for Homeward10/8/2023 c33 Guest
Man still wishing for an update this is togood to abandon this far in
Man still wishing for an update this is togood to abandon this far in
9/19/2023 c33 Anon
Brilliant read. Looking forward to new chapters.
Brilliant read. Looking forward to new chapters.
9/9/2023 c33 Guest
I really wish this fic would continue i know its been a long time since stuff has been added but I come back and check all the time I fell in love with this story.
I really wish this fic would continue i know its been a long time since stuff has been added but I come back and check all the time I fell in love with this story.
8/23/2023 c33 Guest
I really love this and can't wait for more. Im in tears.
I really love this and can't wait for more. Im in tears.
8/17/2023 c33 NamelessWanderer6
I was happy to see Kuro alive and I hope that Sakura gets some training from the pride.
I was happy to see Kuro alive and I hope that Sakura gets some training from the pride.
8/17/2023 c32 NamelessWanderer6
I like Tobirama and Toka. I also like how by now both Izuna and Madara have realized their mistake.
I like Tobirama and Toka. I also like how by now both Izuna and Madara have realized their mistake.
8/17/2023 c31 NamelessWanderer6
Good chapter, honestly Madara’s reasonings, although unfortunate, make sense and don’t feel forced.
Good chapter, honestly Madara’s reasonings, although unfortunate, make sense and don’t feel forced.
8/17/2023 c30 NamelessWanderer6
I find Izuna’S obtuseness honestly pretty infuriating. He is completely tunnel visioning on Sakura’s wood release and completely ignoring the fact that she just risked her life to protect the Uchiha. If she was a Senju than she should have teamed up with the Hagaromo to destroy the village. What a dumbass mofo, I take everything I said about him back.
I find Izuna’S obtuseness honestly pretty infuriating. He is completely tunnel visioning on Sakura’s wood release and completely ignoring the fact that she just risked her life to protect the Uchiha. If she was a Senju than she should have teamed up with the Hagaromo to destroy the village. What a dumbass mofo, I take everything I said about him back.
8/17/2023 c29 NamelessWanderer6
I wonder what power the Hagaromo clan has and more specifically Junshi. Also it was nice to see Sakura let loose, although it will have consequences.
I wonder what power the Hagaromo clan has and more specifically Junshi. Also it was nice to see Sakura let loose, although it will have consequences.
8/17/2023 c28 NamelessWanderer6
With all due respect I hate polymath and I am glad that you are keeping Sakura and Madara monogamous. Also I don’t understand how Sakura marrying both brothers at all would increase the chances of strong offspring at all. It doesn’t make sense at all. The only scenario I can think of where polygamy might result in more strong offspring is if you have a single strong man that marries multiple strong women and has possibly dozens of children. TLDR polymath involving a single women and multiple men doesn’t make any sense from any perspective
With all due respect I hate polymath and I am glad that you are keeping Sakura and Madara monogamous. Also I don’t understand how Sakura marrying both brothers at all would increase the chances of strong offspring at all. It doesn’t make sense at all. The only scenario I can think of where polygamy might result in more strong offspring is if you have a single strong man that marries multiple strong women and has possibly dozens of children. TLDR polymath involving a single women and multiple men doesn’t make any sense from any perspective
8/17/2023 c27 NamelessWanderer6
So wait is Sakura necessary to the events of the past going as they originally did or not cause if she is I don’t like that. Generally time loops like this are annoying.I prefer her creating her own alternate timeline through her interference.
So wait is Sakura necessary to the events of the past going as they originally did or not cause if she is I don’t like that. Generally time loops like this are annoying.I prefer her creating her own alternate timeline through her interference.
8/17/2023 c21 NamelessWanderer6
I think I am misunderstanding something here but wouldn’t letting Uchiha women fight still be a net negative for if they die they can no longer bring about more Uchiha? Unless the explanation is that the Uchiha adopt non-Uchiha girls into their clan, diversifying their gene pool and allowing for more Uchiha women to fight.
I think I am misunderstanding something here but wouldn’t letting Uchiha women fight still be a net negative for if they die they can no longer bring about more Uchiha? Unless the explanation is that the Uchiha adopt non-Uchiha girls into their clan, diversifying their gene pool and allowing for more Uchiha women to fight.