for Take Your Daughter to Work Day2/16/2004 c1 a fan
I LOVE your story, it's soo cute :D I love the part where she writes in the notebook. Sounds exactly what I would have done at her age. It'd be cool if you were to double space the second chapter. Overall very cute fic. love it
I LOVE your story, it's soo cute :D I love the part where she writes in the notebook. Sounds exactly what I would have done at her age. It'd be cool if you were to double space the second chapter. Overall very cute fic. love it
5/4/2003 c3 
1guttergirl11
hey there!
guess who this is! your long lost friend nikki! yeah after like 3 monthes I FINALLY got back to the site! I LOVE YOUR STORY IT IS SO DAMN CUTE!
later!
~nikki
1guttergirl11hey there!
guess who this is! your long lost friend nikki! yeah after like 3 monthes I FINALLY got back to the site! I LOVE YOUR STORY IT IS SO DAMN CUTE!
later!
~nikki
4/17/2003 c3 6auroraskyes
Very interesting! Write more soon. I want to see where Jack takes Syd. Very nice.
Oh just a shameless plug here... but I updated my fic. I don't know if you've read the latest chapter, but I left you a nice authors note for giving me that song recommendation. ;)
I'll stop before you think I'm crazy.
Add more to this fic!
6auroraskyesVery interesting! Write more soon. I want to see where Jack takes Syd. Very nice.
Oh just a shameless plug here... but I updated my fic. I don't know if you've read the latest chapter, but I left you a nice authors note for giving me that song recommendation. ;)
I'll stop before you think I'm crazy.
Add more to this fic!
3/24/2003 c3 16Dark Angel31
not only was this a great story, but you also got more reviews than my story, which btw, i am going to update right now (finally)!
THIS STORY ROCKS!
16Dark Angel31not only was this a great story, but you also got more reviews than my story, which btw, i am going to update right now (finally)!
THIS STORY ROCKS!
3/24/2003 c3 Janice
Aw. I'm glad Jack finally got to take his daughter to work.
Aw. I'm glad Jack finally got to take his daughter to work.
3/23/2003 c3 WishingStar
o! cute! cute! cute!
o! cute! cute! cute!
3/23/2003 c3 Ash
Aww, poor Jack! I love your Jack. You kept everyone in character, good job!
Aww, poor Jack! I love your Jack. You kept everyone in character, good job!
3/23/2003 c3 jen
Sweet little story! Well done!
Sweet little story! Well done!
3/23/2003 c3 Zephyr
Oh, I hope you didn't intend that as the end. It would work as an ending (great job), but I'm really into this story now and don't want to let go of it yet. Jack can be a sweet and thoughtful Dad - he can! And some day there will be real reconciliation between Jack and Syd on the show.
Oh, I hope you didn't intend that as the end. It would work as an ending (great job), but I'm really into this story now and don't want to let go of it yet. Jack can be a sweet and thoughtful Dad - he can! And some day there will be real reconciliation between Jack and Syd on the show.
3/22/2003 c2 Kenzi
Wow-that's so emotional! Great writing!
Wow-that's so emotional! Great writing!
3/22/2003 c2 Janice
I'm looking forward to the next two chapters. The "Take Your Daughter To Work Day" idea was really interesting.
I'm looking forward to the next two chapters. The "Take Your Daughter To Work Day" idea was really interesting.
3/21/2003 c1 Ash
OOh, I love your story! I love JB stories! Please write more!
OOh, I love your story! I love JB stories! Please write more!
3/21/2003 c1 Heidi
This story is great so far! It is written well, with NO GRAMMAR MISTAKES OR WORDS MISSPELLED THANK YOU SO MUCH. AND it is more realistic, as it it could have really happened. Most of these stories are fantasies of the authors, which is fine for them, but if it could never really happen, then it is too annoying to read. It looks like you are going to be true to the characters and their established traits and characteristics. Keep writing!
This story is great so far! It is written well, with NO GRAMMAR MISTAKES OR WORDS MISSPELLED THANK YOU SO MUCH. AND it is more realistic, as it it could have really happened. Most of these stories are fantasies of the authors, which is fine for them, but if it could never really happen, then it is too annoying to read. It looks like you are going to be true to the characters and their established traits and characteristics. Keep writing!