for FILFY teacher11/30/2024 c24 tylor13roney
why is harry potter pro muggles and all this looking down on everyone who does not like them or not care for them.
like name one single non magical or plain human friend harry potter has.
better yet name one normal human harry has talked to or not used oblivate in them himself.
he literally wants to hide the magically world from non magicald for as long as possible cause he knows its only a matter of time.
i swear harry potter is just like everyone else he is basical athur weasley loves to spout muggles are great but honestly does nothing to help them ir give a shit.
he does not even have any businesses or anything and just leeches of his families profits so he is just a spoilt rich kids too..
why is harry potter pro muggles and all this looking down on everyone who does not like them or not care for them.
like name one single non magical or plain human friend harry potter has.
better yet name one normal human harry has talked to or not used oblivate in them himself.
he literally wants to hide the magically world from non magicald for as long as possible cause he knows its only a matter of time.
i swear harry potter is just like everyone else he is basical athur weasley loves to spout muggles are great but honestly does nothing to help them ir give a shit.
he does not even have any businesses or anything and just leeches of his families profits so he is just a spoilt rich kids too..
11/30/2024 c24 tylor13roney
harry not thinking with his cock is a loud of bullshit he dated 2 students and kala becausenthey were hot not cause he took months to get to know them.
harry not thinking with his cock is a loud of bullshit he dated 2 students and kala becausenthey were hot not cause he took months to get to know them.
11/21/2024 c19 
28Kairan1979
I suspect the tracker Azazel put on Vali will be discovered sooner than he wants.
28Kairan1979I suspect the tracker Azazel put on Vali will be discovered sooner than he wants.
11/21/2024 c18 Kairan1979
I liked the way Lily Luna confronted Ginny. Ron siding with his sister again dodn't do himself any favors.
I liked the way Lily Luna confronted Ginny. Ron siding with his sister again dodn't do himself any favors.
11/21/2024 c15 Kairan1979
Even Gasper with his issues can't stand against the power of two determined little girls.
Even Gasper with his issues can't stand against the power of two determined little girls.
11/12/2024 c33 Samurai Seven
When will Harry gonna kill Ginny
When will Harry gonna kill Ginny
11/14/2024 c13 Kairan1979
Pleased to see the illusion worked, and Kokabiel died. Looking forward to see the fallout.
Pleased to see the illusion worked, and Kokabiel died. Looking forward to see the fallout.
11/11/2024 c33 Asurascan
Why not kill Ginny here and what's the point of keeping her alive,she's trash
Why not kill Ginny here and what's the point of keeping her alive,she's trash
11/7/2024 c33 Admiral Ackbar
“Then I realized a major issue with what I had written in terms of what needed to happen in what order, because I never want to fall into the trope of writing villains unable to react to events, so I had to rewrite segments again.”
This statement of yours explains quite a bit about your writing. While a decent goal to keep in mind, I feel that you often go too far the other direction. Making the villains in your stories more competent, and able to respond to out of context problems, than they should be. Which, truth be told, is my largest frustration with your writing, and why even though I love your premises initially, I often end up either dropping your stories, or having to come back after a few months to cool my frustration. This is the case for pretty much every story you have posted to this site.
That said, your ability to keep the characters true to their canon personalities, while still allowing them to grow as the story progresses is absolutely top notch. And the plots you weave are intriguing enough I keep coming back to your stories eventually. Most of the time anyways.
“Then I realized a major issue with what I had written in terms of what needed to happen in what order, because I never want to fall into the trope of writing villains unable to react to events, so I had to rewrite segments again.”
This statement of yours explains quite a bit about your writing. While a decent goal to keep in mind, I feel that you often go too far the other direction. Making the villains in your stories more competent, and able to respond to out of context problems, than they should be. Which, truth be told, is my largest frustration with your writing, and why even though I love your premises initially, I often end up either dropping your stories, or having to come back after a few months to cool my frustration. This is the case for pretty much every story you have posted to this site.
That said, your ability to keep the characters true to their canon personalities, while still allowing them to grow as the story progresses is absolutely top notch. And the plots you weave are intriguing enough I keep coming back to your stories eventually. Most of the time anyways.