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15h c30 ElementalMaster16
The last two chapters were amazing! I was re-reading this story so it took me quite some time to get to it, but I love the conclusion of the Egypt arc. (well, mostly concluded I guess)

It was quite interesting to see all the relief efforts, and the rather predictable ICW response.
3/3 c3 FlawedBauthor
Genuinely, how do you have fans? This is trash. You can't spell, grammar is all over the place, and no one acts like a real being. All your stories are like this.
2/18 c19 MattBlack
I hope they remember that when dealing with the Fae, iron is their greatest weakness...
2/15 c20 Sadhaka
Do a test. Look for Harry in each fight. He is either absent due to plot device or does one big thing and then disappears. The others get detailed but not Harry. Its like hes a side character.
2/15 c20 Sadhaka
So far youve saud his patronous is an owl, pheonix and now a stag.
2/15 c19 Sadhaka
If wizards are so inferior to others why did the whole Harry clan struggle with just a few?
2/14 c18 Sadhaka
The goblins try to kill them and she ends up paying them off? Also thr comment on Harry only being dangerous when he has his usekess god powers is funny. So far the story has shown all wizard magic to be weak and pointless. Harrys god powers are a joke. A sword that is weaker than the gryfgindoe one, and vague powers pointless except as plot elements.

No new magic. No learning Devil magic. No Japan magic.

Youd think you could squeeze in magic in between thousands of kid play. Especially in a story supposed to be about a wizard.
2/13 c14 Sadhaka
Harry just doesnt feel like the main character, or even a character. He cares about nothing but his family. When the book started he was super into magic, learning, creating, and practicing. Now, nothing. The story is filled with kid time with no new spells from ANY branch, hes still using kid spells from Hogwarts. Almost the entire story is him doing family time or powering up somebody. He’s just there. No goals. No ambition. No drive. No learning or growing.
2/13 c13 Sadhaka
That entire fight was irritating. All his magic was pointless. Useless. Why even learn magic? Its weak no matter wgat he does.

Why does he not use ANY devil magic? Hes gained nothing from his deal with them. They use the same spells as him without issue but he hasnt used any if there spells. The Japan magic is missing as well aside from a fire dragon that was useless.
2/13 c7 MattBlack
Sure Issei is a member of the peerage now, but scum squared still equals scum lol... He is useless, with no potential...
2/13 c6 MattBlack
It's as much a blessing as a curse if that damn emo stop to think sometime...
2/13 c6 MattBlack
Harry you idiot... Lily would always grow up, but him being long lived would allow hm to watch over their descendants...
2/13 c5 MattBlack
To see his daughter grow old and die, did he really think he would miss that? Then he planned to die young... As long as he has his partner/partners with him, seeing Lily live her life wouldn't be bad, he is an idiot if he believes she wont die... Not being alone is the key to longevity, if Flamel had not Perenelle with him, he would have given up ages ago...
2/12 c12 Sadhaka
And if course Harrys Breaker is another blade. Because blades are the height of tactical superiority.
2/12 c12 Sadhaka
Is this story about Harry or the daughters he takes in? The sheer amount of times Harry empowers, trains, or adopts a little girl makes this seem as if Harry is more plot device thsn character.

Hold on…. Breaker is stronger than ALL Harrys spells? Thats weird.
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