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8/19/2019 c1 10GliderPilot
Hello!

I enjoyed this first chapter. For all Asgard and the Guardians people have in common, we haven't seen anything of Gamora and Loki interacting. One would think they have quite a bit in common. I will continue. This looks promising.
5/1/2018 c3 149TheDrunkenWerewolf
I didn't think it was cringey. I thought you did it really well. It was emotional and draws on the parallels between Loki and Nebula, which you set out to do. I'd never thought of said parallels before I read this fic so you've done an excellent job. I loved the lines where Loki says "I know you because you're me." That was really nicely done. Which of course it pierces through all of Nebulas carefully constructed armour and throws into question a lot of her loyalty to Gamora. Which i assume is Lokis plan.
Enjoying this so far. Wonder how you're gonna end this in 2 more chs but will have to read it and see.
4/29/2018 c2 TheDrunkenWerewolf
Oh this is an interesting story you have here. The setup in Ch1 was really good. And It's delightfully awkward how they both realise they were both tying to seduce each other. And your characterisation of Loki and Gamora is on point. Can't wait to see how this develops.
4/28/2018 c5 11Evilnor
Good characterizations on both the parts of Gamora and Loki. One thing that gets pointed out time and again about Loki is that no matter the situation, it always outwardly seems that he's having the time of his life. You also left out the idea that Loki may have been mind controlled for most of Avengers, which I also like. Nebula's pretty well-done, too, and the chapter where Loki gets her into tears . . . maybe it would've been better if she'd hit him before the words sunk in and she let herself cry in a corner.

I think I'll read more of your stuff. Pretty good start to have this much written in just a few months!
1/10/2018 c2 6Ghost Wolf 114
oh boy, they are trying to seduce each other and its not working out..Lmaoooooooooooooooooooo
1/7/2018 c5 Guest
CANNOT wait for the sequel! Loved reading this amazing fic. Thanks for sharing!
12/31/2017 c5 Midnight
HAAAPPPPPPPYYYYY NEW YEAR! ! ! ! ! (again... my bad)

*throws confetti*

Holy crap 2018... most average people are excited about...ya know...embracing the new year and stuff... but then I'm just here like, "This is the year of the War... and NOT just any war..."

...

INFINITY WAR!

*dramatic bomb explosion*

...

*ahem*
Yep, that's what happens when you're a real marvel fan. Heh heh... but ohmygod NOOOOO this fic is Over but u said you're making a sequel so im fine. But seriously, I was hoping that Loki and Gamora would just HUG at the end aNd THEY DID!
HONESTLY. was it SO Hard for marvel to make Thor and Loki hug like brothers at the end of Ragnorok...? Apparently it was.

Now if you'll excuse me, I have to destroy Jotunheim. and go check out your other new fic u mentioned
12/29/2017 c4 Midnight
Welp, might as well say this...

HAPPY BALATED CHRISTMAS AND AN EARLY HAPPY NEW YEAR! !

And I'm so happy that I inspired u (Inspired...? Cheesy) to keep Nebula soft, Haha hey! She is still a girl... and let's be honest, we're all a bunch of emotional messes eventually. And I can already see Loki becoming his insane dark self... nice. EVEN THO, I love Loki being a hero and everything... I do like myself some evilness here and there...

...

Also. THANK U FOR YOUR SYMPATHIES!
That sounded crazy, but now im just like, "yesssss someone finally understands me..." wow, my life.
I loved this chapter by the way, and oooohhhhhhh Thanos...he will definitely rot and burn for eternity in the next life...
12/20/2017 c3 Midnight
Wait... WHAT? !

ARe U kidding? ? ? ?

This chapter was AMAZING! ! ! Don't feel insecure at all! It literally felt so intense and sad, plus it broke my heart with everything Loki was saying...and yyyeeesssss, Loki and Gamora def should become besties! Honestly Nebula crying made me go all feelz mode, maybe you're right on her being a lil soft, but WHO The hell cares? ! (Language!)

Btw, THANK U FOR RESPONDING TO ME! I honestly hate that I don't have my own account, I wish I could so I could PM and post my own fics, but I can't cuz my laptop is all messed up and drama... so I feel really happy whenever someone acknowledges me regardless haha, so again, Thanks! ! Can't wait for the next update!
12/18/2017 c3 2MaRiA.Z.A
I don't know what you're talking about, really this chapter is pretty amazing! The moment Loki started talking, I realized his plan. This is brilliant, can't wait for what's coming next!
12/18/2017 c1 Ammy of Asgard
I loved this chapter it showed loki's emotions it reminded me of yondu and rockets moment "I know whoo you are boooy because your me!Said as Yondu did). Im so happy I discovered your stories as they make me get excited when I get the notification about them. and tbh It would be really cool if everything you wrote was in the same fan Universe so this could be a prequel to the Lie Smith
12/18/2017 c3 Sky-Girl1999
Don't worry about this chapter. I really think it was good and you did this thing again where Loki cleverly covers up his interest in Gamora in the beginning, even though he could just feign interest in her (which I hope not, because I like Loki and Gamora together. I only foubd two small mistakes. One where you wrote "then" instead of "than" and the other is that you wrote "i've leaving" instead of "i'm leaving".
Can't wait for the last half of the story and I'm looking forward to another fic with Loki and Gamora if you have an idea on what to write.
12/15/2017 c1 Midnight
OhMyGod im so Addicted to this Fic,

I LOVE IT! ! !

Ive always thought Thor and Loki were crazy similar to Gamora and Nebula and unfortunately there aren't many fics that exist that are this awesome...
SO awesome! And Loki and Gamora are actually really cute together, not gonna lie, I kinda now ship 'em thanks to you, but I think I like them better as close awkward friends LOL. But ya gotta love the nickname 'room-service'... wanna hear this in Infinity War now... great.
Before I end this review... I just wanna say...

There's a very special place in hell for Thanos after what he did to Loki.

*creepy smile*
12/14/2017 c2 127Dawnstorm101
This is great! I've been wondering for a while now if Gamora, Nebula, and Loki encountered each other between Thor and Avengers, and it's so great to read about it from someone else's perspective. Can't wait to see more!
12/13/2017 c2 2MaRiA.Z.A
Woah, I love this storyline, and I love the Loki you write.
Looking forward to what's coming next!
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