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12/8 c3 1nevilleslongbottom
THEY BOTH LIKE EACH OTHER I LOVE THEM! NOW KISS!
12/8 c2 nevilleslongbottom
I love how whipped she is for Marlene! I ship them already
12/7 c2 2C.X.X
Pretty good. My main critique would be to watch your grammar, punctuation and tenses in particular. Perhaps increase the description a bit, but that isn't entirely necessary. I like the fact that you don't have the characters immediately be all over each other, that's nice to see.

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