for Saving All My Women3/2/2018 c25 GarbanzoBeans
And so the hunt begins. Grat that the threat has been pushed back and the family and Ranger can breathe a little easier while still maintaining they diligence.
And so the hunt begins. Grat that the threat has been pushed back and the family and Ranger can breathe a little easier while still maintaining they diligence.
3/2/2018 c25 Guest
Two chapters a week? Hot diggity dog! Thanks for the update. Eagerly awaiting next chapter.
Two chapters a week? Hot diggity dog! Thanks for the update. Eagerly awaiting next chapter.
3/2/2018 c24 Guest
Happy Friday! (Hint! Hint!)
Happy Friday! (Hint! Hint!)
2/25/2018 c24 
3Vulcan Rider
That sounds like a wonderful time at the park. I'm worried about Carlos and his plan. I really hope that everything goes well.
I thought that maybe the Pinterest page might be a way for the bad guys to track the group, but maybe it is just private within the group?
Also, I normally don't bother reading through the Family Album anymore. I just scroll past it. It might be easier for you to not post it each chapter.
Great story. I love it.
Maggie M.
3Vulcan RiderThat sounds like a wonderful time at the park. I'm worried about Carlos and his plan. I really hope that everything goes well.
I thought that maybe the Pinterest page might be a way for the bad guys to track the group, but maybe it is just private within the group?
Also, I normally don't bother reading through the Family Album anymore. I just scroll past it. It might be easier for you to not post it each chapter.
Great story. I love it.
Maggie M.
2/23/2018 c24 Angela Mueller
Loved it! So much detail, I could almost see it. Love this story! Also, happy that Julie is getting to know cousins, etc, and that Rachel is goingto be interacting with the Manosos more.
Loved it! So much detail, I could almost see it. Love this story! Also, happy that Julie is getting to know cousins, etc, and that Rachel is goingto be interacting with the Manosos more.
2/23/2018 c24 Guest
Ok I catching up on the last couple chapters. Very intense stuff. I'm glad to see Steph being involved by taking over Oshana's social media to lure the bad guys. She needs a bit more to do and I like that you've given her something here. Even if its to calm the family down and help them understand the danger since she's been in their shoes many times and knows how stifling it feels but better than being dead. She knows first hand and could have led on that which would ease Ranger's shouldering it all. Even to help with a bit of laundry or packing for her and Ranger is a small but meaningful gesture. If you think about it, all in one day...Ranger took family to theme park, frantically get everyone out after the attack, interrogate bad guys, lay into his family, discipline his men for failure, laundry, volleyball, packing and sexing Stephanie. He's super-batman. Steph really could have been a stronger voice in support of Ranger during the Oshana/family confrontation while providing empathy to the family for what they are going through. Felt like it was a missed opportunity to show some growth in her characterization. But I'm sure they'll be other opportunities. Really great job for this hugh undertaking. You creativity shines. Sorry for running on commenting about 3 chapters in one.
Ok I catching up on the last couple chapters. Very intense stuff. I'm glad to see Steph being involved by taking over Oshana's social media to lure the bad guys. She needs a bit more to do and I like that you've given her something here. Even if its to calm the family down and help them understand the danger since she's been in their shoes many times and knows how stifling it feels but better than being dead. She knows first hand and could have led on that which would ease Ranger's shouldering it all. Even to help with a bit of laundry or packing for her and Ranger is a small but meaningful gesture. If you think about it, all in one day...Ranger took family to theme park, frantically get everyone out after the attack, interrogate bad guys, lay into his family, discipline his men for failure, laundry, volleyball, packing and sexing Stephanie. He's super-batman. Steph really could have been a stronger voice in support of Ranger during the Oshana/family confrontation while providing empathy to the family for what they are going through. Felt like it was a missed opportunity to show some growth in her characterization. But I'm sure they'll be other opportunities. Really great job for this hugh undertaking. You creativity shines. Sorry for running on commenting about 3 chapters in one.
2/23/2018 c24 Guest
Thank you for the update I can go back to work now.
Thank you for the update I can go back to work now.
2/23/2018 c24 GarbanzoBeans
Loved the carefree park day. He is seeing the benefit of family gatherings even if this was inspired by a terrible threat. Love the groan from stephanie at the start of the big wedding discussion.
Loved the carefree park day. He is seeing the benefit of family gatherings even if this was inspired by a terrible threat. Love the groan from stephanie at the start of the big wedding discussion.
2/23/2018 c24 Guest
Good writing
Good writing
2/23/2018 c23 Guest
It is Friday. I am not trying to rush you. Ok. I am TOTALLY trying to rush you. Please post soon. And thank you for sharing your talent with the rest of us.
It is Friday. I am not trying to rush you. Ok. I am TOTALLY trying to rush you. Please post soon. And thank you for sharing your talent with the rest of us.
2/22/2018 c23 Guest
Please update soon.
Please update soon.
2/20/2018 c23 Vulcan Rider
I think the compromise was very good. Best of all, Ranger's father, Carlos' father was able to see how his son excelled in his field, and after the fiasco with Oshanna, he realizes just how much money he's spending. His words of praise seemed to heal a lot of hurt in Carlos. The fact that his son is using logic and knowledge to defeat the enemy, instead of automatically reaching for a gun to take him out makes him see that he is clear headed and smart, not irrational and quick to take revenge.
The beach volleyball tournament was awesome. I loved that Ranger looked at his men as others do, and recognized what fine specimens they were. That was a light little piece that I enjoyed. He could be observant without his sexuality coming into it, and finally see them as others do.
I wonder if Ranger will ever tell Stephanie how much he enjoys her sleeping naked, or in something that feels good to his skin, too. My husband loves when I wear things that slip and slide over his skin, even though we almost always slept naked until just recently. Brrr.
Maggie M.
I think the compromise was very good. Best of all, Ranger's father, Carlos' father was able to see how his son excelled in his field, and after the fiasco with Oshanna, he realizes just how much money he's spending. His words of praise seemed to heal a lot of hurt in Carlos. The fact that his son is using logic and knowledge to defeat the enemy, instead of automatically reaching for a gun to take him out makes him see that he is clear headed and smart, not irrational and quick to take revenge.
The beach volleyball tournament was awesome. I loved that Ranger looked at his men as others do, and recognized what fine specimens they were. That was a light little piece that I enjoyed. He could be observant without his sexuality coming into it, and finally see them as others do.
I wonder if Ranger will ever tell Stephanie how much he enjoys her sleeping naked, or in something that feels good to his skin, too. My husband loves when I wear things that slip and slide over his skin, even though we almost always slept naked until just recently. Brrr.
Maggie M.
2/17/2018 c23 9the newest daughter
I'm glad he didn't hurt the guys to bad. The talk with his dad was so touching. Using the phone was a awesome idea.
9the newest daughterI'm glad he didn't hurt the guys to bad. The talk with his dad was so touching. Using the phone was a awesome idea.