for Saving All My Women3/22/2018 c30 Guest
Only 13 hours and 42 minutes until Friday. But it's not like I am counting the minutes or anything. And thank you for sharing your talent with us.
Only 13 hours and 42 minutes until Friday. But it's not like I am counting the minutes or anything. And thank you for sharing your talent with us.
3/21/2018 c30 Guest
I guess you are going to make us suffer.
I guess you are going to make us suffer.
3/20/2018 c30 Guest
WTF! I can't believe you...
I'm posting a cliffy review. ;)
WTF! I can't believe you...
I'm posting a cliffy review. ;)
3/20/2018 c30 Guest
Please don't make us suffer until Friday.
Please don't make us suffer until Friday.
3/20/2018 c30 
3Vulcan Rider
Oh man, oh man. How could you do this to us? Well, we knew that someone would double-cross him. I wonder if Fernando backed out, or if he called "The Saint" back, or if Boris has still been tracking them? Surely, SURELY Oshanna hasn't gotten on anyone's electronics? Has she? Or has Julio been stupid? I wonder if one of the guys who went on the trip with him would have gone after him, since he said there were a couple of guys who would take ANY job for ANY price. Hmm.
I'm also wondering if someone has the travel agent's computer hacked and is knowing their every step? I still wonder if the ghost is either his handler or a high-ranking General who wanted him to sign a new contract, but he refused? Cleaning house by hiring crazies? So many questions.
Maggie M.
3Vulcan RiderOh man, oh man. How could you do this to us? Well, we knew that someone would double-cross him. I wonder if Fernando backed out, or if he called "The Saint" back, or if Boris has still been tracking them? Surely, SURELY Oshanna hasn't gotten on anyone's electronics? Has she? Or has Julio been stupid? I wonder if one of the guys who went on the trip with him would have gone after him, since he said there were a couple of guys who would take ANY job for ANY price. Hmm.
I'm also wondering if someone has the travel agent's computer hacked and is knowing their every step? I still wonder if the ghost is either his handler or a high-ranking General who wanted him to sign a new contract, but he refused? Cleaning house by hiring crazies? So many questions.
Maggie M.
3/19/2018 c29 Vulcan Rider
Ranger is a brilliant, brilliant businessman and reader of body language. Having Senor Jiminez's bodyguards in the room while they finished their business, after he realized that he was the one that Sergio paid the money to in order to finish the deal with "The Saint" or anyone after if he failed, he now had witnesses to everything that Fernando was telling him about Sergio and him losing his mind slowly, and how he realizes now that he was tricked because he was becoming paranoid and seldom lucid. It makes me wonder if Sergio had latent stages of the STD that ends with attacking the brain. Hmm.
I hope that Ranger can get the Uranium mine back in the hands of the US so it won't be mined out for the enemies and terrorists. I was surprised that he told them about the cocaine fields and warehouses being burned to the ground and needing to be replanted. He was very honest, but I guess you have to talk illegal stuff with criminals, no matter how rich they are. His plan was brilliant, but now, I wonder if the man who is behind all of his problems is his handler or one of his government contacts he refused to do work for anymore? Hmm...
Outstanding chapter as always.
Maggie M.
Ranger is a brilliant, brilliant businessman and reader of body language. Having Senor Jiminez's bodyguards in the room while they finished their business, after he realized that he was the one that Sergio paid the money to in order to finish the deal with "The Saint" or anyone after if he failed, he now had witnesses to everything that Fernando was telling him about Sergio and him losing his mind slowly, and how he realizes now that he was tricked because he was becoming paranoid and seldom lucid. It makes me wonder if Sergio had latent stages of the STD that ends with attacking the brain. Hmm.
I hope that Ranger can get the Uranium mine back in the hands of the US so it won't be mined out for the enemies and terrorists. I was surprised that he told them about the cocaine fields and warehouses being burned to the ground and needing to be replanted. He was very honest, but I guess you have to talk illegal stuff with criminals, no matter how rich they are. His plan was brilliant, but now, I wonder if the man who is behind all of his problems is his handler or one of his government contacts he refused to do work for anymore? Hmm...
Outstanding chapter as always.
Maggie M.
3/19/2018 c30 Ybanormlmom
Just when you think theres light a the end of the tunnel...it turns out to be an oncoming train!
Just when you think theres light a the end of the tunnel...it turns out to be an oncoming train!
3/19/2018 c30 Guest
Omg what now
Omg what now
3/19/2018 c30 Angela Mueller
That lull didn't last long! Hope you get the next chapter up soon, cliffies
are a hazard to reader's health.
That lull didn't last long! Hope you get the next chapter up soon, cliffies
are a hazard to reader's health.