for Pretty Girl7/17/2003 c2 Annie
yay! sugarcult! i love them! the story is great, keep writing!
yay! sugarcult! i love them! the story is great, keep writing!
7/16/2003 c1 
16Dark Angel31
ugh, did u know this site doesn't let u review more than once for each chapter? anyway, i forgot...im sending u a dozen chocolate coverd vaughns for doing a new chapter before me...ENJOY!
16Dark Angel31ugh, did u know this site doesn't let u review more than once for each chapter? anyway, i forgot...im sending u a dozen chocolate coverd vaughns for doing a new chapter before me...ENJOY!
7/16/2003 c3 Dark Angel31
dude, this is exactly wat ive been saying...if vaughn is gonna go off and get married *ugh!*, then syd should at least be w/ will! hes the next best choice!
Write more soon! Despite wat u think it was good!
dude, this is exactly wat ive been saying...if vaughn is gonna go off and get married *ugh!*, then syd should at least be w/ will! hes the next best choice!
Write more soon! Despite wat u think it was good!
7/16/2003 c3 MooMooWho
...but found it *very* hard to with thoughts and images of Vaughn still flooding her mind.
hahaha, its not just hard, its *very* hard, lol! j/k, update soon.
...but found it *very* hard to with thoughts and images of Vaughn still flooding her mind.
hahaha, its not just hard, its *very* hard, lol! j/k, update soon.
4/28/2003 c2 Dark Angel31
uggh i haven't been able to go online in weeks, but now i can! and i went to go read alias stories and i found this! ur an evil person, lol this story is too sad...they're supposed to end up together...o well i wanted to read an angsty story, and it WAS really really good..kk, i'm gonna stop rambeling now :P love the story!
uggh i haven't been able to go online in weeks, but now i can! and i went to go read alias stories and i found this! ur an evil person, lol this story is too sad...they're supposed to end up together...o well i wanted to read an angsty story, and it WAS really really good..kk, i'm gonna stop rambeling now :P love the story!
3/22/2003 c1 Lala
really good story! original storyline! update soon.
make vaughn love her. thats all i want!
really good story! original storyline! update soon.
make vaughn love her. thats all i want!
3/21/2003 c2 ahsdlkjfasdf
Pretty Girl? BY SUGARCULT? YAY!
i LOVE that song SO much!
The fic is good too, but the formatting IS a little bit messed up.
Pretty Girl? BY SUGARCULT? YAY!
i LOVE that song SO much!
The fic is good too, but the formatting IS a little bit messed up.
3/21/2003 c2 mariposa
that was better. Keep it up.
that was better. Keep it up.
3/21/2003 c2 Dizzy
that was good, keep going :)
that was good, keep going :)
3/21/2003 c2 Sydney
I really like this story,it is very original and well written.Just one thing when you are starting the chapter could you move a few lines down from the authors note because I was reading it and I thought that the start of the chapter was part of the note.Its really good and I think that you should definately(I hope that I spelt that right,my spelling is absolutely crap)continue,just to reassure me though,you are going to have Vaughn end up with her at the very end of the story,right?
I know that he says that he isn't in love with her but he just might not realise it yet and when he sees other guys hitting on her he might get all jealous or he is just worried that it won't work out or something,whatever you do please don't make her end up with Sark.Keep up the good work and update as soon as you can,PLEASE!
I really like this story,it is very original and well written.Just one thing when you are starting the chapter could you move a few lines down from the authors note because I was reading it and I thought that the start of the chapter was part of the note.Its really good and I think that you should definately(I hope that I spelt that right,my spelling is absolutely crap)continue,just to reassure me though,you are going to have Vaughn end up with her at the very end of the story,right?
I know that he says that he isn't in love with her but he just might not realise it yet and when he sees other guys hitting on her he might get all jealous or he is just worried that it won't work out or something,whatever you do please don't make her end up with Sark.Keep up the good work and update as soon as you can,PLEASE!
3/21/2003 c2 sintheeah
i loved the fact that you used sugar cult that song is awsome! great job are you gonna continue with the story? i think you should! (make vaugn love her back) please
i loved the fact that you used sugar cult that song is awsome! great job are you gonna continue with the story? i think you should! (make vaugn love her back) please
3/20/2003 c1 k
go on
go on
3/20/2003 c1 AwryJigsaw
i didnt really like it. I think it's a pretty cool idea, but the way you wrote it, i dont know, it just aint clicking.
i didnt really like it. I think it's a pretty cool idea, but the way you wrote it, i dont know, it just aint clicking.