for Saving All My Women4/24/2018 c36 VVine
Cheering Great Job! Looking forward to a sequel - fingers crossed. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
Cheering Great Job! Looking forward to a sequel - fingers crossed. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
4/23/2018 c30 VVine
Can the man not even get a few hours of sleep?! :D Yet another cliffhanger lol thank you!
Can the man not even get a few hours of sleep?! :D Yet another cliffhanger lol thank you!
4/22/2018 c36 Kriannalfar
I just read the whole story and I am suuuper impressed! I can’t wait to start the next one! Thank you for sharing your talent with us!
I just read the whole story and I am suuuper impressed! I can’t wait to start the next one! Thank you for sharing your talent with us!
4/22/2018 c22 VVine
Another great chapter (in addition to the all the ones before this!) - I love the POV you are providing, seeing the BMIC not being so in charge is quite the change of pace. Loving this insight.
Another great chapter (in addition to the all the ones before this!) - I love the POV you are providing, seeing the BMIC not being so in charge is quite the change of pace. Loving this insight.
4/21/2018 c36 
9the newest daughter
I am so happy that you are continuing this series. I love that he shared the money with his family and is willing to help them to invest it.
9the newest daughterI am so happy that you are continuing this series. I love that he shared the money with his family and is willing to help them to invest it.
4/20/2018 c36 Angela Mueller
What a great chapter to end with. Loved the story, the descriptions of the places, all of it. The Manoso family was fun to get to know, altho a couple of them were pains. You kept things moving, and it was fun to see what the newest chapter brought. Thank you.
What a great chapter to end with. Loved the story, the descriptions of the places, all of it. The Manoso family was fun to get to know, altho a couple of them were pains. You kept things moving, and it was fun to see what the newest chapter brought. Thank you.
4/20/2018 c3 VVine
OMGoodness with the cliffhangers! All I have to do is click next and still it gets my heart racing!
OMGoodness with the cliffhangers! All I have to do is click next and still it gets my heart racing!
4/20/2018 c36 Guest
Wow awesome ty
Wow awesome ty
4/20/2018 c36 3Vulcan Rider
Oh, I was REALLY, REALLY wanting to get Morelli's reaction in this one, but I will definitely stick around for the sequel. I have loved every chapter of this story. I kind of got lost a bit with all the traveling, since I'm not a big descriptive reader, but I still enjoyed it and learned a lot. The character interaction was outstanding. Completely loved getting to know all of Ranger's family and seeing why he is the way he is.
I just knew before you wrote it, that if he let his sisters know ANY of the money amounts, and I KNEW he would lower it, that they would automatically get greedy. I just can't believe that Angelia was the first one (well, yes I can believe it) to say he was being greedy and keeping the money for himself instead of splitting it between all of them. They didn't even ask how much the trip cost, all the traveling, the private plane, the fuel, food, entertainment, shopping, etc., not to mention the exorbitant amount of the cost of hazard pay for his men for 24/7 bodyguard duty for that many men for TWO WEEKS. And that wasn't even counting his trip to take care of the problem. Hopefully, they'll never get wind of the name of Sergio in the news, or of his properties, because they would cause him problems without thinking rather than be happy with the millions they were GIFTED by Carlos.
He was even generous enough to give Julio 3 million, even though he wasn't even in danger, himself. I AM glad, though, that he put his parents in charge of Oshanna's money, because she would have done exactly what he said with the money and wasted it.
Such a great story. I can't wait for the sequel.
Maggie M.
3Vulcan RiderOh, I was REALLY, REALLY wanting to get Morelli's reaction in this one, but I will definitely stick around for the sequel. I have loved every chapter of this story. I kind of got lost a bit with all the traveling, since I'm not a big descriptive reader, but I still enjoyed it and learned a lot. The character interaction was outstanding. Completely loved getting to know all of Ranger's family and seeing why he is the way he is.
I just knew before you wrote it, that if he let his sisters know ANY of the money amounts, and I KNEW he would lower it, that they would automatically get greedy. I just can't believe that Angelia was the first one (well, yes I can believe it) to say he was being greedy and keeping the money for himself instead of splitting it between all of them. They didn't even ask how much the trip cost, all the traveling, the private plane, the fuel, food, entertainment, shopping, etc., not to mention the exorbitant amount of the cost of hazard pay for his men for 24/7 bodyguard duty for that many men for TWO WEEKS. And that wasn't even counting his trip to take care of the problem. Hopefully, they'll never get wind of the name of Sergio in the news, or of his properties, because they would cause him problems without thinking rather than be happy with the millions they were GIFTED by Carlos.
He was even generous enough to give Julio 3 million, even though he wasn't even in danger, himself. I AM glad, though, that he put his parents in charge of Oshanna's money, because she would have done exactly what he said with the money and wasted it.
Such a great story. I can't wait for the sequel.
Maggie M.
4/20/2018 c36 2trhodes9
Sweet! Nice opening to the next phase. Is Morelli going to go quietly? That would be out of character!
2trhodes9Sweet! Nice opening to the next phase. Is Morelli going to go quietly? That would be out of character!
4/20/2018 c36 daxandpat
I could see Steph starting a charitable foundation of some kind.
The only thing that really bothers me is that even women that work in Washington, DC quit wearing pantyhose about 20 years ago. I know because I worked for a non-profit downtown for 19 years.
I could see Steph starting a charitable foundation of some kind.
The only thing that really bothers me is that even women that work in Washington, DC quit wearing pantyhose about 20 years ago. I know because I worked for a non-profit downtown for 19 years.
4/20/2018 c36 Avid Reader 59
I'm so glad you're writing a sequel, otherwise I would hate to see this story end. I've really enjoyed it, not just the plot, but also your amazing attention to detail. I feel like I've been on a vacation to Hawaii! I wish I could have reviewed more, but it's very difficult since I've lost the sight in my right eye. My left eye is my weaker eye, but fortunately between enlarging the font and using a magnifying glass, I'm still able to read. Congratulations on finishing your first wonderful story!
I'm so glad you're writing a sequel, otherwise I would hate to see this story end. I've really enjoyed it, not just the plot, but also your amazing attention to detail. I feel like I've been on a vacation to Hawaii! I wish I could have reviewed more, but it's very difficult since I've lost the sight in my right eye. My left eye is my weaker eye, but fortunately between enlarging the font and using a magnifying glass, I'm still able to read. Congratulations on finishing your first wonderful story!