for The Twosome in the Time Travel8/28/2018 c6 
111GalaxieGurl
What a lovely take on that odd un-wedding, Mad Hatter type evening. The episode left the partners standing awkwardly at the altar and this is a perfect follow-up. Poor Brennan, though, when Angela returns from the non-honeymoon trip. Her best friend will want to wring every last detail of what happened in the honeymoon suite out of the scientist, and Brennan will be all "what's ours is ours, Booth says, and I agree, Angela; I can't disclose that information" much to Angela's dismay! Your chapter sparks so many possibilities in the imaginations of your readers!
111GalaxieGurlWhat a lovely take on that odd un-wedding, Mad Hatter type evening. The episode left the partners standing awkwardly at the altar and this is a perfect follow-up. Poor Brennan, though, when Angela returns from the non-honeymoon trip. Her best friend will want to wring every last detail of what happened in the honeymoon suite out of the scientist, and Brennan will be all "what's ours is ours, Booth says, and I agree, Angela; I can't disclose that information" much to Angela's dismay! Your chapter sparks so many possibilities in the imaginations of your readers!
8/26/2018 c6 jsboneslover
Very satisfying chapter!
Very satisfying chapter!
8/26/2018 c6 RobinAngelena
Greatly enjoying this alternative vision.
Greatly enjoying this alternative vision.
8/26/2018 c6 ZinaR
This was nicely done. A little more of their encounter would have been really nice though.
This was nicely done. A little more of their encounter would have been really nice though.
8/26/2018 c6 7headupheelsdown
This was perfect:
"I just wanted to tell you... it's not just biological urges. I wanted you to know that." It want an, 'I love you,' but it was the closest he could have hoped for. All he could do was kiss her again.
I think that is a perfect way for Brennan to begin to admit her romantic feelings and that you described perfectly how Booth would know the weight of a confession like that.
7headupheelsdownThis was perfect:
"I just wanted to tell you... it's not just biological urges. I wanted you to know that." It want an, 'I love you,' but it was the closest he could have hoped for. All he could do was kiss her again.
I think that is a perfect way for Brennan to begin to admit her romantic feelings and that you described perfectly how Booth would know the weight of a confession like that.
8/26/2018 c6 11doge
Thank you. I always thought something should happen after they were left standing at the altar. This was a nice chapter. Can't wait for more.
11dogeThank you. I always thought something should happen after they were left standing at the altar. This was a nice chapter. Can't wait for more.
7/24/2018 c5 MstgSzy
You have flawlessly and seamlessly woven together Bones canon, true natural behavior, and your own story about 'after' Booth and Brennan return to the main all. The result is lovely. Thank you!
You have flawlessly and seamlessly woven together Bones canon, true natural behavior, and your own story about 'after' Booth and Brennan return to the main all. The result is lovely. Thank you!
4/2/2018 c5 36perscribo
I just watched that episode! I could hear their voices in my head. Awesome chapter as usual. Wondering how many more you’re going to write. Keep it up!
36perscriboI just watched that episode! I could hear their voices in my head. Awesome chapter as usual. Wondering how many more you’re going to write. Keep it up!
3/31/2018 c5 293FaithinBones
That scene in the museum was so tense you could cut it with a knife and believe me I was furious when the squints interrupted them.
293FaithinBonesThat scene in the museum was so tense you could cut it with a knife and believe me I was furious when the squints interrupted them.