for Arcane Thesis8/25/2019 c7 SoraZekken
Other it being short and gray being more of oc(well there was lack of info on her in translation) the story was pretty good. Like the changes that were made for canon, wish we got to see archer EMIYA and his reaction to gray. Along with Gilgamesh.
Other it being short and gray being more of oc(well there was lack of info on her in translation) the story was pretty good. Like the changes that were made for canon, wish we got to see archer EMIYA and his reaction to gray. Along with Gilgamesh.
7/23/2019 c7 Moikan Yoloko
While I'm aware that this story is unlikely to ever be updated again, and that you perhaps do not even use this website anymore. I would just like to thank you for what has already been written and say that this is the kind of story that I've been particularly looking for (due to the release of the El Melloi II case files anime).
If you ever update thisagain I shall eagerly read what you write, regardless this was fairly well written and satisfied an itch I had about such a fanfiction.
While I'm aware that this story is unlikely to ever be updated again, and that you perhaps do not even use this website anymore. I would just like to thank you for what has already been written and say that this is the kind of story that I've been particularly looking for (due to the release of the El Melloi II case files anime).
If you ever update thisagain I shall eagerly read what you write, regardless this was fairly well written and satisfied an itch I had about such a fanfiction.
7/16/2018 c7 
2NNeko
Shame this will probably never update. Poor Saber confused with the information that El Melloi returned to the was (*shouting*that's why waver always insist with the second~!) Hoping for her meeting best duo again.
2NNekoShame this will probably never update. Poor Saber confused with the information that El Melloi returned to the was (*shouting*that's why waver always insist with the second~!) Hoping for her meeting best duo again.
6/25/2018 c7 8Gura Kruor
I like this story but read it at 4am and couldn't write something coherent.
Tbh I like the Taiga x Waver ship, thank you for letting me read a small glance... even if Waver just left her there oxo
I see you haven't updated since the last year but I hope you return to this fic some day, in the meantime I already have it in the alerts from the moment I clicked the link.
Myth and legend, ride with you ~
8Gura KruorI like this story but read it at 4am and couldn't write something coherent.
Tbh I like the Taiga x Waver ship, thank you for letting me read a small glance... even if Waver just left her there oxo
I see you haven't updated since the last year but I hope you return to this fic some day, in the meantime I already have it in the alerts from the moment I clicked the link.
Myth and legend, ride with you ~
4/16/2018 c7 G
Please update soon. I can't wait to see more. Especially more Waver, Taiga, and Rider interactions.
Please update soon. I can't wait to see more. Especially more Waver, Taiga, and Rider interactions.
4/14/2018 c7 G
Also, I can't get rid of this thought. If and when Waver finally allies with Shirou and Rin, the Emiya household dinner table would be hilarious, especially if Taiga and Iskandar were both at the table. That, and Shirou and Sakura (if she's still visiting), would have to cook a literal feast, considering Iskandar, Arturia, and Taiga. Also, would be totally awkward for Taiga and Waver to meet again so soon after he forcefully dumped her.
Also, I can't get rid of this thought. If and when Waver finally allies with Shirou and Rin, the Emiya household dinner table would be hilarious, especially if Taiga and Iskandar were both at the table. That, and Shirou and Sakura (if she's still visiting), would have to cook a literal feast, considering Iskandar, Arturia, and Taiga. Also, would be totally awkward for Taiga and Waver to meet again so soon after he forcefully dumped her.
3/17/2018 c7 G
MORE! Also, please let this hew more closely to UBW because UBW Shirou's conclusion is very similar to Iskandar's own ideal of chasing an impossible dream to the end. You, who are as small as a dot, are up against the world.
MORE! Also, please let this hew more closely to UBW because UBW Shirou's conclusion is very similar to Iskandar's own ideal of chasing an impossible dream to the end. You, who are as small as a dot, are up against the world.
3/7/2018 c7 G
Changed my mind. Caster Cu Chullain is great, just not as good as Lancer. My only problem is Assassin Medea. Will she be able to do anything, and also, when will she meet Souichirou-sama? Also, will there come a time when Taiga gets kidnapped and Waver has to save her or look after her despite his intention to never see or contact her again?
Changed my mind. Caster Cu Chullain is great, just not as good as Lancer. My only problem is Assassin Medea. Will she be able to do anything, and also, when will she meet Souichirou-sama? Also, will there come a time when Taiga gets kidnapped and Waver has to save her or look after her despite his intention to never see or contact her again?
2/20/2018 c7 G
I do have some problems with this fic. A, you should have kept Chu Chullain as Lancer, Medea as Caster, and not put Medusa in this. Can Cu Chullain even cast spells, and Medea as an assassin is the worst possible choice.
I do have some problems with this fic. A, you should have kept Chu Chullain as Lancer, Medea as Caster, and not put Medusa in this. Can Cu Chullain even cast spells, and Medea as an assassin is the worst possible choice.
1/6/2018 c7 1Dragonjek
Yeah, that's Kotomine. Takes only a few seconds to place poisonous thoughts in people's heads.
