been five months ...
4/27/2020 c7 Guest
I really like where the story is going. Gohan being a powerful individual who could probably defeat the toughest villains of Naruto is awesome. Keep going the nice work on that.
The only thing that bothers me is the eventuality that the shinobi learns ki abilties. I personnaly don't think that they DESERVE that. You even mentionned that Hiruzen hoped to find a way for Gohan to indirectly teach ki abilities to the shinobi forces. Even he realized that most of the village is loathing Gohan with the exception of Naruto. You see that many shinobi and clans completely disregard Gohan well-being but they selfishely believe that he will teach them is powers. Like " I want him in my clan to learn his abilities!" or "I hate him but I'm sure he will be willing to teach me his abilities". Chakra was initially used as a force of good, to be used wisely and honorably. With time, shinobi turned it into a mean for war who can be dangerous and destructive. Ki should not be used like that.
Once again, most people of Konoha are mean towards Gohan. I'm sorry, but Kurenai is acting like a bitch towards him. Kiba openly mock him (I won't be surprised if he eventually became racist with him) and Shino barely aknowledged his presence when Gohan greeted him, which is rude. Hiashi and Danzo clearly want to use him for their goals. Damn, I can only wonder how Sasuke will react when he'll see someone stronger than him who isn't even a shinobi. So, with the exceptions of a few people, Konoha does not deserve to learn Ki abilities. Gohan is already doing a much effective job than most shinobi anyway while is not even a shinobi. People should not be mad at him for not joining a military organization. Gohan as no loyalty to Konoha and that is just fine. He will fight to protect innocent people and his friends but he will not serve or be restrained by Konoha for not doing what is right by him. So fuck you Konoha, I will help those in need of help while I have the power to do so.
Anyway, now the Chunin exams will soon start! And that means that Gohan will soon meet Naruto again but alongside Team 7 and Konohamaru squad! He will also meet Suna team with Gaara, Temari and Kankuro. Gaara will probably want to kill him, Temari will crush on him and Kankruro will loath him. In other words, an interesting first meeting.
See you next chapter!
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