for Making Contact11/26/2020 c1 
15Sparklepool101
This was so well written! I adored the entire exchange and lost my crap when Kai showed up. 3
15Sparklepool101This was so well written! I adored the entire exchange and lost my crap when Kai showed up. 3
9/30/2020 c1 5will cypher
Welp, don't know if my review saved so I'm just going to try to write this again... This story was so awesome! I absolutely loved the way the events played out. I don't really remember what I said when I forgot to submit my review, so sorry! Anyways, this was so cute and such a good length for a one shotI think that's what it is ). Welp, that's pretty much it, sorry if I was a bother. Hope you have a great day and don't forget to keep on creating!
5will cypherWelp, don't know if my review saved so I'm just going to try to write this again... This story was so awesome! I absolutely loved the way the events played out. I don't really remember what I said when I forgot to submit my review, so sorry! Anyways, this was so cute and such a good length for a one shotI think that's what it is ). Welp, that's pretty much it, sorry if I was a bother. Hope you have a great day and don't forget to keep on creating!
9/29/2020 c1 will cypher
Ahhhhhh! This was super cute! I've passed your stories a couple times, but never read them. So, I figured today should be the day. This was super well-written and so on point with the wording! I really enjoyed this! I just want to point out how you elaborated on Cole being a ghost too. I've seen some other stories for when Cole is in this form, usually with bruiseshipping. Comparing to a couple others I've read with this situation, this was by far the best! I felt like I could understand Cole better and what he was feeling. It was nice to see how he struggled and overcame it, and all while you maintained the focus and ship of the story! Anyways, hope I wasn't too much of a bother. Welp, that's pretty much it. Hope you have a great day and don't forget to keep on creating! :)
Ahhhhhh! This was super cute! I've passed your stories a couple times, but never read them. So, I figured today should be the day. This was super well-written and so on point with the wording! I really enjoyed this! I just want to point out how you elaborated on Cole being a ghost too. I've seen some other stories for when Cole is in this form, usually with bruiseshipping. Comparing to a couple others I've read with this situation, this was by far the best! I felt like I could understand Cole better and what he was feeling. It was nice to see how he struggled and overcame it, and all while you maintained the focus and ship of the story! Anyways, hope I wasn't too much of a bother. Welp, that's pretty much it. Hope you have a great day and don't forget to keep on creating! :)
2/9/2018 c1 93evelinaonline
This was so adorable, oh my god! I loved the way you portraited the characters. The idea of Jay being the reason Cole can feel again is one that always kills my heart (in a good way) and I adore it. Great job with this!
93evelinaonlineThis was so adorable, oh my god! I loved the way you portraited the characters. The idea of Jay being the reason Cole can feel again is one that always kills my heart (in a good way) and I adore it. Great job with this!
2/8/2018 c1 Guest
Noo Kai!
Noo Kai!
1/7/2018 c1 28JayandNya4evr
Holy heck this is the most beautiful thing I have ever read in my entir e! Your way with words and your way with writing their characters...it's all so magnificent and I love it sooo much!
I leave the fandom for half a month and when I come back there is just a buttload of my OTP everywhere! And I am loving it! Thank you for making me smile and my heart beat with joy! It's amazing to see these two dorks fall in love. Plus Kai is the best at the end. Hahahha :3
28JayandNya4evrHoly heck this is the most beautiful thing I have ever read in my entir e! Your way with words and your way with writing their characters...it's all so magnificent and I love it sooo much!
I leave the fandom for half a month and when I come back there is just a buttload of my OTP everywhere! And I am loving it! Thank you for making me smile and my heart beat with joy! It's amazing to see these two dorks fall in love. Plus Kai is the best at the end. Hahahha :3
12/23/2017 c1 Guest
ahhh I loved reading this. I honestly ship Jay and Cole but platonically and romantically so this was an exciting one shot for me lol. Just a bit sad that they didn’t actually kiss though :(
But still great work and can’t wait for more oneshots like this
ahhh I loved reading this. I honestly ship Jay and Cole but platonically and romantically so this was an exciting one shot for me lol. Just a bit sad that they didn’t actually kiss though :(
But still great work and can’t wait for more oneshots like this
12/21/2017 c1 20FropessionalWriter
mWeH HEH I saw this as I was in the middle of getting ready for bed... and you know me, I just had to read it right away - sucker for any kind of bruise!
Is this a oneshot? Or will it continue for a few more chapters? Either way I'm loving it! Kinda interesting how after Kai left, they acted as if 1) nothing happened and 2) it was just... natural :0
Gwah these guys are just so adorable! I love when Kai catches them in the act honestly XP
20FropessionalWritermWeH HEH I saw this as I was in the middle of getting ready for bed... and you know me, I just had to read it right away - sucker for any kind of bruise!
Is this a oneshot? Or will it continue for a few more chapters? Either way I'm loving it! Kinda interesting how after Kai left, they acted as if 1) nothing happened and 2) it was just... natural :0
Gwah these guys are just so adorable! I love when Kai catches them in the act honestly XP