
4/8/2018 c17 Bonnie mitchell
Not cool dude... This story isn't pretty anymore. Make some change!
Not cool dude... This story isn't pretty anymore. Make some change!
4/4/2018 c16 Shrackelchemp Ib
Not good.. what's wrong lately? Yeah, they are together but it looks like they aren't together.
Not good.. what's wrong lately? Yeah, they are together but it looks like they aren't together.
4/4/2018 c16 Bonnie mitchell
What?
Are you serious?... damn it..
What?
Are you serious?... damn it..
3/26/2018 c13 Guest
i’m only on like the 3rd paragraph of the chapter so far but only carl would go hunting (or whatever he is doing) on his wedding day.
i’m only on like the 3rd paragraph of the chapter so far but only carl would go hunting (or whatever he is doing) on his wedding day.
3/24/2018 c12 Bob cheeks
An overly-consummate relationship. I want to see an overly-consummate relationship!
An overly-consummate relationship. I want to see an overly-consummate relationship!
3/22/2018 c12 Fabian Bailey
Put an anal scene after the wedding. The most smut you can do it.
Put an anal scene after the wedding. The most smut you can do it.
3/18/2018 c12 Nathan Avery
A slow dance between Carl and Enid
A slow dance between Carl and Enid
3/18/2018 c12 Petronela Vedast
This is the right moment to see how much enid take care of carl but all this little house in the prairie is so boring. I mean, no other enemies but this is so boring, focus on them at least
This is the right moment to see how much enid take care of carl but all this little house in the prairie is so boring. I mean, no other enemies but this is so boring, focus on them at least
3/18/2018 c12 Bonnie Mitchell
Well, you could explain in details their wedding night.
Well, you could explain in details their wedding night.
3/14/2018 c11 Shrackelchemp Ib
Like bonnie I-m waiting to see their visceral relationship
Like bonnie I-m waiting to see their visceral relationship
3/14/2018 c11 Petronela Vedast
Well done again! But enid... I wanna see how much love him.
Well done again! But enid... I wanna see how much love him.
3/14/2018 c11 Laxmi Azar
Nice chapter! more!
Nice chapter! more!
3/14/2018 c11 Nichole Jennings
I wish the worst smut between carl and enid, continue!
I wish the worst smut between carl and enid, continue!
3/14/2018 c11 Lila Garner
This is more sweet than last chapter! I wanna see carnid in the bed!
This is more sweet than last chapter! I wanna see carnid in the bed!
3/14/2018 c11 Bonnie mitchell
The sweetest thing that I've read but now I need to see smut between the two lover.
The sweetest thing that I've read but now I need to see smut between the two lover.