for It's Just A Spark7/4/2018 c14 Lightgiver
Oh, OH, surely one of the best... it sure make me wish I had one person just to love me...
Oh, OH, surely one of the best... it sure make me wish I had one person just to love me...
6/28/2018 c13 Guest
My life is complete.
My life is complete.
6/25/2018 c14 Guest
Nice to see the "good" side of Hiccup and Snotlout's relationship. Far too many fanfiction stories portray Snotlout as an unrepentant bully/villain. This story continues to impress.
Nice to see the "good" side of Hiccup and Snotlout's relationship. Far too many fanfiction stories portray Snotlout as an unrepentant bully/villain. This story continues to impress.
6/25/2018 c13 Guest
Well worth the wait . . .
Well worth the wait . . .
6/25/2018 c14 Guest
great chap, thanks for the edit!
great chap, thanks for the edit!
6/25/2018 c14 Guest
can you check the formating? the paragraphs are really close together, its a little dificult to read
can you check the formating? the paragraphs are really close together, its a little dificult to read
6/27/2018 c14 
7De Amicus
I like how you wrote Snotlout; its a side of him most people ignore.
Astrid typing out her thoughts instead of her work was golden.
7De AmicusI like how you wrote Snotlout; its a side of him most people ignore.
Astrid typing out her thoughts instead of her work was golden.
6/26/2018 c1 4Smoe05
I usually grow a list of things to readI always leave yours to last in the stack because I know it will be the most heartwarming and joyous of the collection. Let it be heard that this chapter was beautiful, hilarious and full of classic character moments that bring life to the story.
Scottykins rendered speechlesstwice. That’s heavy hehe.
Your little hints at the start of the chapter were perfect and subtle references to the not responding, they were very appropriate to the eventual scene brining a conclusion to what was originally thought to be a fun way to describe the mini synopsis.
With that said, typing out their smitten thoughts. Nice touch.
Otherwise Hiccups eventual epiphany brought the story into focus as he counted down the moments of personal affection. It was satisfying and warming.
I’m looking really forward to the next instalment, hopefully with brackets to separate the scenes hehe :D
4Smoe05I usually grow a list of things to readI always leave yours to last in the stack because I know it will be the most heartwarming and joyous of the collection. Let it be heard that this chapter was beautiful, hilarious and full of classic character moments that bring life to the story.
Scottykins rendered speechlesstwice. That’s heavy hehe.
Your little hints at the start of the chapter were perfect and subtle references to the not responding, they were very appropriate to the eventual scene brining a conclusion to what was originally thought to be a fun way to describe the mini synopsis.
With that said, typing out their smitten thoughts. Nice touch.
Otherwise Hiccups eventual epiphany brought the story into focus as he counted down the moments of personal affection. It was satisfying and warming.
I’m looking really forward to the next instalment, hopefully with brackets to separate the scenes hehe :D
6/26/2018 c14 1snaptrapper
This for me is up there with the best modern AU's that i've read. Its so unique and hope you continue it
1snaptrapperThis for me is up there with the best modern AU's that i've read. Its so unique and hope you continue it
6/26/2018 c14 aaquater
Welp, if you aren't sure which ones are real memories and which ones aren't, better arrange it with Hiccup so you can make sure all of them are :D Of course, that carries the risk of starting an endless cycle of acting out fantasies, but for some reason, I don't think either party would mind terribly. Allowing Snotlout to mature is much appreciated :)
Welp, if you aren't sure which ones are real memories and which ones aren't, better arrange it with Hiccup so you can make sure all of them are :D Of course, that carries the risk of starting an endless cycle of acting out fantasies, but for some reason, I don't think either party would mind terribly. Allowing Snotlout to mature is much appreciated :)
6/25/2018 c14 16DeathBerryHime
I don't know which made me more emotionally compromised, Hiccstrid or Snotcup...
16DeathBerryHimeI don't know which made me more emotionally compromised, Hiccstrid or Snotcup...