for FILFY teacher7/1/2024 c32 Blaze1992
How harry didn't die of blood loss when he saw those ladies at night is proof, he is far more than a mortal man anymore.
How harry didn't die of blood loss when he saw those ladies at night is proof, he is far more than a mortal man anymore.
7/1/2024 c32 mistersmeee
Love the story, but a nitpick, seeing as I'm Indian, a few chapters back, can't remember which one, you characterised Lord Ganesha as a brute force, not particularly intelligent kind of God, which is kind of completely wrong, as Lord Ganesha is not just the "remover of obstacles", he's also the god of intelligence and wisdom. Students pray to Lord Ganesha before examinations to grant them wisdom, not just to remove the obstacle that is examinations, just as an example of his worship. I would love it if the next time Harry meets Lord Shiva or Goddess Parvati, this is addressed and written off as a misunderstanding or something. Cause otherwise it's kinda offensive and lazy that you included a character without doing any basic prior research.
Love the story, but a nitpick, seeing as I'm Indian, a few chapters back, can't remember which one, you characterised Lord Ganesha as a brute force, not particularly intelligent kind of God, which is kind of completely wrong, as Lord Ganesha is not just the "remover of obstacles", he's also the god of intelligence and wisdom. Students pray to Lord Ganesha before examinations to grant them wisdom, not just to remove the obstacle that is examinations, just as an example of his worship. I would love it if the next time Harry meets Lord Shiva or Goddess Parvati, this is addressed and written off as a misunderstanding or something. Cause otherwise it's kinda offensive and lazy that you included a character without doing any basic prior research.
7/1/2024 c32 mwinter1
Some questions I have are. Since Manannan Mac Lir was the equivalent of Hades and his underworld domain was the Isle of the Blessed, did Manannan Mac Lir create an underworld in the Undertaking? If so, could they not just transfer Samuel to the new prison after creating a "Tartarus" (if one wasn't created) below that new underworld's Isle of the blessed (since as far below Hades [which is the name of the Greek god and his domain and in the underworld] as the earth is below the heavens?
Harry and Lily are the only ones that can control the tunnel. Make a magical oath on the very few not to be able to tell other's where Samuel is? Transfer Lily to Undertaking (you really need to give it a new name) and have her taught there and live there so she can not be kidnapped, as she would be more than likely give in to create a portal if a love one is pressed to die compared to Harry. Orphis doesn't care about Samuel unless I read that wrong. Just Cao-Cao or the old devil fraction.
Also wasn't Tartarus semi-ruled by Hades to keep the Titans in place? Since Hades hid
away from the God of the Bible to stay alive and kept the Titans from coming back, wouldn't they also be afraid of the Titans being released as well as Samuel? Or did the God of the Bible in your story destroy them and turn them into sacred gears as well (not much is said about that in the wiki or in the manga)?
It would be interesting to me at least that Manannan Mac Lir also created an Underworld and a new Isle of the Blessed to the Underworld of the Undertaking. So since Harry has all of Manannan Mac Lir powers, sort of, shouldn't Harry visit each Isle of the Blessed? What would that do to his power?
So as you can see lots of questions raised from this chapter, at least for me. Loved the new chapter and it was very thought provoking.
Some questions I have are. Since Manannan Mac Lir was the equivalent of Hades and his underworld domain was the Isle of the Blessed, did Manannan Mac Lir create an underworld in the Undertaking? If so, could they not just transfer Samuel to the new prison after creating a "Tartarus" (if one wasn't created) below that new underworld's Isle of the blessed (since as far below Hades [which is the name of the Greek god and his domain and in the underworld] as the earth is below the heavens?
Harry and Lily are the only ones that can control the tunnel. Make a magical oath on the very few not to be able to tell other's where Samuel is? Transfer Lily to Undertaking (you really need to give it a new name) and have her taught there and live there so she can not be kidnapped, as she would be more than likely give in to create a portal if a love one is pressed to die compared to Harry. Orphis doesn't care about Samuel unless I read that wrong. Just Cao-Cao or the old devil fraction.
Also wasn't Tartarus semi-ruled by Hades to keep the Titans in place? Since Hades hid
away from the God of the Bible to stay alive and kept the Titans from coming back, wouldn't they also be afraid of the Titans being released as well as Samuel? Or did the God of the Bible in your story destroy them and turn them into sacred gears as well (not much is said about that in the wiki or in the manga)?
