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8/20/2010 c1 40Kaiser Washington
Dumb ending. The angst was building up well until you killed it all with the last line. Impromptu fluff much? I would also add that your author's notes killed some potentially poignant/well written lines. Way to ruin a story.
3/23/2003 c1 16sky75rk
umm...

...I THOUGHT YOU LIKED SENKOSH?

question..: did sen leave kosh or kosh left sen?

girl, you're breaking my heart...
3/22/2003 c1 leviathan
Not bad... I dont' normally read FujiSen, don't know what came over me today... ah well, nice one! Gambatte ne, write more!

-Levi-

(Leviathan)
3/21/2003 c1 66Kuroi Neko-kun
That was really good... [cries from over-emotion]
3/21/2003 c1 66yumeyana
yipee! senfuji! angsty but cute!

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