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7/6/2023 c9 Jose Ivan
La pelea con Deodora fue una basura y usando poderes qué nunca tubo que sigue kocabiel pelando a la par con valí solo para que Potter lo salve al final
6/28/2023 c28 213thsephiroth
I just binged 3 of your fics all are really fucking good! This is one of the most epic eventually. Can't wait for you to finish this and Magic of the Force!
6/24/2023 c28 sarnav232
Would love any update? But maybe after you edit them.
6/9/2023 c4 Korran01
it would have been hilariously awesome if Harry had seen the spear pointed at them and just accioed it into a tree or if he had just cast the vanishing charm or Evenesco and just made the spear disappear.
5/30/2023 c17 Fredward1
I’ve noticed that Harry rarely uses his ability to see auras since he first used it to look at rias and akeno’s in the beginning of the story. It would help point out members of the khaos brigade and allow him to read emotions aka intent. Feels like it got sidelined hard ever since it was first used and since then, only mentioned sort of in the new ward map.
5/30/2023 c17 Fredward1
I’ve noticed that Harry rarely uses his ability to see auras since he first used it to look at rias and akeno’s in the beginning of the story. It would help point out members of the khaos brigade and allow him to read emotions aka intent. Feels like it got sidelined hard ever since it was first used and since then, only mentioned sort of in the new ward map.
5/26/2023 c10 Fredward1
Why is he running when he can apparate to a nearby location of where the ward is saying the magic is coming from?
5/25/2023 c8 Fredward1
What’s the point of the clock if it doesn’t actually tell them when someone is immediately in danger and they aren’t around to see it or whatever cause plot? What happened to the wards that signified if Lilly was in danger on her necklace? Or maybe the ward on the girls? It’s like they never go off for Harry to respond in time. What’s the point of all this “precautions” if they don’t do shit in your story
5/25/2023 c9 Fredward1
Or just use his sword. It’s a good fight but sometimes simple is better. There’s no need for a drawn out fight when it could’ve been solved way faster
5/25/2023 c9 Fredward1
Should’ve just hit him with an AK
5/25/2023 c8 Fredward1
I just realized where this is going. Koneko is like the “daughter” of rias and akeno, Asia is the “daughter” or kala and kunou is the actual daughter of yasaka. I see you
5/25/2023 c5 Fredward1
I thought that was common knowledge. The reason that they are called unforgivables is cause they warp or affect the soul. He should’ve known that
5/24/2023 c4 Fredward1
You say that akeno is a few inches shorter than rias and rias is a few inches shorter than Harry but you said Harry is 6’9 and rias in canon is 5’8. That’s not a few inches shorter. That’s a whole foot and an inch
5/10/2023 c1 DeltaWolf2038
imagine walking into a room and seeing a werewolf that looks nothing like what you've seen before. reading a book
5/1/2023 c8 WickedOne94
Alright, "Me doth think he protest too much" annoyingly so. chapter 8
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