for Overlord: The Exiled8/12/2022 c5 Timesliger
From what I know evileye could cast 5th and 6th even though she should be able to cast 7th and 8th being level 50, the reason believe she can’t is because she hasn’t come across books or items or teacher to learn to use them,
And from the conversation, the queen most likely Isn’t aware of the night liches of the new world, one of them was said to cast 8th tier, the only known new world being to do so.
It not common knowledge for obvious reasons, given the timeline the corpse of the obsess are not around or are in hiding
fluder can cast up to 6th tier, he even made his own spell called obey that he it used to control low level undead,
And fluder strongest disciples could cast up to 4th tier,
It stated that anything beyond 6th tier it impossible for humanity
Sorry I didn’t want be THAT guy and correct someone like a asshole but I just wanted to inform you of it.
Now that I think about would the elder coffin dragon lord still be around?
Mmmm… maybe, he was a level 95, and it said by Maryama that if he is still around in the main timeline, his 200 years of study would give fewer weakness then in the bonus novel where it was set
From what I know evileye could cast 5th and 6th even though she should be able to cast 7th and 8th being level 50, the reason believe she can’t is because she hasn’t come across books or items or teacher to learn to use them,
And from the conversation, the queen most likely Isn’t aware of the night liches of the new world, one of them was said to cast 8th tier, the only known new world being to do so.
It not common knowledge for obvious reasons, given the timeline the corpse of the obsess are not around or are in hiding
fluder can cast up to 6th tier, he even made his own spell called obey that he it used to control low level undead,
And fluder strongest disciples could cast up to 4th tier,
It stated that anything beyond 6th tier it impossible for humanity
Sorry I didn’t want be THAT guy and correct someone like a asshole but I just wanted to inform you of it.
Now that I think about would the elder coffin dragon lord still be around?
Mmmm… maybe, he was a level 95, and it said by Maryama that if he is still around in the main timeline, his 200 years of study would give fewer weakness then in the bonus novel where it was set
8/9/2022 c47 Timesliger
Love what you’ve done with this story, and yeah covid a bitch, I just have to inquire
I know I asked this earlier but I just wanted to expand on this.
Will (Wild magic) of the dragon lords ever be used or least mentioned in the story? , it seems like a missed opportunity, we know that true dragon lords can do them and that the dragon queen can do it to a certain extent, being the brightness dragon lord grand daughter,
it would be interesting to see draconis learn about it.
But I can see you probably just forgot that it exist with the amount of lore you have and given the recent news of volume 15 and 16, regarding Zesshi level, and talent, well good luck with that.
Not mention life problems that are probably happening, so I can understand the long waited for updates.
I hope whenever you update, probably next year (laughs sadly at it probably being true) I hope are doing well and good luck with this awesome story
Love what you’ve done with this story, and yeah covid a bitch, I just have to inquire
I know I asked this earlier but I just wanted to expand on this.
Will (Wild magic) of the dragon lords ever be used or least mentioned in the story? , it seems like a missed opportunity, we know that true dragon lords can do them and that the dragon queen can do it to a certain extent, being the brightness dragon lord grand daughter,
it would be interesting to see draconis learn about it.
But I can see you probably just forgot that it exist with the amount of lore you have and given the recent news of volume 15 and 16, regarding Zesshi level, and talent, well good luck with that.
Not mention life problems that are probably happening, so I can understand the long waited for updates.
I hope whenever you update, probably next year (laughs sadly at it probably being true) I hope are doing well and good luck with this awesome story
8/5/2022 c39 NaturalLife777
Utterly disappointed. Just another generic wish-fulfillment self-insert story.
Utterly disappointed. Just another generic wish-fulfillment self-insert story.
6/7/2022 c3 CRM
Very good story, you are great
Very good story, you are great
5/27/2022 c12 
4hackslashbash
So if Draconis is such a righteous good fella that wanted to help the humans out against the big meanie beastmen, then why is he so chill towards Lucia?
Hasn't this girl been chilling around the Wyvern tribes doing nothing about the invasion? It's like not questioning a friend why they allowed some rando to eat a baby in front of them when they could've prevented it at no cost/risk to themselves.
Your characters don't make any sense man, I'm sorry.
4hackslashbashSo if Draconis is such a righteous good fella that wanted to help the humans out against the big meanie beastmen, then why is he so chill towards Lucia?
Hasn't this girl been chilling around the Wyvern tribes doing nothing about the invasion? It's like not questioning a friend why they allowed some rando to eat a baby in front of them when they could've prevented it at no cost/risk to themselves.
Your characters don't make any sense man, I'm sorry.
2/11/2022 c47 Dayside
eh, it was an alright read.