I'm a bit disappointed you skipped past Shirou meeting Saber. Even if the scene is so often similar to one another, that initial meeting with her is always a magical moment to read.
Hm... so. Servants. I like what you've done with subverting their standard classes. LancerMedusa, CasterCu Chulainn, AssassinMedea. Iskandar is still Rider, but he's from a different War... it's a bit disappointing that Saber's left the same while everything else changed, but you already filled the Lancer and Rider classes that would otherwise have suited her (a couple of the irregular classes might fit; Ruler, possibly even Shielder considering that she has the Prydwen shield Noble Phantasm in her legend).
So we're left with Archer and Berserker...
The Einzbern will certainly have ensured that Illya is given one of the most powerful Servants possible to summon. It really depends on whether or not Rin summons EMIYA; he wouldn't be a Berserker.
But there are some ludicrously powerful non-Gilgamesh Archers out there... but more fitting to your switching around of classes, I remember how the class that fit Heracles most (out of his high synch to every single class but Caster...) was Archer. That's pretty terrifying. Setting aside how he would actually have a Noble Phantasm (multiple, considering his legend), and how he could properly use the Nine Lives techniques to shoot a hundred arrows simultaneously with the Bow of Hydra steeped in the lethal blood of Hydra-setting ALL that aside-he still has the absolutely ludicrous physical strength of Heracles, high-ranked Divinity, and would now be able to fully apply the intelligence, skill, and technique that enabled him to perform the 12 impossible tasks that would each earn a aspiring hero a place in the Throne of Heroes of their own accord.
But Berserker Heracles is crazy powerful enough. Especially with how the Einzbern sacrificed more of his reasoning and independent thought for more power (and less risk of betrayal) and Illya can run his high-tier Madness Enhancement pretty much nonstop with the sheer amount of magic circuits, prana, and Command Seals packed into her tiny body.
I look forwards to Gray and Saber meeting. Considering that Gray is possibly a descendant of Artoria's (how would that work, anyways? Mordred originated from sperm stolen from genderbent Artoria (goddamnit Merlin), but when it came to sex she was inexperienced. Did Morgana make more homunculi? That might explain why Gray's considered so creepy), and her family has preserved Rhongomyniad for centuries, it should be interesting. Heh... does that mean that Artoria could reclaim possession of it as a Noble Phantasm, like she did in the Fate route with Avalon?
Unless something unusual happens, though, it might not be worth it. Servants get both certain benefits and certain limitations due to class, and I just don't think she'd be as skilled with a lance as a Saber as she would normally be.
1DragonjekYeah, that's Kotomine. Takes only a few seconds to place poisonous thoughts in people's heads.
I'm a bit disappointed you skipped past Shirou meeting Saber. Even if the scene is so often similar to one another, that initial meeting with her is always a magical moment to read.
Hm... so. Servants. I like what you've done with subverting their standard classes. LancerMedusa, CasterCu Chulainn, AssassinMedea. Iskandar is still Rider, but he's from a different War... it's a bit disappointing that Saber's left the same while everything else changed, but you already filled the Lancer and Rider classes that would otherwise have suited her (a couple of the irregular classes might fit; Ruler, possibly even Shielder considering that she has the Prydwen shield Noble Phantasm in her legend).
So we're left with Archer and Berserker...
The Einzbern will certainly have ensured that Illya is given one of the most powerful Servants possible to summon. It really depends on whether or not Rin summons EMIYA; he wouldn't be a Berserker.
But there are some ludicrously powerful non-Gilgamesh Archers out there... but more fitting to your switching around of classes, I remember how the class that fit Heracles most (out of his high synch to every single class but Caster...) was Archer. That's pretty terrifying. Setting aside how he would actually have a Noble Phantasm (multiple, considering his legend), and how he could properly use the Nine Lives techniques to shoot a hundred arrows simultaneously with the Bow of Hydra steeped in the lethal blood of Hydra-setting ALL that aside-he still has the absolutely ludicrous physical strength of Heracles, high-ranked Divinity, and would now be able to fully apply the intelligence, skill, and technique that enabled him to perform the 12 impossible tasks that would each earn a aspiring hero a place in the Throne of Heroes of their own accord.
But Berserker Heracles is crazy powerful enough. Especially with how the Einzbern sacrificed more of his reasoning and independent thought for more power (and less risk of betrayal) and Illya can run his high-tier Madness Enhancement pretty much nonstop with the sheer amount of magic circuits, prana, and Command Seals packed into her tiny body.
I look forwards to Gray and Saber meeting. Considering that Gray is possibly a descendant of Artoria's (how would that work, anyways? Mordred originated from sperm stolen from genderbent Artoria (goddamnit Merlin), but when it came to sex she was inexperienced. Did Morgana make more homunculi? That might explain why Gray's considered so creepy), and her family has preserved Rhongomyniad for centuries, it should be interesting. Heh... does that mean that Artoria could reclaim possession of it as a Noble Phantasm, like she did in the Fate route with Avalon?
Unless something unusual happens, though, it might not be worth it. Servants get both certain benefits and certain limitations due to class, and I just don't think she'd be as skilled with a lance as a Saber as she would normally be.