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2/2/2018 c1 SamB37
I liked it but I want more very good story
12/8/2017 c1 38ChocolateTeapot
Nice work! This is quite an interesting start.

I would format the dialogue in a more standard way. If you are reporting word for word what they are saying, use direct speech, which encloses the dialogue in quotation marks. In this case, you also want to start a new paragraph whenever the speaker changes, as it makes the dialogue much easier to follow.

There are also a few places where I feel the story could have used a bit more polish, though it's always clear what is happening.

I like them trying to explain why the TARDIS is bigger on the inside.

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