It's pretty long but it has just so much lore and background stuff from YGGDRASIL that there's barely anything happening in the new world.
I do have to say that I despise the main characters personality oh so very much.
eh, it was an alright read.
It's pretty long but it has just so much lore and background stuff from YGGDRASIL that there's barely anything happening in the new world.
I do have to say that I despise the main characters personality oh so very much.
2/11/2022 c38 Dayside
That's a truly, truly insane amount of gold. It's probably more than what some kingdoms make in a few months.
If you ever rewrite this you should just remove the whole empire part. It's very weird and forced.
That's a truly, truly insane amount of gold. It's probably more than what some kingdoms make in a few months.
If you ever rewrite this you should just remove the whole empire part. It's very weird and forced.
2/11/2022 c30 Dayside
I gotta say, I loathe Draconis. He's off doing dumb shit while his wife is taking care of their kingdom and fighting some abyssal monster shit.
The whole empire part of the story makes no fucking sense.
I gotta say, I loathe Draconis. He's off doing dumb shit while his wife is taking care of their kingdom and fighting some abyssal monster shit.
The whole empire part of the story makes no fucking sense.
12/3/2021 c16 3binyhun
If I remember correctly you said Draconis is 187cm tall… even in medieval times, especially in this fantasy setting, the reactions to his height are waaaay overblown. “Giant among men”, really?
3binyhunIf I remember correctly you said Draconis is 187cm tall… even in medieval times, especially in this fantasy setting, the reactions to his height are waaaay overblown. “Giant among men”, really?
12/2/2021 c10 binyhun
So far I am really enjoying scenes with draconis, but sadly artorias and her guild are somehow not catching my interest. The crystal tear scenes were so far my favorite.
The writing quality is pretty good, but is plagued by small errors. Maybe you don’t re-check what you’ve written? These mistakes should be easy to notice and correct as your english is quite good.
So far I am really enjoying scenes with draconis, but sadly artorias and her guild are somehow not catching my interest. The crystal tear scenes were so far my favorite.
The writing quality is pretty good, but is plagued by small errors. Maybe you don’t re-check what you’ve written? These mistakes should be easy to notice and correct as your english is quite good.
11/29/2021 c15 Guest
Why is he getting pushed around and casually answering to stranger's whims? This guy can't be a dragon at all. Did he have to fight in that arena? And why is he going to Baharuth? He could cement the Kingdom first before reaching out to another. You make it look like they don't have the capability to handle some beastmen when in another you state that they're walking calamities compared to most people of the New World. You're making him fight on two fronts.
Why is he getting pushed around and casually answering to stranger's whims? This guy can't be a dragon at all. Did he have to fight in that arena? And why is he going to Baharuth? He could cement the Kingdom first before reaching out to another. You make it look like they don't have the capability to handle some beastmen when in another you state that they're walking calamities compared to most people of the New World. You're making him fight on two fronts.
11/29/2021 c6 Guest
Boo. Where is the pride of a Dragon? He let himself be shat on? Pff.
Boo. Where is the pride of a Dragon? He let himself be shat on? Pff.
10/27/2021 c43 Silver566
"Feeling oddly mischievous, Samael nodded. "Indeed, though my liege along with his wife and trusted comrades defeated the dragon, they could do little to purge the taint. Through my lord had other plans for the dragon."
Draudillon could scarcely believe this tale.
"Then, is Fafnir watching us?"
"Oh, indeed he is watching you Your Majesty. And he finds you quite intriguing. Though he will do nothing to harm you so long as you remain as you have been. A caring queen for her people."
He spoke quietly, feeling uncharacteristically devilish, he leaned his face down to her ear as he spoke, making her turn to him sharply in disbelief"
Is Samael actually Fafnir? Or was he created from Fafnir.
Also is the mysterious psychopathic beastman that we've now gotten a bit more backstory on, the one who stole Atlas?
"Feeling oddly mischievous, Samael nodded. "Indeed, though my liege along with his wife and trusted comrades defeated the dragon, they could do little to purge the taint. Through my lord had other plans for the dragon."
Draudillon could scarcely believe this tale.
"Then, is Fafnir watching us?"
"Oh, indeed he is watching you Your Majesty. And he finds you quite intriguing. Though he will do nothing to harm you so long as you remain as you have been. A caring queen for her people."
He spoke quietly, feeling uncharacteristically devilish, he leaned his face down to her ear as he spoke, making her turn to him sharply in disbelief"
Is Samael actually Fafnir? Or was he created from Fafnir.
Also is the mysterious psychopathic beastman that we've now gotten a bit more backstory on, the one who stole Atlas?