10/2/2021 c1 Guest
this is a good story keep it going
this is a good story keep it going
7/29/2021 c29 Guest
Please continue bro
Vgood story
Please continue bro
Vgood story
7/29/2021 c8 Guest
Thats not lemon but its a lime which is better than other lemons i read. What a story bro/sis dm me on insta my id prince008_prince and im new to insta
Thats not lemon but its a lime which is better than other lemons i read. What a story bro/sis dm me on insta my id prince008_prince and im new to insta
3/9/2021 c29 Guest
When the next chapter
When the next chapter
2/3/2021 c5 Sinless
You use too much character povs - it gets monotone and boring after while. Decent writing but pretty rushed - all in all its not that good.
You use too much character povs - it gets monotone and boring after while. Decent writing but pretty rushed - all in all its not that good.
1/3/2021 c29 Guest
Gran historia amigo cuando serĂ¡ el siguiente se quedo en la mejor parte
Gran historia amigo cuando serĂ¡ el siguiente se quedo en la mejor parte
4/27/2020 c2 haloisautistic
heres a tip instead of constantly saying once every 2 lines use after like at the fish cpoking bit you couldve said after i finished cooking the fish etc. just a little tip to give your story more spark to it so it doesnt feel repetitive but so far its good
heres a tip instead of constantly saying once every 2 lines use after like at the fish cpoking bit you couldve said after i finished cooking the fish etc. just a little tip to give your story more spark to it so it doesnt feel repetitive but so far its good
3/31/2020 c29 ccc
NOOO why are you gon
NOOO why are you gon
12/5/2019 c29 StarNijino
Please update soon! I want to know what happend next even though I already watch the anime.
Please update soon! I want to know what happend next even though I already watch the anime.
10/4/2019 c29 hulkysy
What happened and this story is getting really uninteresting the plot is just like the manga it's not being original but I still hope there will be a new chapter even is he didn't check in by a year by jow
What happened and this story is getting really uninteresting the plot is just like the manga it's not being original but I still hope there will be a new chapter even is he didn't check in by a year by jow