
4/6/2021 c1 Dude
I really enjoyed this story and I'm really interested in how this is gonna play out. Well done!
I really enjoyed this story and I'm really interested in how this is gonna play out. Well done!
8/6/2019 c1 Guest
Oh, and for those wondering, Practice Makes Perfect will be updated soon. There will be a two-chapter post, both of them being Blast from the Past segments, one involving Tsunade and the other involving Samui. I tried to just combine the two into one chapter, but I believe they work better separated
year and a half ago... another good story gone. Yet again no abandonment post at least saying where the story was going specifically. Like if he was going to wisk mikoto from her family, possibly through hitomi's help.
Oh, and for those wondering, Practice Makes Perfect will be updated soon. There will be a two-chapter post, both of them being Blast from the Past segments, one involving Tsunade and the other involving Samui. I tried to just combine the two into one chapter, but I believe they work better separated
year and a half ago... another good story gone. Yet again no abandonment post at least saying where the story was going specifically. Like if he was going to wisk mikoto from her family, possibly through hitomi's help.
10/9/2018 c1 FKUGKUFGUJU
interesting
I'd love to see more background story
please continue soon (or is this fic dead?)
interesting
I'd love to see more background story
please continue soon (or is this fic dead?)
6/11/2018 c1 juhnz97
i wanr to read uzumaki orgy... fak naruto with his little innocence sister would good
i wanr to read uzumaki orgy... fak naruto with his little innocence sister would good
6/9/2018 c1
13Merchant Of Blue Death
Not a bad start, too bad it's been nearly six months since it first posted. I'd love to see a few more chapters posted that explains what's been going on in the past and background, such as why Naruto isn't the Fox's jailer this time around and how Sakura went from Sasuke to Naruto.
Saying that however it's kind of weird to see Naruto and Sakura cock blocked by his own sisters, ones that seem to have their own lusty eyes on him. Still, I have to admit that seeing this Sakura as stubborn in her feelings for Naruto as canon Sakura is for the Emo Traitor is refreshing. I still don't understand how she's so hated as she is by fans of other pairings. Yeah, she wasn't that nice in the beginning but at least she came to support Naruto and his dreams. At least when she cut into his chest it was to keep him alive, not kill him like his supposed best friend had done.
Anyway, a Naruto loving Sakura is always better than a Naruto stalking Hinata any day. I hope that at some point you'll start to work on this story in the near future. If not at least let the readers know that it's dead with no hope of continuing.

Not a bad start, too bad it's been nearly six months since it first posted. I'd love to see a few more chapters posted that explains what's been going on in the past and background, such as why Naruto isn't the Fox's jailer this time around and how Sakura went from Sasuke to Naruto.
Saying that however it's kind of weird to see Naruto and Sakura cock blocked by his own sisters, ones that seem to have their own lusty eyes on him. Still, I have to admit that seeing this Sakura as stubborn in her feelings for Naruto as canon Sakura is for the Emo Traitor is refreshing. I still don't understand how she's so hated as she is by fans of other pairings. Yeah, she wasn't that nice in the beginning but at least she came to support Naruto and his dreams. At least when she cut into his chest it was to keep him alive, not kill him like his supposed best friend had done.
Anyway, a Naruto loving Sakura is always better than a Naruto stalking Hinata any day. I hope that at some point you'll start to work on this story in the near future. If not at least let the readers know that it's dead with no hope of continuing.
6/6/2018 c1 Alex-Flyppy
An interesting Friend Fic. Especially because of the fact that you made Naruto do a "Blood Oath" with his mother to remain a virgin boy until he turned sixteen.
I must say that I really liked what you did with the love relationship between Naruto / Sakura, seeing that both really want to go but have only kisses and caresses. The fact that Naruto's sisters do not like their sister's relationship with Sakura, shows that they feel more than just "Brother's Love" for their brother (especially Mayumi and Kimi, Naruto's twin).
It caught my attention, knowing why Kushina made her son accept that "oath", maybe it would be that Kushina wants to be the one to take the virginity of her Son, and she has Loving / Intimate / Sexual desires towards Naruto.
I hope you will continue this Fic; Good luck and Ja-Ne.
PS: I leave you with a list of women who are Uzumaki's confirmed, and which could be due to the color of their hair:
- Karin Uzumaki
- Tsunade Senju-Uzumaki (We already know the reason for her)
* Possible women with Uzumaki descent:
- Mei Terumi-Uzumaki (I could have blood from both clans, and the reason why I can use 2 Kekei-genkai without consequence)
- Sara and her Daughter (Both are from Roran)
- Ameyuri Ringo (From Kirigakure)
- Amaru
- Tayuya
- Karui
- Fuka
- Honoka
An interesting Friend Fic. Especially because of the fact that you made Naruto do a "Blood Oath" with his mother to remain a virgin boy until he turned sixteen.
I must say that I really liked what you did with the love relationship between Naruto / Sakura, seeing that both really want to go but have only kisses and caresses. The fact that Naruto's sisters do not like their sister's relationship with Sakura, shows that they feel more than just "Brother's Love" for their brother (especially Mayumi and Kimi, Naruto's twin).
It caught my attention, knowing why Kushina made her son accept that "oath", maybe it would be that Kushina wants to be the one to take the virginity of her Son, and she has Loving / Intimate / Sexual desires towards Naruto.
I hope you will continue this Fic; Good luck and Ja-Ne.
PS: I leave you with a list of women who are Uzumaki's confirmed, and which could be due to the color of their hair:
- Karin Uzumaki
- Tsunade Senju-Uzumaki (We already know the reason for her)
* Possible women with Uzumaki descent:
- Mei Terumi-Uzumaki (I could have blood from both clans, and the reason why I can use 2 Kekei-genkai without consequence)
- Sara and her Daughter (Both are from Roran)
- Ameyuri Ringo (From Kirigakure)
- Amaru
- Tayuya
- Karui
- Fuka
- Honoka
5/28/2018 c1
24thedarkpokemaster
lol this is good and funny feel a little sorry for Saya but hey she can always share Naruto with Sakura after all and have a three some, plus with Saya this is me she might try and break them up so she can have Naruto for her own.

lol this is good and funny feel a little sorry for Saya but hey she can always share Naruto with Sakura after all and have a three some, plus with Saya this is me she might try and break them up so she can have Naruto for her own.
4/29/2018 c1 Anon
Fun story so far. I'm interested in how the events of this AU went!
Fun story so far. I'm interested in how the events of this AU went!
3/15/2018 c1 Guest
Have high expectations from your fics. Update soon
Have high expectations from your fics. Update soon