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4/14 c5 RoseAmeliaSarahNoblePond
ITS SO CUUUUUTTTTTEEEEEEE! I love the couple, even if it is temporary and I hope that in the end the relationship she has with Ana will end well (I know that they won’t always be together). Its a wonderful story and I hope you update soon!
12/8/2017 c3 2nevilleslongbottom
THEY BOTH LIKE EACH OTHER I LOVE THEM! NOW KISS!
12/8/2017 c2 nevilleslongbottom
I love how whipped she is for Marlene! I ship them already
12/7/2017 c2 2C.X.X
Pretty good. My main critique would be to watch your grammar, punctuation and tenses in particular. Perhaps increase the description a bit, but that isn't entirely necessary. I like the fact that you don't have the characters immediately be all over each other, that's nice to see.

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