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12/31/2017 c1 MrKeyFox
So just based on the summary alone this story is pretty much made entirely of fake tension. I'v seen plenty of stories like this the "Oh no I know whats gonna happen time to panic and tell everyone I know and have them react unrealistically" kind and they all have two big flaws, no person would realistically act like that, unless that have some kind of mental handicap, secondly the MC is a pathetic piece of spineless garbage. If your character manages to keep its cover about being reborn a secret and doesn't blab about it cause she needs to get such a big secret off her chest (Fake tension) then... I'll be surprised and probably apologize but fic writers are prideful so unlikely.
12/21/2017 c1 20calcu22
I have to say, 80% of the reason I decided to read this is because of you summary.
12/14/2017 c1 8ScepticalOne
I typically ignore fics, with less than a thousand words; but dag-nabbitt that summary had me hooked. Now would you kindly suplement me with more of this?
12/14/2017 c1 2Old Herobrine
I usually do not read oc fics.

I'mma take a chance on this one, because I like the summary

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