It would be interesting to me at least that Manannan Mac Lir also created an Underworld and a new Isle of the Blessed to the Underworld of the Undertaking. So since Harry has all of Manannan Mac Lir powers, sort of, shouldn't Harry visit each Isle of the Blessed? What would that do to his power?
So as you can see lots of questions raised from this chapter, at least for me. Loved the new chapter and it was very thought provoking.
7/1/2024 c32 desropter
Fantastic chapter! You breath so much reality into a fiction world that it is simply breathtaking. Before this i never thought the world of DxD and Harry Potter to be that good of a pairing. Most fics simply threw Harry into DxD with an upgrade but you used the lore of Harry Potter to actualy make him relevant in DxD. For a long time i was of the opinion that the power levels are just to different for a "realistic" combination and Sacred Gears were a route so common that they are boring to read.
(Mostly because for some reason there is rarely a fic where a different Sacred Gear is used. I get that Dividing/ Boosted Gear are cool but so are the other Longinus! All High Tier Longinus have some of the coolest abilities in fantasy universes and are only "nerved" in canon because either the author needed easy enemies, or because the user were simply to stupid to use them. Well that and plot protection... honestly Issei was hit by True Longinus multiple times and just survives when he was not even close to Satan-class. Correct me if i'm wrong but dosn't the wiki say that True Longinus instantly kills even ultimate-class devils?)
Fantastic chapter! You breath so much reality into a fiction world that it is simply breathtaking. Before this i never thought the world of DxD and Harry Potter to be that good of a pairing. Most fics simply threw Harry into DxD with an upgrade but you used the lore of Harry Potter to actualy make him relevant in DxD. For a long time i was of the opinion that the power levels are just to different for a "realistic" combination and Sacred Gears were a route so common that they are boring to read.
(Mostly because for some reason there is rarely a fic where a different Sacred Gear is used. I get that Dividing/ Boosted Gear are cool but so are the other Longinus! All High Tier Longinus have some of the coolest abilities in fantasy universes and are only "nerved" in canon because either the author needed easy enemies, or because the user were simply to stupid to use them. Well that and plot protection... honestly Issei was hit by True Longinus multiple times and just survives when he was not even close to Satan-class. Correct me if i'm wrong but dosn't the wiki say that True Longinus instantly kills even ultimate-class devils?)
7/1/2024 c32 frankieu
nice chapter thx for writing it
fun seeing some of the fallout landing :d
interesting cop out from the magical world putting harry in charge
nice chapter thx for writing it
fun seeing some of the fallout landing :d
interesting cop out from the magical world putting harry in charge
7/1/2024 c23 KayBiJay
Hermione is so annoying. Also hate Harry just letting himself be treated like this is frustrating.
Hermione is so annoying. Also hate Harry just letting himself be treated like this is frustrating.
6/13/2024 c31 
1nathnathn
Thanks for the great chapter glad to finally get to it after being buried in RL stuff for the last month or so.
1nathnathnThanks for the great chapter glad to finally get to it after being buried in RL stuff for the last month or so.
6/2/2024 c31 Samurai seven
I'm still weirded out that you made harry marry ginny seriously in the beginning of your story, I'm pretty sure harry has a repressed rage against the fools and morons and death eaters or trashs of britain and yet married him to ginny what the heck author and will harry finish the issues with the himejimas
I'm still weirded out that you made harry marry ginny seriously in the beginning of your story, I'm pretty sure harry has a repressed rage against the fools and morons and death eaters or trashs of britain and yet married him to ginny what the heck author and will harry finish the issues with the himejimas
6/3/2024 c4 succubus.incubus
so im hust wondering in earlier chapters you claim that due to the werewolf curse boosting his growth that harry is 6'9 and that what ive been going with but on their trip to kyoto you claim that the minoaur girl is short coming up to Harry's chest making her shorter than akeno and rias and i know for fact they cant be anywhere close to 6'9
so im hust wondering in earlier chapters you claim that due to the werewolf curse boosting his growth that harry is 6'9 and that what ive been going with but on their trip to kyoto you claim that the minoaur girl is short coming up to Harry's chest making her shorter than akeno and rias and i know for fact they cant be anywhere close to 6'9
5/31/2024 c31 Blaze1992
Damn dragons Earth will become lesser cause of this.
Good to know no zealots showed up in this CH.
Damn dragons Earth will become lesser cause of this.
Good to know no zealots showed up in this CH.