for The Seventh Swordsman12/21/2024 c67 Pope-HNDRXX
That's not to say you're not a great Author because you are, it's because you're such a great author I stopped reading your works. You have a way of getting wrapped up in the story and manipulating their feelings. When I tell you how many times I've been on the edge of my seat reading your fics it's crazy. But honestly you're number one proficiency is in making Naruto suffer and honestly I've had enough of that, you always write him into tortured saviour roles. He basically loses almost everything more than once and goes through so many spirals because of it...Namikaze legend will remain unfinished simply because of that right there. I've only finished 2 of your fics before and the second fic I finished (Fire and Blood) legit just made quit reading your other fics, and even The Guardians barely made up for anything towards the end(I almost dropped it so many times). Do us a favour and write a story not steeped in enough angst to make Sasuke cringe...you're fantastic though
That's not to say you're not a great Author because you are, it's because you're such a great author I stopped reading your works. You have a way of getting wrapped up in the story and manipulating their feelings. When I tell you how many times I've been on the edge of my seat reading your fics it's crazy. But honestly you're number one proficiency is in making Naruto suffer and honestly I've had enough of that, you always write him into tortured saviour roles. He basically loses almost everything more than once and goes through so many spirals because of it...Namikaze legend will remain unfinished simply because of that right there. I've only finished 2 of your fics before and the second fic I finished (Fire and Blood) legit just made quit reading your other fics, and even The Guardians barely made up for anything towards the end(I almost dropped it so many times). Do us a favour and write a story not steeped in enough angst to make Sasuke cringe...you're fantastic though
12/21/2024 c68 Pope-HNDRXX
I remember reading this and stopping a few years back in order to let it marinate and for there to be more chapters. life happened but I decided to try and get back into it. I immediately had to check because after reading Fire and Blood and that bullshit that you pulled with those final 2 chapters(I'll never forgive you) I had to check how this ended, and guess what...I made the right decision. Knowing your writing style I'll simply say this: I'm not gonna put myself through unnecessary suffering by reading this as you mentally, psychologically and emotionally abuse Naruto and then basically have him die in some grand sacrifice as everyone but him gets a happy ending. it's just not happening...your fics are entirely too dark and with too little happy moments in between for me to even entertain the thought of reading them again. just a mass of angst and darkness. you love the tortured hero archetype..
I remember reading this and stopping a few years back in order to let it marinate and for there to be more chapters. life happened but I decided to try and get back into it. I immediately had to check because after reading Fire and Blood and that bullshit that you pulled with those final 2 chapters(I'll never forgive you) I had to check how this ended, and guess what...I made the right decision. Knowing your writing style I'll simply say this: I'm not gonna put myself through unnecessary suffering by reading this as you mentally, psychologically and emotionally abuse Naruto and then basically have him die in some grand sacrifice as everyone but him gets a happy ending. it's just not happening...your fics are entirely too dark and with too little happy moments in between for me to even entertain the thought of reading them again. just a mass of angst and darkness. you love the tortured hero archetype..
12/17/2024 c68 xXninjaXx115
Quick review 9/10. Ive read COUNTLESS fanfics in my life, is this probably THE best one ive ever read in the Nartul cateogry. Pace is very concistent, and detailed. Honestly amazed how little flaw i had with the story. It was so unique as well! Kept cannon characters but essentially a whole new story all together. Definitely reccommend, its worth a read!
Quick review 9/10. Ive read COUNTLESS fanfics in my life, is this probably THE best one ive ever read in the Nartul cateogry. Pace is very concistent, and detailed. Honestly amazed how little flaw i had with the story. It was so unique as well! Kept cannon characters but essentially a whole new story all together. Definitely reccommend, its worth a read!
2/4/2024 c1 Theodore
this fan fiction is golden. There is so much that I could say that I love about this fan fliction. But I don't want this to be insanely long. Overall, this was amazing, and you should read it.
this fan fiction is golden. There is so much that I could say that I love about this fan fliction. But I don't want this to be insanely long. Overall, this was amazing, and you should read it.
1/2/2024 c68 Guest
this story was amazing man! your writing skills are super inspiring. thank you for this and your other brilliant stories
this story was amazing man! your writing skills are super inspiring. thank you for this and your other brilliant stories
9/22/2023 c66 BOBbyboy177336
SPOILERS...
man your stories are amazing but i can't stand Naruto always dying in the end. It's depressing and I'm kinda just expecting it now.
SPOILERS...
man your stories are amazing but i can't stand Naruto always dying in the end. It's depressing and I'm kinda just expecting it now.
9/5/2023 c3 BOBbyboy177336
You are one of the few writers to be able to make your story just epic and exciting af, like I get goosebumps reading this.
You are one of the few writers to be able to make your story just epic and exciting af, like I get goosebumps reading this.
7/8/2023 c68 WebSlinger12
I finally got around this finish this story... been binge reading it for the past 3 days. It's been a hell of a ride, author. I love this story. Thank you for pouring out your heart into it, as it is a beautiful work of art. May God bless you and keep you in your future endeavours my friend. Stay safe and good luck.
I finally got around this finish this story... been binge reading it for the past 3 days. It's been a hell of a ride, author. I love this story. Thank you for pouring out your heart into it, as it is a beautiful work of art. May God bless you and keep you in your future endeavours my friend. Stay safe and good luck.
5/31/2023 c68 
5jamthacreator
Brilliant story, your write some of the best naruto fanfiction keep it up and be proud!
5jamthacreatorBrilliant story, your write some of the best naruto fanfiction keep it up and be proud!
5/3/2023 c68 A fellow reader
I love your story but you should really learn to make the epilogue more nostalgic to the original story and give only brief of the future. I know it’s not much but it will help you know what makes an epilogue good is the nostalgia and the feeling that the story has ended even if you wish to write a sequel those 2 points should remain unfazed
I love your story but you should really learn to make the epilogue more nostalgic to the original story and give only brief of the future. I know it’s not much but it will help you know what makes an epilogue good is the nostalgia and the feeling that the story has ended even if you wish to write a sequel those 2 points should remain unfazed
4/24/2023 c3 nat's bf
great story; my gf and i love it... thank you!
great story; my gf and i love it... thank you!
3/4/2023 c1 Guest
Do not let others opinion discourage, dear author. it is a great work of fiction. Keep it up:)
Do not let others opinion discourage, dear author. it is a great work of fiction. Keep it up:)
2/16/2023 c4 MojoBlack
Naruto is doing a good job taking command, though I am worried that his covert operation will eventually take a downturn.
Mei being revealed as holding Saiken is a twist I didn't see coming. I'm definitely tuned in now.
Naruto is doing a good job taking command, though I am worried that his covert operation will eventually take a downturn.
Mei being revealed as holding Saiken is a twist I didn't see coming. I'm definitely tuned in now.